thanks for the kind comments and 'likes'
I'm (sort of) glad it's not just me with these old age aches and pains ??
thanx for the tip Nicola ?
yes - MC - it was a deliberate 'lift' of that part of the lyric from 'Shaking All Over' ?
Ian
Comment is about Aching All Over (blog)
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Robert Haigh
Fri 11th Sep 2020 14:00
Well-articulated and poetic. A poem expressing hope, for all who care to read. A good write.
Comment is about Pigeons (blog)
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Robert Haigh
Fri 11th Sep 2020 13:40
Music means so much to so many people. I am an amateur musician and singer, and music is a big part of my life. Music and poetry are related, artistically - they are like brother and sister. A bitter-sweet poem, but ultimately an uplifting one. Well penned. ?
Comment is about Beautiful Dreams (blog)
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<Deleted User> (24283)
Fri 11th Sep 2020 11:49
Go got it so right Keith. A mind of a poet can read between emotions and feelings. Thank you?
Comment is about Do you? (blog)
Message received and understood. Painful days in so many ways.
Comment is about Guilty (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Ah...bromide in the tea. i remember those days well! And are the
sheep still running for cover in those blue remembered hills? ?
Comment is about Feline Grace (blog)
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Robert Haigh
Fri 11th Sep 2020 09:02
An interesting and inventive write. We all need to do (or try) things beyond our comfort zone sometimes.
Comment is about If I could Walk On Stilts (blog)
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Nicola Beckett
Fri 11th Sep 2020 08:52
Robert Haigh
Fri 11th Sep 2020 08:45
Thank you, Vautaw, for your welcome to WOL message. I've read your sample poem, which I find inventive and engaging. I'll be back soon to read more of your work.
Comment is about Vautaw (poet profile)
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Poems hub
Fri 11th Sep 2020 08:36
This is beautifully sweet. A visit to your loveliest soul within you. Keep writing for we crave for more.?
Comment is about Electric (blog)
Original item by Eric Berard
Poems hub
Fri 11th Sep 2020 08:35
I can feel that positivity within me. Let your positive self grow beautifully and let those emotions develop slowly. At the end of the road you will find the garden of warmth finally.?
Comment is about Overwhelming Light (blog)
Original item by Eric Berard
Poems hub
Fri 11th Sep 2020 08:33
What a beautiful piece of work here! I like the way you let out your soft sweet emotions over the page to create magical colours of feelings reaching the right eye. Keep writing. ?
Comment is about The Calm (blog)
Original item by Eric Berard
Thanks for the like Stephen.
Comment is about The Rule Of Six (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Nicola Beckett
Fri 11th Sep 2020 04:20
Such a peaceful poem. Gives hope that love will rule the world someday. ❤️??
Comment is about The Calm (blog)
Original item by Eric Berard
Mr Swan
the dentist
found yellow
chewing gum
lodged tight
pulled it
out with
giant pliers
used toothpaste
from that
day on.
Comment is about Consequences Part 5 and 6 (blog)
Original item by Andy N
Kevin T.S. Tan
Thu 10th Sep 2020 23:08
it sucks to bully and it sucks to be bullied. but reading poems about it is quite enjoyable
Comment is about Big Lad (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Kevin T.S. Tan
Thu 10th Sep 2020 22:59
and life sometimes is light-hearted like this poem ?
Comment is about LIFE IS (blog)
Original item by Thomas Dooley
Thanks Emer as always for the like. Big fan of your work, so great you like this (:
Comment is about Consequences Part 3 and 4 (blog)
Original item by Andy N
Thanks Nigel, these do get a bit mad doing them in the workshop but it adds to the fun at the end of the night (:
Comment is about Consequences Part 3 and 4 (blog)
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Thanks Nigel, think that would almost go with the sequence there (:
Comment is about Underground (Part 7 to 12) (blog)
Original item by Andy N
Thanks Martin and Nigel - am enjoying writing these, much admit (:
Comment is about Underground Part 13 to 15 (blog)
Original item by Andy N
Kevin T.S. Tan
Thu 10th Sep 2020 22:45
I really like twisted and perverted poetry.
Comment is about Who is the bully? (blog)
Original item by Alexandra K. Parapadakis
Good to see you posting again Alexandra.
Comment is about Who is the bully? (blog)
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Paul, Brian, Stephen, Abdul, Flavia and Robert,
Thank you for reading this poem and commenting on it. Much appreciated.
Keith
Comment is about Shake off the Dust (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Robert Haigh
Thu 10th Sep 2020 20:14
Well said. The last two lines give the poem extra clout!
Comment is about Shake off the Dust (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Robert Haigh
Thu 10th Sep 2020 20:07
A well-worked, dark-themed "nursery nightmare." The fat cats run the game (in government and in business) at the expense of us all. Power rules, as it always has done, and the greedy "elite" are always wanting more. Well penned.
