Thanks for your comments Jeff, glad you liked it.
I've had a very good Christmas thanks, hope you have too.
All the best,
Cx
Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)
Original item by Jeffarama!
Only slightly cynical? I do love reading your comments John - you always have me reaching for the dictionary - curmudgeon indeed...I think you are an old charmer at heart - even Augusta seems to be warming to you - though not too sure what that bum comment means. Glad to hear that you enjoy the site - it is important to very many, I think. I love the variety of characters you get on here - they make me laugh. Happy Christmas anyway. x
Comment is about John Aikman (poet profile)
Original item by John Aikman
<Deleted User> (6292)
Sat 26th Dec 2009 22:51
I do believe it John , please, please have a very merry Christmas. and I hope all goes well for the New Year and what ever follows.
PS I hope ypur Bum gets better soon !...
Augusta xx
Comment is about John Aikman (poet profile)
Original item by John Aikman
Chris has drawn this poem to my attention and I have to agree it is very striking. Particularly pertinent to me as I've just escaped being a wage slave.
Comment is about I Am (blog)
'CHAMELION GOAL' - nice!
Hi Cynthia, thanks for comment on my polemic re Christmas Day Euro Millions.
You ask: "What did you think of Obama's comments on 'some wars are justified' and 'there is evil in the world'?"
Synchronistically, I am AT THIS MOMENT 'marking' young Barack's homework: (printout of his Nobel ACCEPTANCE! speech). His slippery elision from great pacifists to 'sole-arbiter America' (in the matter of Just Wars) and enemies who have 'no rules', tell you what a dangerous man he is. Once again it is 'fool or knave' time. Which appellation will he choose? As for evil in the world, 'He might say that, I couldn't possibly comment.'
Comment is about The Velvet Conversation (blog)
Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas
Hi Cynthia
thanks for taking the time to read and make comment
steve x
Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)
Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas
Hi Ann
thanks for taking the time to read and make comment
steve x
Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)
Original item by Ann Foxglove
<Deleted User> (7212)
Sat 26th Dec 2009 16:38
"Take me" is VERY good.
Apricot Man - great as it is - left to our collective imaginations.
Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)
Original item by Ann Foxglove
Well-spoken, concise and clear in clipped rhymed metre.
What did you think of Obama's comments on 'some wars are justified' and 'there is evil in the world'?
Comment is about WHAT FOR (blog)
Original item by Barrie Singleton
<Deleted User> (5593)
Sat 26th Dec 2009 13:41
Cheers Jeff and all the best for you and yours next year!
Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)
Original item by Jeffarama!
This one for me is full of sorrow and loss. Missing people, lost moments, half forgotten dreams searching for a home.
the wooden breath of the ashes left
in the vestments of an empty room, alone, but
chipped with Rooks and Queens
was particularly strong for me. Maybe this one should be ain a book of some sort ;-)
Win x
Comment is about Lachrymose Nesting (blog)
Original item by Marianne Daniels
I'm sorry this poem hasn't had any comments yet (time of year I suspect, everyone's been busy). I hope it gets read. It is so concentrated, dense and thick with images and meanings that it is not the sort of poem that instantly appeals to me as a rule, but I've reread it a few times and I think it's a wonderful poem!
Comment is about Lachrymose Nesting (blog)
Original item by Marianne Daniels
Hi Gaia, intersting concept with unusual delicate imagery! best wishes Jeff x
Comment is about I am lifting the piano with one hand (blog)
Original item by Gaia Holmes
Hi Paul, are you a fan of The Fall by any chance? Great stuff, all the best for 2010 Jeff
Comment is about Last train to Shitsville (blog)
Hi Sian, I dare say you get a few wolves around your way, great writing as always, best wishes Jeff X
Comment is about Alpha Male (blog)
Original item by sian howell
Hiya Katie, great stuff, sounds like the Bolton - Manchester train/s most mornings! Jeff X
Comment is about Daily Grind of Commuting 24/11/09 (blog)
Original item by DKlastro~*
Hi Mia, well no puches pulled here! Brilliant hard hitting and honest, I do like it when you write seriously.
