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Betrayed

I watched and waited

for this falling light.

How the warmth of

friends

held your spoken

grip.

 

How the push and shove

just came and went.

How I miss her

and her name amongst friends.

 

The morning's ache

against

a worried sky

and long for gaze

betray this shuttered eye.

I wake again...

◄ The stops

I dreamt of the end-of-the-world last night! ►

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winston plowes

Wed 18th Nov 2009 11:17

To me this suggests someone trapped in a painful repetitious circle. Nice post. win

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