Comment is about A Pocket Full Of Rye (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
<Deleted User> (18980)
Thu 10th Sep 2020 19:35
Sir Stephen...it's got a good ring about it.
Comment is about Honours System (blog)
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Nicola Beckett
Thu 10th Sep 2020 16:01
Like a song again.......
Comment is about STRANGER THAN FICTION (blog)
Original item by cindylee loucks
Hey Brian - I trust she survived the shock!?
Comment is about A REMINDER TO BLM (blog)
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Ah thank you Neressa, Flavia, Stephen, Julie, Victoria and Jordyn for the likes. You've made my day. ?
And Jordyn and Victoria, thank you for the encouraging comments. I was in two minds about sharing this poem so it's doubly rewarding to hear that you enjoyed. ?
Comment is about Bury Me At Sea (blog)
Original item by Tom
Martin,
Thank you for this. It reminds me of those final moments as we drift into sleep, our last thoughts and the sense of awareness as we enter that blissful state.
Keith
Comment is about Remember (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
<Deleted User> (18980)
Thu 10th Sep 2020 09:01
I helped an eldery, white, middle class, heterosexual woman across the road last week....anyone interested?
Comment is about A REMINDER TO BLM (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
As you say sadly all too often these stories are all to readily lost
Comment is about A REMINDER TO BLM (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
I love the line 'aimed at my thoughts' in particular.
Wonderful stuff
Comment is about Impulse (blog)
Original item by mentalelf. Philk.
Very very very nice. A wonderful exposition of love
love it
Comment is about Love (blog)
Original item by Destiny
Sea Green,
an interesting poem seeking reassurance in love. Are our feelings reciprocated? A familiar quest in most relationships. In this poem you have written from the heart and in so doing introduced the reader to the reality of a dilema faced by most us. Thank you for this
Keith
Comment is about Do you? (blog)
Thu 10th Sep 2020 04:34
This is Beautiful ❤️ I enjoyed reading.
-J
Comment is about Bury Me At Sea (blog)
Original item by Tom
Ginger hair smart jacket
skinny legs lets his fingers run
silk black tights ruined.
Comment is about Underground Part 13 to 15 (blog)
Original item by Andy N
I hope that very soon the whole world will realise that every life matters.
Comment is about A REMINDER TO BLM (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Thanks Greg for the like. yes unfortunately it will probably be Aldi and salad shopping due to the over spending and over eating. But what else are holidays for?
Comment is about Market Day (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
There’s definitely a few more verses to be added. Paul I think the NHS quote would fit in very well.
Comment is about The Hokey Cokey (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Thanks very much Greg, Paul, Stephen and sea.green for the comments and likes. Wasn’t too sure about this post but pleased it raised a smile or two.
Comment is about The Hokey Cokey (blog)
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<Deleted User> (24283)
Wed 9th Sep 2020 18:09
Thank you dear Po. Not from you either??
Comment is about I, Me, Myself (blog)
ZTK Space
Fri 11th Sep 2020 15:03
Paul, I have just tried twice to gain an email from the site to verify my account.
No joy, no email rx'd.
I have just seen footage of Dr Miskovitz reference virus's.
If you get the chance, can you go on and place the following statement/question.
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I was Forces in Kenya in mid eighties. while there, Malindi alone had 70% of the inhabitants of Malinid had Aids/HIV. While there, INT services stated that there 'is' an animal form of Aids/HIV that would see the animal population reduce to 15% of current figures. That was in the 80's. I have since then understood certain parameters of this condition and our whole humanoid expreince. What I know, is the Globacl complicity in silencing the truth in this. They are not having more sex in equatorial Africa, they are disseminating this manmade condition via The Mosquito. While there, not far from Nanyuki, I often saw the dial at midday of the temp gauge hit 50 degrees celsius. Our human body expresses life support temp at 36.6 degrees celsius. Aids/HIV is said to not exist outside the human body. But, the mosquito, lands on you. It punctures you skin with its proboscos, vomits the remnants of the last victim into your bloodstream, before sucking your blood and then moving on. The blood of human is now in the proboscus, it is not in the air. If the temp is considerately close to 37 degrees celsius, the the Aids/HIV will survive with no exposure to outside air. It is, if anything incubated in the mosquito as the mosquito temperature replicates what the temperature of the air in the region. Just to understand your authenticity in what you say Dr Miskovitz, can you confirm the research into the mosquito and associated conditions of Aids/HIV in equatorial regions of Africa?
//
Thank you.
I am being channeled where I am and I am being raped.
I don't know it at the time, but feel afterwards certain trauma. I add that they have been shitting on me for some years and all, all I do is being monitored, or filtered.
Best wishes
Comment is about Who Would You Give The Library (blog)
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