Anyway, hope you're well, xmas going good, hope to see you soon and best wishes for the new year, Jeff XX
Comment is about He ain't heavi(ly pregant), he's my brother (blog)
Original item by Mia Darlone
Great work Marianne, not sure I understand it all but what the hell! Great use of words though best wishes Jeff x
Comment is about Mothers (blog)
Original item by Marianne Daniels
what a lovely photo:)
Comment is about Tudor House, Wigan August 2009 (photo)
yes... 2,000 miles and then 2,000 ,more I seem to remember. They must have been pretending. win
Comment is about The Pretenders (blog)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
Liked this Tommy. Winston
Comment is about Ballad of Beelzebub (blog)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
Well, it's going OK so far...and three books of poetry as presents already!
Blimey, is that the time? Time for an Xmas drink....have a great day everyone!
:)
Jx
Comment is about HAPPY CHRISTMAS (blog)
Original item by Ann Foxglove
Here's to a special time over the festive period to everyone on WOL. If 2010 is as lively as 2009 we are in for a treat. Win x
Comment is about HAPPY CHRISTMAS (blog)
Original item by Ann Foxglove
Merry Christmas Ann, awww your message gave me a big smile and a little sentimental tear in my eye! I agree,
Best Festive Wishes
Rachel
xxx
Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)
Original item by Ann Foxglove
<Deleted User> (7073)
Fri 25th Dec 2009 00:32
Happy Christmas Annipoo ;-))
Luv TC XXX ;-))
Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)
Original item by Ann Foxglove
Happy Christmas, wish you lived next door, I'm sure we would be best friends!!
Comment is about Rachel McGladdery (poet profile)
Original item by Rachel McGladdery
Everyone can be miserable now and again. Happy Christmas Mike.
Isobel x
Comment is about Merry Christmas (blog)
Original item by Noetic-fret!
Strong stuff Thomas, well written. And on a lighter note - HAPPY CHRISTMAS!
Comment is about Why So Blue, Sweetheart? (blog)
Original item by Tom
There is a sadness in this that it could be anyone. A person who goes through the motions... One who feels that their life is meaningless - that they have no real purpose.
Comment is about I Am (blog)
Best post this Christmas. All the best for 2010
Comment is about Merry Christmas (blog)
Original item by Noetic-fret!
Recently read your other stuff and love this! A sad reflection on our working lives in modern day Britain.Reminds me a bit of old punk songs,stuff by the Jam,etc.
Comment is about I Am (blog)
I totally agree with Chris; this is very engaging, and a great social comment. That 'fifteen minutes' of quiet preparation is intriguing. I considered 'teaching' might be your job, but fifteen minutes before class is likely not enough time, and a school is rarely quiet. The poem is thought-provoking.
Comment is about I Am (blog)
<Deleted User> (4519)
Thu 24th Dec 2009 09:58
wonder who this is about Jeff! lol - Your stuff is defo getting better...
Comment is about all about you..... (blog)
Original item by JEFF.W
really enjoyed this.. really good sense off pace here!
Comment is about Bettie Paige in Snow (blog)
Original item by Marianne Daniels
i enjoyed this too.. perhaps would have split up the last line into 2 lines and added a space to give it a pause but well wrote i think..
Comment is about STONES (blog)
Hi Dave
thanks for taking the time to read and make comment
steve x
Comment is about Dave Bradley (poet profile)
Original item by Dave Bradley
Hi Andy
thanks for taking the time to read
steve x
Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)
Original item by Andy N
<Deleted User> (7164)
Thu 24th Dec 2009 05:55
Hi Mike,
here's wishing you a peaceful Christmas and a wonderful new year.
Your writing is very powerful and your personal experiences in life make it so. Keep writing and do it your way. It does, and will continue to reach the ones who can connect to the content.
