Hello David - occasionally, i will trawl through the 300+ members of this site and dwell on a poet's work. Having now dwelled for far too long, i would just like to say how much i enjoyed reading your work.

Comment is about David Andrew (poet profile)

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Hey! Sorry I missed Freed Up, was feeling a bit overwhelmed by work (of which I've been shirking).
I love your poems, and love the titles too :)

Are you going to reproduce 'Boner' anywhere (no pun intended!)?

JxXxx

Comment is about Mia Darlone (poet profile)

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Hey! Loved your performance last night - wish I had your energy on stage. Glad to see the shaving poem up! Hopefully see you later, I'm not sure how well my poem 'Boner of Contention' will go down......

Comment is about Jennie B (poet profile)

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Isn't life odd - I had to look up Cava to find out what it was when I first read your poem and now I see it everywhere

Comment is about Simone Mansell Broome (poet profile)

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"They're horny and quite beautiful..."
I begin to wonder about some of the people on this site

Comment is about A F Harrold (poet profile)

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just went onto your nyspace if you like vampires here is a poem for you;
Your eyes are dark,
They hide your darkness within
Waiting to ousted
Your lips red like a rose
Full and bee stung.
Your pose inviting me to take a bite
Come to me and be a creature of the night.

I’d like to kiss your neck with butterfly bites
Hold you tight
In a death grip
Lead you to the undeath with breathless sighs of
Love,
Deep within your soul as you stare into my ageless eyes.

I’ll hold you tight as I bite
Caress you as you fall
As the death calls
I’ll let you feed on me.
Finally when you are sleeping
I take you to my tomb
I’ll be your groom you my bride
We will hide from the sun that you need no more
Then when the pale moon rises we will walk hand in hand
Under its light
I’ll be your eyes your sight
The most important light in your eternity.
Nothing will touch you my eternal red rose
As this is life you chose
When you invited me to take a bite.

Comment is about Jennie B (poet profile)

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Hey Daniel, thanks for the welcome. Like the Poetry Bomber! x

Comment is about Daniel Hooks (poet profile)

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Thanks :)

Comment is about Jennie B (poet profile)

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welcome to write out loud Jennie!!!

Comment is about Jennie B (poet profile)

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Oh, very well written indeed. I was there once.
Found the strength to break free too. It's the inner scars which take longer to heal.
Still, i'm not bitter. No point is there.
Thanks, Janet.

Comment is about Alain English (poet profile)

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Your wish is my command, you sweet talker. Message on MySpace sent. I hope more folks trip over to MySpace to listen to the poetry and songs you have recorded and playing there. Definately worth the trip.... Peace and prosperity to you ...reeeet!

Comment is about Shelley Ann Dwornik (poet profile)

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That's a beard and a half DG!

Comment is about Dermot Glennon (poet profile)

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The chicken thing could be quite embarrassing on a live open mic night unless you're good at tongue twisters. Although i suppose if you got it wrong it would be nice if the people laughed with you rather than at you. Better still when one can laugh at their own mistakes.
"Every object" screams "objection, subjection and intervention." All kinds of everything in this one. I enjoyed them so much i read them several times and still want to see more in them.
Thanks for entertaining me. janet.x

Comment is about Dermot Glennon (poet profile)

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Hey Dominic

I'm loving the poems. "Bhajis ensnare
like Medusa's hair" classic line Dom.

Mel
x

Comment is about Dominic Berry (poet profile)

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Oh, Louise, you are such a flatterer! Thank you for your blush-making comments. What a good excuse to read your works on here, and thank goodness, really like them...

I really enjoy the rhythms you create. There's a real beat and flow to what you write, never mind the wonderful, graphic imagery of your words. Simple, stark and too, too evocative...

x

Comment is about Louise Fazackerley (poet profile)

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Hi Barrie Obviously I don't think it obscure but if you check out some details of the arctic hare's habits and the mythology surrounding the animal, it may help. Here I'm almost identifying with it, as a mother, (and grandmother!)
Best Christine

Comment is about christine bousfield (poet profile)

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HI There, you know I have had a pet Hedghog, wrote a story or two about him. Had to wear gloves to handle him, but all in all it was interesting.he would get a little upset if people moved to fast and roll into a ball of prickles, thus his name Mr Prickles, he would hiss a bit....soooo we would watch him alot. I think they are adorable really, those little black eyes and that tiny nose! Mine did not have fleas, but the dog did, so I understand what you say! take care and thanks! Clarissa

Comment is about Barrie Singleton (poet profile)

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Why no poems? Isn't that the idea/ Or have I missed something.

Comment is about Rachel Pantechnicon (poet profile)

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Thanks for the comment, Jeff.. Must admit too I like your newest poem here (Your other stuff is really good stuff too) - you have a beat in your pieces that is kind of like some of my own stuff.. (although I can't rhyme to save my life - lol) that I could certainly imagine going down really well.. I'm doing this piece myself at a reading in Manchester Central Library next month which I am looking forward to getting responses to!

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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I admit defeat. I can write convoluted and obscure but am useless at reading it! I love "grand manner" hence slightly puzzled that you open with the condensation "I'm".

Comment is about christine bousfield (poet profile)

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Balm to my wounds. Nice-three Jimmy.

