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Rasa Kabaila

Sat 3rd Jul 2021 11:39

Julie! This is lovely. Your poem made me giggle and smile. It is a unique quality to be able to tell a lovely story in a special way in few words-and you have got that quality. ?

Keep smiling.
Best wishes,
Rasa

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kJ Walker

Sat 3rd Jul 2021 09:54

I just love your dulcet tones.
I must have missed this story.
I take it that Hancock has been caught up to no good.

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Greg Freeman

Sat 3rd Jul 2021 08:58

You can certainly add 'galloway' to the list, Stephen. Originally from Scotland, has been found in Iraq, cultivated by Russia. Extremely toxic.

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Crimaldi

Fri 2nd Jul 2021 17:43

Personally I prefer North face or Berghaus

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Fri 2nd Jul 2021 16:26

There's always an obnoxious minority on each side of the divide.

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Ian Whiteley

Fri 2nd Jul 2021 15:16

thanks for the wonderfully kind comments - I'm glad and sad it struck a chord.
It is a chilling topic Ray - I think a lot of us feel it as we grow older.
And yes John - much more fight still to come ?
thanks to everyone for the comments and 'likes' I appreciate it ?
Ian

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 2nd Jul 2021 12:54

And a booster jab yesterday from the same Mark Cavendish!
I felt even better for this second treatment.

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d.knape

Fri 2nd Jul 2021 09:21

Godspeed Gospage.
or is it
Charley Bishop?

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d.knape

Fri 2nd Jul 2021 09:19

I don't have a "Profile" photo. ha. ha.
So draw a mustache Here:

( a box with a mustache )



?

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julie callaghan

Thu 1st Jul 2021 19:38

Thank you for the like and kind comment Stephen G. I actually got a but emotional watching clips of her earlier.

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raypool

Thu 1st Jul 2021 18:38

Rudyard, Ghazal, Aviva and Holden, very nice that you liked this!

Thank you Martin. I often wonder if singers are reborn as birds!

Well spotted Stephen (unintentional).
Just also to say I thought your profile samples were excellent, right to the point....

Ray

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 1st Jul 2021 17:40

You're too kind. Don't forget the health warning!

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 1st Jul 2021 17:26

Maybe half a wit is better than none.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 1st Jul 2021 17:23

Applies equally well to the PM, especially the non-native and popping up. I guess the list is endless.....

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 1st Jul 2021 17:20

Very well put, Julie.

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Greg Freeman

Thu 1st Jul 2021 15:45

Thanks for your observations, MC and Stephen. I've looked up 'farage' and it is described as a pernicious weed, non-native, and likely to pop up in unexpected places. Throwing milkshakes over it does not eradicate it.

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d.knape

Thu 1st Jul 2021 12:09

Your house may be empty
but no need to be grumpy-
The silence that be
filled now with poetry!
?

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d.knape

Thu 1st Jul 2021 11:38

The wisdom of Stephen.
The gospel of Gospage!
?

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Diondria McLean

Thu 1st Jul 2021 03:13

I just read your poem and related to it well. Enjoyed it.❤❤

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Nigel Astell

Thu 1st Jul 2021 01:05

Thanks for your likes
Holden
Stephen G
Aviva
and
Your Royal Poetess.

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John Coopey

Wed 30th Jun 2021 21:46

Indeed, Stephen. I’m grateful my misdemeanors were pre-CCTV and not recoded for posterity.
And thanks for the Like, Aviva.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 30th Jun 2021 21:44

Does a mirror tell us the future, the present, or the past?
In this poem it does all of that and more.

While pondering mirrors, I realised.

If a mirror ahead of us could show the future
And a mirror behind us could show the past
Then we seeing that, between two such mirrors, would realise
That the future is nothing without the past.
And the past is nothing without the future.

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Nicola Beckett

Wed 30th Jun 2021 20:43

Or your phone i hate losing my phone too xx you are right

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gerald greene

Wed 30th Jun 2021 18:13

Is this the correct way to respond to a comment? I'm new here and am not sure.

Yes, all judges differ, and matching poetry to audience and judge is no simple task.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 30th Jun 2021 17:58

'Three little maids' in the first three lines?

