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Starfish

Sun 22nd Dec 2013 21:49

I've never had a poem written about me before. Thank you.

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Sun 22nd Dec 2013 21:23

I'll second that. Good kickings all round. Would you have a Bethlehem poem to by any chance Mr. F?

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John Coopey

Sun 22nd Dec 2013 17:48

Excellent idea Philip; and then post one of your own so we can do a head-to-head.

Comment is about Laureate Carol Ann Duffy's poem for Christmas (article)

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 22nd Dec 2013 17:40

Less is certainly more in this instance.
A direct little vignette of heart and hurt that
says much in a few lines.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 22nd Dec 2013 17:34

In my own way of seeing things, I believe that
poetry is "encountered" and this encounter can
encourage one's own expression through the
medium in whatever style that is chosen or
found most appropriate. I like verse - which
requires (and develops) a command of language,
plus a sense of rhythm that can extend into
the creation of song; & finally the imagination
that creates its own worlds through words.
Serious or humorous, this use of words can find
a way to entertain a reader and satisfy the
author's wish to make a point or "paint a
picture".
Master the use of the tools that do the job
and let your mind make others see something
they find intriguing, interesting or inspiring.
Remember - "In the beginning was the Word..."

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 22nd Dec 2013 16:29

A timely reminder of the transference of love
and how its importance of interaction remains
constant - and vital.

Comment is about Love Unimagined (blog)

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 22nd Dec 2013 16:18

Ho-ho spelt backwards is Oh-oh! Probably the
more accurate reaction from many out in the shops
during the approach to Christmas.
Curmudgeons of the world unite - Ebenezer Scrooge
as President Emeritus!
Bah humbug!!
(But I like it really).

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<Deleted User> (11197)

Sun 22nd Dec 2013 08:16

Thank you for your comment and the correction. :)
Best wishes
Ankita

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Sun 22nd Dec 2013 08:13

Hi Harry
Thank you for your comments on 'White winter'.:) Hope you are doing well, have a nice a winter.

Best wishes
Ankita

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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Sat 21st Dec 2013 23:42

Hi Steve.

If you Google "The dark side of Nelson Mandela"

You will find that The A.N.C.are carrying out a Mugabe type agenda in South Africa

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John Coopey

Sat 21st Dec 2013 23:09

Thanks for your comments, Frederick.
As for myself, the man I could have been was a pale shadow of the colossus I've become.

Comment is about I Miss The Man That I Used To Be (blog)

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Roy Chetham

Sat 21st Dec 2013 22:58

Yes, this certainly accurately but artistically describes the mayhem. So sad that most often the giver likes the present better than the recipient!

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Steve Higgins

Sat 21st Dec 2013 22:27

Point of view is everything. Excellent poem, best wishes, Steve

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John Coopey

Sat 21st Dec 2013 19:43

You capture well the pace of activity.
(For some reason it reminds me of "Night Mail")

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Chris Co

Sat 21st Dec 2013 19:33

I think every organiser works hard to create a good poetry event; this helps to do just that by avoiding the bad experience of travelling to cancelled events. Thoughtful - emailing all organisers.

Good work on this!

Comment is about Christmas and New Year cancellations: organisers, please let everyone know (article)

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Lory Gaur

Sat 21st Dec 2013 17:54

i'm glad u liked it harry. thanks :)

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Julian (Admin)

Sat 21st Dec 2013 17:20

Both the collection AND this article deserve a wider readership. A superbly crafted review of the type that is sufficiently interesting in itself, regardless of its subject. Excellent work.

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Harry O'Neill

Sat 21st Dec 2013 16:40


Strangely sinister.

Like the `translucent vision` through the `heavy eyes`

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Harry O'Neill

Sat 21st Dec 2013 16:34

Merry Christmas Tom!

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Harry O'Neill

Sat 21st Dec 2013 16:33


Lovely, evocative account of a snowy winter night highlighted bythe comfort of the open door.

(But that maelstrom is too violent for it...and
maybe hushed instead of `dull`)

Sorry for messin`...but it`s good!

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Fkx

Sat 21st Dec 2013 12:47

Thanks, Isobel, for your holistic response. It is a very potent yet varied dynamic and each person will have, I imagine, their unique experience and position in the wide range of possibilities. You are much appreciated: 'The possible dream.' Frederick

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Lory Gaur

Sat 21st Dec 2013 09:46

thanks for your comments on my poems "yellow" and "the music turns away". its really inspiring.

Lory

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Isobel

Sat 21st Dec 2013 09:43

I can see this from both sides - the parent's and child's. As a parent you do want your child to buckle down and make the most of themselves - it's such a hard life otherwise. There has to be a balance though - some space left for dreams.

I'm quite horrified by the way children from Asian cultures are led by the nose through the whole education system. They might well be highest in the world league tables, but at what cost? It must be absolutely soul destroying to go through such discipline if you are a free spirit.

