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Kilim

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I wait

For your elucidation.

Your distant light,

to illuminate

the labyrinth of words

you lead me down.

My silent screams echo

as your needle pierces

and your shadow

is tattooed onto my skin.

You hold taut the threads

as you weave

your erratic Gabbeh.

Dragging me through

the warp and weft

of your distant life.

You hook me again and again,

draw me towards you

then leave me hanging,

while you,

change colour, change pattern.

Only to return and caress

the hues of my fibres,

just as the needle

falls to the floor.

(C) DeJ Feb 09

tag;  WOLOP.nov

◄ Samhain

Drifting ►

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Jeff Dawson

Tue 8th Dec 2009 21:08

Hi Deb, great stuff, agree with the rest here!!! Jeff X

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Isobel

Mon 7th Dec 2009 14:27

Hi Debs - please could you tag this poem with WOLOP.nov so that people can read it as part of a group. It was nominated by a fellow poet. Thanks.

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sian howell

Thu 19th Nov 2009 12:28

this is such a clever piece ...really glad I looked you up and I can see since I was last here that you have really extended yourself and this piece is fantastic X

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Gus Jonsson

Mon 9th Nov 2009 10:49

Wonderful, elegant...

Oh that I was able
to fly on such a rug
woven strands of anglelwing

Oh come and weave your magic
and
fly away with me. GJ

Debz this is a fabulous,fabulous poem...
Gusxxx

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Francine

Sun 8th Nov 2009 15:48

Another excellent poem Deb, that captivates the senses.
Love the way you weave in double meanings throughout : )

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Dave Bradley

Sat 7th Nov 2009 20:30

Deb, the words and thoughts are so beautifully woven that it really does deserve to be called - as Augusta says - outstanding

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Sat 7th Nov 2009 17:44

Your poem is as beautiful as any traditional rug could ever be... simply outstanding.

Augusta x

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kealan coady

Sat 7th Nov 2009 17:10

good poem, really enjoy the language here, "hook me...... leave me hanging" clever word play.

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