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Daniel Hooks

Sun 4th Oct 2009 21:19

thankyou janet andy and steve i will definatetly never let my love die!

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Donna Marie Beck

Sun 4th Oct 2009 21:09

You sound like someone who likes to create other worlds,
Donna

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Joshua Van-Cook

Sun 4th Oct 2009 20:48

Thanks for your comments on both "Losing Interest" and "Texting". Your views on language and mine seem to coincide quite a bit. However, I am slightly confused to the reference to "Brave New World" By Aldous Huxley when it was Nineteen Eighty-Four that I was referencing in "Texting". If you could clarify on that, I would appreciate it. Thanks,

- Josh

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Donna Marie Beck

Sun 4th Oct 2009 20:37

Hey,
i like Poison Smile, sounds as if it was someone you know..?
Donna

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garside

Sun 4th Oct 2009 19:46

Hi Cynthia

I am humbled

steve x

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 4th Oct 2009 16:55

Will get back - really like this - brave new world, en't it?

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steve mellor

Sun 4th Oct 2009 12:11

Forgot to say, have you read Graham Buchan's wonderful poem 'Gaudi etc' on his profile.
Much more like the kind of love I know
Bye again
Steve M.

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steve mellor

Sun 4th Oct 2009 12:01

Hi Nicky
No worries, I was already at the ha-ha stage.
I was beginning to think the 'farewells' were trying to outdo Frank Sinatra's comebacks and farewell concerts.
Only joking E.
Steve M.
:-))))

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steve mellor

Sun 4th Oct 2009 10:38

Hello Graham
I'm not sure if I'm a 'we' but your comment brought your name/profile to my attention, and I wanted to say how much I enjoyed My Gaudi House. I thought it absolutely brilliant.
Perhaps it's closer to my ideas of the expression of love.
Steve M.

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Sun 4th Oct 2009 00:30

I loved nearly nine... "re-seeding my memories" really struck me. Thank you for your comments on my poetry, glad your enjoyed it. With love x

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Sun 4th Oct 2009 00:09

Hi Neil, thanks for the comments. Yes the poems are quite dark and the images are intended to be somewhat painful, but hopefully this gives them depth. Thank you for the comments, hope you found my writing interesting. Enjoyed reading yours as well. x

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steve mellor

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 19:45

Hi Nicky
I have to smile. I must have contributed the least amount to the Ernesto debate, but he's left a 'comment' on my Profile (and Neil West's) saying that we'' both be surprised at November's POTM, which, presumably, he still gets to choose.
I just thought it odd that Neil and I are chosen for the comment
Have a lovely weekend
Steve M.
:-))))

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steve mellor

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 19:37

Hi Isobel
I doubt you've seen it, but Ernesto has left a little message on my Profile page, and Neil West's, saying that we'll be surprised at next month's POTM
For some reason the kack seems to have been spread in our direction. How did that come about?
A gentle soul like moi
Speak soon
Steve M.

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steve mellor

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 19:31

Hi Cynthia
Thanks for the line. I'm glad I stayed as well. I don't comment much, but I do love reading other peoples work.
Keep well
Steve M.
:-)))

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ian leslie

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 17:40

Love it. Good seeing you at The Tudor. Get in touch if you want me to take part in the near future.
All the best! Ian.

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Nichola Burrows

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 16:46

Hi Cynthia, thanks for commenting. Yes there is a significance in the 'pearl' stitch, very astute of you as always, the type of stitch chosen is as important as the fact that she was knitting. Does that make sense?

Hope you are well
Nicky x

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 16:33

Superb poem. Enough to tantalize; insufficient to satisfy. Makes you want more works from the writer because the 'mind' behind the poem is interesting.
Is there significance in the 'pearl stitch' itself by definition? I can't believe that choice of title is casual.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 16:26

You are so funny, Steve. I'm really glad you came on to the site, and decided to stay. It now wouldn't be the same without you.

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winston plowes

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 15:36

Hi Marianne,
Well to be fair John Darwin pointed me towards this one (I had missed it whilst on hols). Last year I watched a manga film called Elfin Leid. I had never seen anything like this. It was shocking / graphic / bloody and disturbing and affected me a great deal. I found it hard to believe such a strong impression was made by essentially, a cartoon. Now, your poem here has done the same with simply words... stunned. Win

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 15:26

You have a major point. Even as young as you are, technology is outstripping your own experience, and a new language is emerging, make no mistake. But it is robotic, lacking in beauty. So, the definition of 'beauty' has to change - once again in 2009. Thank goodness the idea of 'beauty' is adaptable, like people.

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Deborah Jordan Bailey

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 15:14

HI Jeff,
thank you : ))
I fully intended going to your gig tonight at the stubbin' but I'm still in the Dales. I haven't found anywhere to stop in Heb yet. Am down next week for Uni, staying with a friend so maybe see you at WOL? I hope the gig goes well and am sorry I can't make it.Deb x

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 12:04

Joshua, since you enjoy scholarship in its most magnificent sense, take care with spelling and grammar as you go on. I know song-writing sets its own rules, as does, sometimes, poetry too. But you are so talented, go for the highest ideals possible and be a future poet laureate, if the honour still exists some years down the line. At any rate, go for FAMOUS.

By the way, 'fuck' should be FUCK, an acronym for the legal term: ' For Unlawful Carnal Knowledge'. Please correct me if I'm wrong. I happened to read Christine's earlier comment.

Parrs Wood in Didsbury?

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Deborah Jordan Bailey

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 11:54

you didn't fail Nicky, because you tried, you did all you could, to fail as a mum would be to not try at all, but you tried to save him as any good mum would. I am so sorry you lost your son but as no-one except another mum, I wish I could help you not to think that you failed him. You tried, you didn't walk away or abandon him, you were there for him but he'd already gone and it wasn't your fault.I think you are exceptionally brave, Deb x

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Deborah Jordan Bailey

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 11:38

Hi Nicky, thank you for your very kind comments on 'Of The Earth' I think you got it ; ) Debzxx

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Deborah Jordan Bailey

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 11:04

Love this Steve...I agree with all the comments above... i mean below ..hold on..my cat's just trying to eat my neighbours' toad....Debz xx

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Chris Dawson

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 10:04

I like this - I think probably your best, that I've read, so far. Like Cynthia, I like the raincoat as a symbol of hanging on. Though I do now have Cohen's 'Famous Blue Raincoat' stuck in my head.
Cx

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