If things beyond reach are like that moon;
then teach me to dream the possible dream

I find your last two lines incredibly sad. x

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Lory Gaur

Sat 21st Dec 2013 09:41

thank u andy..

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Lory Gaur

Sat 21st Dec 2013 09:38

oh yes i realise that violin is spelled incorrectly. i guess i typed in haste. anyway, thanx a lot :)

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Fkx

Sat 21st Dec 2013 07:57

Excellent poem! For myself I miss the man I could have been and never was. Maybe stuff for another poem. Have a pleasant holiday season. Frederick.

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Fkx

Sat 21st Dec 2013 07:54

Thanks for the open feedback, Shirley. You are much appreciated. I guess my onus for the poem was a query as to why we are raised on ideals of aiming for the unreachable and then shot down to a compliant existence. I guess I believe that there are possible dreams if we go about them the right way. Thanks again. Frederick

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garside

Fri 20th Dec 2013 21:33

balancing small stones or a column of water on my chest

x

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John Coopey

Fri 20th Dec 2013 21:02

I do like the way there's a little "X" over the anus rather like a No Entry sign.

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John Coopey

Fri 20th Dec 2013 20:47

I had 3 assignments as Santa this year, MC. Fewer than last year but I didn't make anybody cry this year. Getting better.

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Shevaughn

Fri 20th Dec 2013 18:35

MY HEART beats for love,not only for the fulfilment of a dream but also for a person.That is my feeling and is mine to decide.

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Shirley Smothers

Fri 20th Dec 2013 17:58

This really speaks to me. It is so close to home. I too sometimes feel my dreams have gone astray.

Well written.

Shirley

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Shirley Smothers

Fri 20th Dec 2013 17:52

Hello M.C.

Thank you for your comments on my
"Difficult Haiku". Sorry to hear your Dad passed away when you were so young. I treasure the years I had with mine.

Thanks
Shirley

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Shirley Smothers

Fri 20th Dec 2013 17:49

Hi Dave,

Thank you for your kind comments on my haiku
"Difficult Haiku".
My Father passed away on Dec.9 2009" Sixteen days before Christmas and Eighteen days before his birthday.
So this time of year is a little depressing.

Thank You,
Shirley

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Shirley Smothers

Fri 20th Dec 2013 17:45

Hello Ged,

Thanks for the kind comments on my "91 Word Story of My Life." It was a little difficult to get the story in 91 words. But I tried.

Thanks again,
Shirley

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Shirley Smothers

Fri 20th Dec 2013 17:43

Hello John,
Thank you for the nice comments on my "91 Word Story of My Life".
It was a little hard to get the story in 91 words.

Thanks again
Shirley

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John Coopey

Fri 20th Dec 2013 17:33

I'm afraid you've hit the nail on the head, Ken.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 20th Dec 2013 17:14

Julian Clary?
That's kind of scary
There's no semblance
Of any resemblance!

Comment is about CHRISTMAS IN LONDON TOWN (blog)

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 20th Dec 2013 17:09

Blotto in the Grotto? This appeals to the
curmudgeon in me!!

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Paul Sands

Fri 20th Dec 2013 15:01

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Shevaughn

Fri 20th Dec 2013 13:08

Thanks Andy

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Andy N

Fri 20th Dec 2013 12:33

lovely. can relate to this a lot.

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Andy N

Fri 20th Dec 2013 12:30

made me shiver lory big style. lovely.

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Andy N

Fri 20th Dec 2013 12:30

beauitfully wrote, lory. you may want to check your spelling a little but i would be sending this out to magazines if i was you, it's worth it.

Comment is about the music turns away (blog)

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Tom

Fri 20th Dec 2013 12:14

Thanks for the comment on my poem Fulfilment. Much appreciated, glad you enjoyed it. T

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Tom

Fri 20th Dec 2013 12:13

Thanks for the comment on my poem Fulfilment. Much appreciated, glad you enjoyed it. T

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Shevaughn

Fri 20th Dec 2013 08:38

Thanks a lot Lynn

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Julian (Admin)

Fri 20th Dec 2013 07:00

I urge you all to listen to this. Her take on writing poetry is so refreshing - I mean, starting with a title! - and her choices of gramophone record: Treorchy male Voice singing the classic Myfanwy, a simple recording of a blackbird singing, Seamus Heaney reading The Blackbird of Glanmore, and Leonard Cohen, whom Clarke had effectively stalked by booking herself into the same Cardiff hotel in an attempt to meet him. Or perhaps it's just me.

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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Fri 20th Dec 2013 01:57

Your Haddlesey Santa seems
to be having trouble bridging the generation gap.Not you is it?

All the best.

Comment is about In The Grotto (blog)

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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Fri 20th Dec 2013 01:46

Nice poem,nice sentiment,
I too enjoy wallowing in aloneness.

Merry Christmas.

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