Lunar Eclipse

Mon 25th Jul 2022 09:09

Once again thank you for liking my latest poem "Malus Ivius". Its much appreciated!

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Lunar Eclipse

Mon 25th Jul 2022 09:09

Once again thank you for liking my latest poem "Malus Ivius". Its much appreciated!

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John Marks

Mon 25th Jul 2022 00:47

Thanks Stephen.

There is but one truly serious philosophical problem and that is suicide.

Albert Camus

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John Coopey

Sun 24th Jul 2022 21:53

Mine was no fit-up, MC. I was banged to rights.

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Holden Moncrieff

Sun 24th Jul 2022 21:39

Thank you so much, Carol and Stephen, for your lovely and encouraging comments, I am extremely grateful! 😊

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raypool

Sun 24th Jul 2022 21:29

Many thanks to Frederick, Dean, Kevin, Stephen,and Holden for your likes.

Thanks Stephen, frustrated of Farnham that's me.

Telboy, what a good idea, i'll tell my wife before she leaves home.

Ray

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 24th Jul 2022 20:42

JC-It seems apt if your generation demands a return to a long playing record!!! Top of the Fit (up) Parade?

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Tom

Sun 24th Jul 2022 18:31

Thanks to you - Frederick, Rudyard, Holden, Stephen and K Lynn for taking the time to read and hit the like button. Much appreciated 😃

I've also added an audio reading for this one - which only seems to appear on my profile for some reason.

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John Coopey

Sun 24th Jul 2022 17:13

Strewth, MC! I’ve just googled it and it seems I was exonerated after a year from the offending! Where’s the justice in that? I demand my criminal record back. What about my street cred? What about my rights? WOL should start a movement, “COOPS IS GUILTY. WADDA WE WANT? JUSTICE. WHEN DO WE WANT IT? BACKDATED AND UNTIL 2052”.

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Lunar Eclipse

Sun 24th Jul 2022 16:38

Thank you for leaving a like on my poem! 😃

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 24th Jul 2022 15:20

During my time on the beat at Limehouse in 1960s Docklands here in The Smoke, we had our share of weekend incidents of
this sort, with the venues being popular Chinese restaurants
of the time that attracted visitors from near and far, often after
an evening at one of the area's very busy well-known pubs.
You may have been lucky. The restaurant staff of which i speak were not averse to seizing meat cleavers and anything else
that came to hand in their angry pursuit of those they said
sought to avoid payment. It could be something of a trial (if you'll pardon the expression) separating those concerned and restoring order before deciding who was worth nicking.
It was The Rehabilitation of Offenders Act that allowed for
the creation of "spent convictions" for specified offences,
one of the more sensible pieces of legislation to get passed
in Parliament...

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 24th Jul 2022 14:56

A compelling poem. Your points are made, loud and clear.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 24th Jul 2022 14:52

A very moving, entertaining poem, Martin.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 24th Jul 2022 14:46

A fantastic poem, Holden. The opening reminded me of melting clocks in surrealist painting, which are both comforting and disturbing.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 24th Jul 2022 14:40

Thanks for your kind support, John, which I always appreciate.

KJ - I think you have said it all. As Spike Milligan said:
"Young men they were, young men they stay;
But why did we send them away, away?"

Thanks once again.

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John Coopey

Sun 24th Jul 2022 10:03

I should have been with you that night, Kevin. We’d have made the perfect team.
And thanks for the Like, Carol.

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kJ Walker

Sun 24th Jul 2022 09:26

A friend of mine got the sack from his job as a toilet cleaner.
He was always sticking his nose into other people's business.

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kJ Walker

Sun 24th Jul 2022 09:22

I once paid for my meal, then left without eating it. Does that count?

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kJ Walker

Sun 24th Jul 2022 09:12

Does the title refer to Marfens syndrome?

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kJ Walker

Sun 24th Jul 2022 08:50

A good point, well made.
There has been many atrocities and war crimes carried out by the Russian forces in Ukraine.
But on the whole they are young people forced into a situation which they never asked for, and don't understand.
What they are doing is unforgivable, but they are only the puppets.

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Sun 24th Jul 2022 02:23

Very interesting!

'to tame our confusion
with the illusion
of reason and rhyme,
a comforting chime' ~ worthy of reading quite a few times!
I like your poem very much Holden. 👍

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Sun 24th Jul 2022 01:26

😂 Very good!

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John Marks

Sun 24th Jul 2022 00:14

Thank you all. I am very grateful for your kindness and support.

Ensanguining the skies
How heavily it dies
Into the west away;
Past touch and sight and sound
Not further to be found,
How hopeless under ground
Falls the remorseful day.

A.E. Housman, A Shropshire Lad

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Greg Freeman

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 23:20

We probably will be, John. Over and over again ...

