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<Deleted User> (7790)

Sun 24th Jun 2007 16:38

Hello Shaun! Fab poet and Mighty Music Maestro, Supreme Songwriter, and James Brown On Wheels of Fire!

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<Deleted User> (7790)

Sun 24th Jun 2007 16:35

Congratulations on your M.A.! Hooray! Hooray! Hooray!

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Malcolm Saunders

Sun 24th Jun 2007 08:58

A lesson to all those who pray. You will be eaten. I will provide prayer sheets and suitable condiments for self administration to all those who wish to pray to me.

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<Deleted User> (7790)

Sat 23rd Jun 2007 13:25

Sock Eye Salmon prayed to Mammon, Mammon simply ate the salmon. Ate it with some cheese and jam on, Mayonnaise, a twist of lemon. Hiawatha started coughing, Coughing from the solar plexus, when you cough your nose it makes stuff, blow your nose you noisy cougher, otherwise you simply vex us, see a hankie's in the offing, put aside for 'Watha's coughing. I think that calls for Dogspots all round.

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Malcolm Saunders

Sat 23rd Jun 2007 11:26

Hell and damnation on all those pamnations who set off to stud with sick Su. Pretty, proud Palmandas knock spots off salamanders and sweep the bored
before them in their wake.

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<Deleted User> (7790)

Mon 18th Jun 2007 11:25

You might end up a Pamnation instead -- what if they entered your for Crufts and a breeding programme with Su from Sooty and Sweep?

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Malcolm Saunders

Mon 18th Jun 2007 10:23

Yes I'd like to be a dalmanda. Everybody would love me and give me bambones.

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<Deleted User> (7790)

Sun 17th Jun 2007 21:17

Well, be careful what you wish for! Rain like Dalmation markings! Or Panda eyepatches!

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Malcolm Saunders

Sun 17th Jun 2007 20:40

I want a dogspot

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Julian (Admin)

Sun 17th Jun 2007 15:19

It is a sensual piece, isn't it? Nature red-raw in bed and garden?
Not a superfluous word in it, all add to the whole. It is quite tactile, hard almost in places.
And the directness of this phrase: The word that cleans her like water. Superb.
Thank you.

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<Deleted User> (7790)

Sun 17th Jun 2007 14:23

I meant 'arial' -- I believe the other is a washing powder, also available in liquid form. Or is it the tusks/antlers whereon the television signal is impaled? Or is it simply a typo? Blood group typo?

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<Deleted User> (7790)

Sun 17th Jun 2007 12:15

Oh you do, do you? Well, as it happens, there's a consequence to Times 12 point cloud seeding procedures. 12 point makes for the larger kind of raindrop -- the terrifying DOGSPOT. Do you really want DOGSPOTS?
Mary Quantum's friend, Norris Neutrino, suggests you try the new ghost particle/quark epilator. It dispenses with the need for barbers and shaolin foam.

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Malcolm Saunders

Sun 17th Jun 2007 11:37

I insist on Times 12 point.

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<Deleted User> (7790)

Sun 17th Jun 2007 11:10

I bring but gentle head-butting pandas and parrots to nudge your tucker bag into the billabong. No martial arts make-up artistes, or postal fleas -- my adhesive letters have been sent into a cloud around which water droplets will condense so you will have a falling, cacophanous alphabet in ariel 8 point whilst other mortals have pitter patter raindrops, little grasshopper.

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<Deleted User>

Fri 15th Jun 2007 23:37

Thank you for writing this poem. It's freshness balances the heady perfume of it's sensuality. The play of gender, nature, culture, the snatches of scene, bed and garden have just woven a welcome thread of serendipity into my evening. At a very hard time in my life I am gracious for receiving such treasures!

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<Deleted User>

Mon 4th Jun 2007 17:48

Oh yis, this is the bis. Love the wit and the wily rhymes. May you go on and on!
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<Deleted User> (7790)

Sun 3rd Jun 2007 10:12

Your poems, your word play, your ideas.... are brilliant and so very funny. Thank you.

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