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love to the blood and bone

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he loves the very heart of her

the blood the bone the womb

and every part of her.

scrapes passion from her skin like fishes scales

his fingers close around the very core of her.

 

the hot iron smell

the taste of salt

as teeth clash -

love by default.

love that doesn’t care for yesterday

or for tomorrow.

for names, for histories,

for anything but now.

fear, sorrow,

joy -

what can they be?

for all is him

and all is she.

scar tissue softens

and tears scorch the sheets

and pain and laughter mix

‘fore death defeats.

 

 

◄ maelstrom

slumber ►

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Isobel

Fri 25th Jun 2010 18:01

It's Klimt, Cynthia. I have his Water Serpents over my fireplace - but I've hung it sideways - it's in browns, beiges and golds so goes perfectly with modern decor. I think his Mother and Child picture is lovely too - though some of his work is getting so popular that it's losing its edge for me.

I think the picture fits the poem well. Love that defies everything - its passion all the more heightened by the inevitablility of death. I like the urgency in it.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 25th Jun 2010 16:47

I had this picture in my bedroom for years! Loved it! Loved it!! Somehow I lost it. Whose art is it anyway? I can't remember, only that I think it was called just 'The Kiss'.

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Dave Carr

Wed 23rd Jun 2010 00:32

It has a middle ages feel about it for me. Raw, metallic and brash. (in a caring sort of way)

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Tue 22nd Jun 2010 10:42

a very unusual but fitting choice of words & phrases lifts this poem to rare heights for me - brilliant. I've often thought that this klimt ought to be corny/kitsch but somehow, because it's sincere, manages to be very moving for me. well done Ann !

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Dave Bradley

Tue 22nd Jun 2010 07:46

Enjoyed this, Ann. Some striking use of words. Passion runs right through the first 21 lines. Then the one final line, like a heavy weight on scales, balances all the rest, and speaks volumes

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 21st Jun 2010 20:40

I expect it depends if they were the kind of teeth you keep in a glass by the side of the bed! ;-) x

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