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John Botterill

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 22:15

Well, we won't be fooled again, Greg. Or will we?!? 😏

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John Botterill

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 22:10

I agree with Stephen. Superb poem, Stephen.

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Telboy

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 18:51

I suppose the answer is to not make surfaces truly horizontal. Sounds daft? Well you started it Ray! 😀

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John Botterill

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 18:44

Thanks so much Stephen A and Stephen G. Glad you both enjoyed it Happy I made you smile Stephen A and, yes, Stephen G, I stole the last two lines from Larkin! (or coined a phrase haha) 😂

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 16:51

Never was a truer word spoken, Ray.

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John Coopey

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 16:42

You were lucky, Stephen. Impersonating Jeffrey Archer is a far more heinous crime than doing a runner.
And thanks for the Likes, Holden and Frederick.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 16:30

This a beautiful, subtle poem, John, with a universal final message. (Perhaps from Hull?).

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 16:16

The things we learn on this blog, John. It reminds me of Alan Partridge trying to steal a traffic cone, but I think he got away with it.
I was once almost arrested after being mistaken for Jeffrey Archer in a shopping centre.......

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 16:08

Thanks for your kind words, Stephen, and for your verse, Nigel, which just about sums it all up. Thanks.

And my thanks to Frederick, Dean, Julie, Holden and K Lynn for liking this piece.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 10:08

Certainly, the "eaterie" seems a frequent venue in gangland
murders. Perhaps it's the feeling there is a certainty the intended victim will be there and their "guard" may be down,
allowing the job to be done. In Galante's case, I recall that he was eating in an area behind and beyond the indoor section of that particular Italian restaurant and that his
assailants shot him there. Others have been disposed of in the
process of arriving (or leaving?) such a venue. Even the film "The Godfather" used a restaurant setting for the scene
of Michael Corleone (Al Pacino) shooting the corrupt police officer played by Sterling Hayden. The practice doesn't reflect well on fabled Italian hospitality!!.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 09:55

Or the positioning of the predatory politically employed as they
jockey for power?

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Stephen Atkinson

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 09:51

One of those poems where you find yourself smiling at the end 😁
Lovely stuff, John 🌈

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Stephen Atkinson

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 09:47

An excellent piece, John. Beautifully written 🌈

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John Coopey

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 09:10

Thanks for the Likes, Holden, Stephen A, Stephen G and Frederick.

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kJ Walker

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 08:24

Loved this.
A couple of years ago we were getting up to four hedgehogs at a time coming into the garden.
Now we have new neighbours with tidy gardens, and we only get the odd one.
Still a joy to see.

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kJ Walker

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 08:16

It's childhood experiences... And your upbringing that mold you and make you the person you become.
I was brought up in a household where drink was always present.
I wouldn't say it did me no harm, but I wouldn't be who I am today if not for it.
I try to make a positive out of a negative.

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John Botterill

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 07:43

And it could have been dyed, Dean... 😂

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K. Lynn

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 05:40

I try, Stephen, but most of the time I'm grumpy when I write. And when I try to be optimistic or write Three Good Things, I sound unbalanced. Maybe I'll try to write some lighthearted satire to see how that goes.

Thanks everyone, for reading.

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Sat 23rd Jul 2022 03:41

Wow! There's a gentle rocking within your words. I particularly like:
'A song in a minor key, a longing to be whole and free,
And to roll away the stone from me.'
Beautifully composed.

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John Botterill

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 03:41

Thanks so much for your lovely comments Nigel and Holden. 😊 It means a great deal to me. 👍

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Holden Moncrieff

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 02:47

A really heart-warming poem, John, and every line rings true! 😊

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Holden Moncrieff

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 02:35

A truly beautiful poem, John, with an atmospheric, almost mystical quality to it! 🌷

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Nigel Astell

Fri 22nd Jul 2022 20:50

I always find time to read your poetry John.

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Nigel Astell

Fri 22nd Jul 2022 20:45

The older the lover
the harder to prove
better to stop now
before shame catches up.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 22nd Jul 2022 20:09

JC - I assume you refer to the "campaign" by family and friends of
eponymous East End blagger in the "George Davis is innocent,
OK" escapades - digging up and spreading oil on sacrosanct
test cricket pitches. He was released (but not pardoned) in 1976
and in 1978 was caught in the act by the Flying Squad when
another taking part in another "across the pavement" job near the BBC here in central London. There was a memorable press photo
of him being pinned face down on the pavement by his captors.
I don't recall the caption but it didn't include the words "innocent,
OK" 😃

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 22nd Jul 2022 18:36

Aahh mankind! See if you can even it out with the good that we do... Not an easy task! 🌈

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