Starlight.
(Janet)xx
Comment is about Merry Christmas (blog)
Original item by Noetic-fret!
I was happy to know that you do laugh and smile on occasion!
When someone writes about things that are so profoundly horrific - it is sometimes hard to know what to say...
I wish you love, happiness, and peace of mind...
Merry Christmas and a very Happy 2010 to you : )
Comment is about Merry Christmas (blog)
Original item by Noetic-fret!
It could have been me on a bad day trying to pick a fight... However, I'm normally like you John - I like straight forward poetry that I can easily understand. Being on WOL for any length of time though, exposes you to so many different styles, that eventually you start to be more open minded. I can see the attraction of the unusual imagery and the sound of words - for sound's sake. Marianne seems to be so excellent at that.
Comment is about Violin (blog)
Original item by Marianne Daniels
Rachel Bond
Wed 23rd Dec 2009 21:44
Rachel Bond
Wed 23rd Dec 2009 21:17
wish bettie was in my snow...love bettie, love this.
Comment is about Bettie Paige in Snow (blog)
Original item by Marianne Daniels
Ilove this...and I don't know why. I think it was Izzy who criticised me for saying I had no patience with poems that didn't make much sense the first time you read them (apologies if it wasn't you Izzy...!) but any poem with the line 'he leans in parched kisses, swallowing kestrels...' in it, is going to grab me and make me read it again.
Lovely stuff!
Should 'whispers and armies of whales in the sky' not be 'and whispers of armies of whales in the sky'? Just a thought. It's another cracking line...whatever it means!
: )
Jx
Comment is about Violin (blog)
Original item by Marianne Daniels
WIN! XD
Comment is about tales and thank-yous from the dark side.... (blog)
Original item by Danni Antagonist
The Violin seems to be an instrument with a split personality. One side beautiful and the other (if played badly) a horndous streaching thing. You have captured this here i feel and the personality of the musician. another great poem Marianne. First Cello now Violin, next Guitar?
Comment is about Violin (blog)
Original item by Marianne Daniels
<Deleted User> (5593)
Wed 23rd Dec 2009 16:20
Thanks for your comment on my horror poem!
All the best mate!
Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)
Original item by Andy N
Cynthia's comment sums it up. Well done
Comment is about Why So Blue, Sweetheart? (blog)
Original item by Tom
good to see you are writing nice cheerful pieces for christmas, Paul - lol.. I remember Dermot's piece well - whether everybody else of course is a different ball game but I reckon you'll mention that while reading this!
Comment is about There’s something going on making me feel fearful (blog)
clarissa mckone
Sun 27th Dec 2009 05:54
Bo will change nothing, hes just another bush, hes NWO, hes IMF, hes CFR, hes corporate created greed, hes the face on a milk carton to sell to the masses that think they control things, when in fact we the people control nothing. Hes federal reserve, hes trilateral commission,hes illuminate, he sucks Rockefeller ass ,as all elected have done for the past 30 plus years.Hes bought and paid for by ruling family's that own the banks.You will see little change, except that we shall lose more and more personal freedoms. I may share that your elected are one and the same ass suckers and will lie to get elected and get very little changed.They had Kennedy killed because he wrote a bill that still stands on the books to end the illegal federal reserve.This will be war against the big guys and you better have more then a stick and some rocks to fight them.Ron Paul was probably the only guy to tell the truth in a long time that ran for president here, but because he told the truth they made him out as a nutter and his followers, and gave him very little air time.Now every day, we see, the media sees that what he said was true, and so we are seeing a backlash from some in media against government and liars and well our wonderful change in a bottle B.O. Vent all you want about false change, 1/2 of America is pissed off.Till the other half figure it out, nothing will change.
No one is free we are all slaves!
Comment is about JUST ANOTHER WAR (A message to Barack Obama - Nobel Peace Prize) (blog)
Original item by Barrie Singleton