Comment is about Jimmy Andrex (poet profile)

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Thanks, Tomas. What did you think of the music?

Comment is about christine bousfield (poet profile)

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Hi Anna: my favourite is October, and I noticed you have similar subject matter to me.

Comment is about Anna Percy (poet profile)

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Hi Jeff
Loving the new stuff
always great to read, better to see you in real life performing these punk ette pieces

great!

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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I can attest to the fact that Ms Pantechnicon is the best-dressed cat-motivational poetry writing poet on the poetry circuit!

Comment is about Rachel Pantechnicon (poet profile)

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Ah thank you Louise. Really enjoyed your poems - I enjoy writing what I write but I read work like this and wish I could do the clever stuff too! That photograph is so lovely by the way.

Comment is about Louise Fazackerley (poet profile)

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thanks for your comment on lonely friend Alison. Your profile pic is intriguing, is it a painting? Keep writing

Comment is about Alison Mary Dunn (poet profile)

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hiya! i really really enjoyed your poems. it's nice to hear something real. and funny.

Comment is about Mia Darlone (poet profile)

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Great poems. Loved the tesco one!

Comment is about Neil Francis Brooks (poet profile)

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Ahh, my point... I dont think the Argentine war was worth the pain it caused. Heros like Simon Weston described it perfectly: "I dont decide if its right or wrong, or who has the most claim on the islands... what is important is that the British citizens living there wished to stay British and that is what I faught for"

Comment is about Tracey Currall (poet profile)

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Hi Louise - I've just read your 'samples' (that sounds too medical) and really enjoyed them.

I've eaten too many words
and the glut of shameful silences
is swallowing my tongue.

That especially. Ooh - and 'Daisychain Summer' too. Very real.

Comment is about Louise Fazackerley (poet profile)

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Love The Hood, I really like the way it looks written down as well as how it sounds when you perform it. Gem :)

Comment is about Seamus Kelly (poet profile)

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I'm laughing here having read your samples. Thanks for the add on MySpace, btw. I'm considering a short run self publishing stint myself for friends and interested victims. Not quite in your league... yet.

Comment is about Attila the Stockbroker (poet profile)

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Hi, Ally. Glad to be back. I've been busy writing a few things.

I love your poetry and look forward to reading more work from you. :)

-Melissa

Comment is about Alison Mary Dunn (poet profile)

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thank you for your comment, yes its a hard road sometimes in our search for happiness

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

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The Argentine War was a waste of young mens and womens lives...

Comment is about Tracey Currall (poet profile)

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You write well on complex topics...

Comment is about Cathy Crabb (poet profile)

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Great to see a rhyming poet...

Comment is about Carolina de la Cruz (poet profile)

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Love the coconut poem

Comment is about Anwen Lewis (poet profile)

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Ian Paisley would turn purpler than he is if he read this!!!

Comment is about Catherine Smith (poet profile)

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Ah, Bubo!!! Great to see you here, saw you on WritersCafe.

Comment is about Bubo (poet profile)

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Thanks Jeff, on sale now! I'll email you the advert.
Really enjoyed all your poems - love the simplicity of 'I know you're there' - made me laugh. See you in July.....! (I'll be the one appologising to her parents after the show).

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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Thanks for your comment Tomas, I can sympathise with the writing addiction - I'm chair-shaped, but I disagree that rhyming is boring! I think your first poem is really touching, I wish I had the balls to write something serious!

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

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Hello Phil, dear friend in Poetry

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment on my poem 'LIFETIME WITH LOVE'- Glad you enjoyed this one. based on reality and common sense.

With sincere appreciation for taking your time reading.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Phil Golding (poet profile)

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Tomas

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. There is a lot of truth all reality in your comment.

Cheers!
Zuzanna

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

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Hello Tomas, thanks for taking the time to read my writings.
I also enjoy rhyming poems but i try not to make a word fit just for the sake of it. Ha ha, there's a rhyme in there somewhere.
I find your seance and devils scripture intriguing, as i am a spiritualist medium and healer.
Very much a save the world person.
Spiritualists embrace all religions, colour and creed. Perhaps surprisingly, many of our congregation are Catholic.
I've been wading through Miltons "paradise lost," for about six months, amazing imagery there for devil poetry.
Thanks again Janet.

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

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You have humour in your writing...

Comment is about Mia Darlone (poet profile)

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I've enjoyed your work enough to read all your blog entries and make comments where ever I stopped. Keep on writing as I'm looking forward to your next post.

Comment is about Alison Mary Dunn (poet profile)

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Thankyou for your comment I usually perform at the
everyman, but due to compter problems since april
plus tha bad weather and the recession i have not
performed but if your interested pls see poetstarkeith via youtube or myspace
fot several poetic documentary short films i have done or google keith lucy for audio poetry to download also redbubble.com for photography
alsp poetry.com in the usa bye for now,
yours keith lucy
ps i like your spiritual enhanced poetry

Comment is about Keith Lucy (poet profile)

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Dear Alison

Thank you again for taking the time to read and the comment on my Riders of the Storm'
Your comments are welcome and appreciated.

Warm Regards,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Alison Mary Dunn (poet profile)

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