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 30th Jun 2021 17:56

Excellent, John. I suppose 'Caught in the Act' is another way of putting it. All the world's a stage - it certainly is when there's CCTV in your office.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 30th Jun 2021 17:26

Well done for slipping in Nigel at the end, Greg. That really does require a health warning. Maybe there is no known antidote.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 30th Jun 2021 17:18

This sums perfectly up a disturbing, nagging fear. A feeling of powerlessness.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 30th Jun 2021 17:12

Thanks for your kind comment, Greg. It's a scary thought and I certainly hope that those times don't return. I suppose that the military should stick to doing what their good at, although I'm not sure what that is exactly. Make love not war, perhaps, at least metaphorically speaking.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 30th Jun 2021 14:38

Poisons have antidotes, of course. And yesterday, there was the
injection of a fine stage win by Mark Cavendish in the legendary
sporting event known worldwide as the Tour de France. A come
back that made for a most welcome sporting "double" at this stressful time.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 30th Jun 2021 14:24

All competitions are subjective in their outcome. Those judging
them are essentially seeking what they themselves look for or
prefer to see as "poetry". One might see them in a literary
sense as "the lottery of strife". Putting a contentious topic into
words in the way shown here is itself a style of form and content
and does its job well (subjectively speaking, of course). ?.

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Wed 30th Jun 2021 12:30

Hello and welcome Gerald. Thank you for posting your wonderful writings on this site. They are of such an amazing, delightful and inspirational quality.

Leon

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julie callaghan

Wed 30th Jun 2021 10:11

Thank you for the gift. I have re homed some of your words?

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John Coopey

Wed 30th Jun 2021 10:04

Give over, Ian. There’s fight in us yet.
One of your best.

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John Coopey

Wed 30th Jun 2021 09:52

Thanks, Greg.
And thanks for the Like, Ghazala.

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Bindu Trigunayak

Wed 30th Jun 2021 08:06

Thanks a lot...It's my pleasure to have your praises...
am grateful and blessed to have a great teacher like you...
Much love and Warm Regards
Bindu

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Greg Freeman

Wed 30th Jun 2021 07:55

Very incisive work, Stephen. I think you've sneaked this one under the 'culture war' barbed wire. Hits the mark like something from the 1930s. We may be living in those times again.

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Greg Freeman

Wed 30th Jun 2021 07:51

Top of your game here, John.

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Ghazala lari

Tue 29th Jun 2021 22:12

Hi Bindu



I'm glad you remember my b-day. Thank you so much for such a priceless gift. I've never received anything more beautiful than this till today. I'm deeply touched by your lovely words.

You are indeed a good student a teacher could ever have.

God bless you and your daughter. Be safe n happy always.



Love n peace

Ghazala.

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raypool

Tue 29th Jun 2021 20:16

There's a chill running through this Ian, which I for one recognize in my own musings. Personally I have found the round ball of age has been given a kicking towards some celestial goal - a dislocation on many levels. I know I have altered in subtle and not so subtle ways - so thanks for expressing this. And - I hope you are well in any case. The poem really has a resonance that puts it in a class of its own.

Ray

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Andy N

Tue 29th Jun 2021 20:07

Hi Martin. Err, yeah I thought that regarding reading it as soon as I finished it but means tons to me you enjoyed it.

My friend Ben is a terrific photographer and a few of his photographs are really calling out to me at the moment so i think they'll be a few more yet.

Thanks Holden for the like also.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 29th Jun 2021 17:21

I am so glad you enjoyed it, Martin, and thanks to everyone else who liked this poem.

It's a bit of an oddball effort, but as I read it again, I am quite pleased with the element of menace at the end.

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Brian Hodgkinson

Tue 29th Jun 2021 17:13

Ghazala, very true -- thank you

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Ghazala lari

Tue 29th Jun 2021 16:29

True love never dies.....such pure sentiments?

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Ghazala lari

Tue 29th Jun 2021 16:26

Flashback of what perfection once was. Those were the days my friend! I liked the theme of your poem. Realistic write.?

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Ian Whiteley

Tue 29th Jun 2021 14:41

thanks for the comment Julie - fully booked up this year ?
Thanks to everyone for the 'likes' - I appreciate it ?

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John Coopey

Tue 29th Jun 2021 13:23

Quite, MC. Although I can’t help but smell a whiff of hypocrisy among us. I find it hard to believe that we have all followed all the restrictions all the time. His hypocrisy, though, is that he makes the restrictions,
And thanks for the Likes, Julie and Holden.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 29th Jun 2021 12:13

For a telling observation on a contemporary scandal, as might be expected from this source - and just as another song puts it: no one does it better! Good one JC.
Mr Hancock has gone from Hyland to low land! Talk about a
political kiss-off!!

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Tom

Tue 29th Jun 2021 11:40

Jennifer, thanks for reading ? So pleased this story resonates with others too. Got to cherish those times and reflect on them from time to time.

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Ghazala lari

Tue 29th Jun 2021 07:25

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