the women were congested but all had new batteries!

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

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How do David
Appreciate your taking the time to read my poem
so you live in Crosby. Was it you that put yellow trunks on the Gormley figure?
cheers bud

Comment is about Dave Bradley (poet profile)

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HI Cynthia,

thanks for your comment on 4:21 poem

i realised what you meant after the penny dropped : )

steve x

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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Yes.

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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Thanks for taking the time Kealan, glad you enjoyed it
I had to sort of sneak Dylan into my son's name, but it had to be done. Unfortunately he dislikes it to the nth degree.

Comment is about Kealan Coady (poet profile)

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Hi Neil
Thanks for the comment on The Sun Shone. I was just about to email you about your latest offering, when your comment popped up.
When was your mother ever wrong? A real nice read.

Comment is about Neil West (poet profile)

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Good Evening Cynthia,
Four Ways Five...just my way of saying,

'More than... and every which way' , at the same time.

Consider yourself clued in...


Thank you for your lovely comments.
Augusta x

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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The double image of love lust and love is a difficulty we all come up agains.

Is pain pleaure or is pleasure pain.??

Thanks again so very much for reading my poem.

Augusta x

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

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Hi Isobel,Just read 'A Poem Not For Guy'.Enjoyed the message behind this about seizing the moment,Well done!

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

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HI Andy

thanks for taking the time to read and make comment on my work

steve x

Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)

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Hi Cynthia

thanks as ever for your considered comment on my poem - in the poem i switched the light off to let the room take shape - though the immediate perceptual would tell the read otherwise

curious to know how you would do the equal line thing that you mention in your comment?

steve x

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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Hi Emma (Mulberry Rose)

thanks as ever for taking the time to read and make comment on my work

steve x

Comment is about Emma McCourty (poet profile)

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Try copy and paste the link into address bar. It should take you to a youtube clip of Lawrence Ferlinghetti reading "The World is a Beautiful Place" He has a more rambling approach to poetry. He is 90 this year and has certainly loved life.

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

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Yeah, I saw Control. It's quite hard to believe that someone so talented would be driven to such extremes. Thanks for your comment.

Cheers,

- Josh

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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hi there dave,
thanks for reading the poem "always there never to be forgotten". you've intrigued me has what made you think it was a dog the poem was about :)
enjoyed reading your poems :)

Comment is about Dave Makin (poet profile)

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hi there kealan,thanks for your comments on "what is love" and "questions & answers" poems it certainly makes you think about it :)
enjoyed reading your poems :)

Comment is about Kealan Coady (poet profile)

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hi there jane,
thanks for you comments on "questions and answers" poem it was certainly confusing writing it ;) enjoyed reading your poems :)

Comment is about jane wilcock (poet profile)

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Hi Cynthia

Thanks as ever for your generous comment. Hope we meet one day x

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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Hi Cynthia

Thanks as ever for your generous comment. Hope we meet one day x

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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Cheers for your remarks, Isobel. Much obliged. I have been off the site for a while now but am happy to be back. I like the 'Update Gigs' feature that is now up. I will be posting some more poetry over the next few weeks on different themes, so look out for that.

See you soon,

Alain

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

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And... so, young Jane, are you !

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem, you are very kind.

Comment is about jane wilcock (poet profile)

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Extravagance has been one of my many vices for many a long year David... Have you any vices?
Many thanks for your wonderful comments.
Augusta x

Comment is about Dave Bradley (poet profile)

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hi Dave-am here under 'orders' from isobel,glad i came! you have a new fan.loved 'countless' its given me some ideas,one being to hang around as long as poss-to piss all my enemies off.lol!-regards

Comment is about Dave Bradley (poet profile)

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Good Morning Isobel

It's so difficult at times to write of 'Love' in a joyous way... usually the venom of love has its way with my pen and restless nights...

Thank you again for such an indepth critique of my poem.

augusta x

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

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Good Morning Rosalind.
I am overwhelmed that my poem should have had such impact, what a wonderful comment....Thank you

Augusta x

Comment is about Rosalind (poet profile)

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Hello Owen
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment on my poem i'm pleased that you liked it.
Augusta x

Comment is about owen calvert (poet profile)

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I just loved the gender-longing in 'Gallop' and the edgy senuality of 'Jam' - really envigorating stuff, especially that 'rough chest'... cheers.

Comment is about Nina Boyd (poet profile)

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Hi, Isobel, thanks for commenting on Perfect, and Jenny!! However, this poem is a romance, not about motherhood. Love, with an image of an eclipse of the sun as I know of nothing else which would eclipse it. I love your site as you know and the red shoes. best Janexx

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

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Thanks for your comment Dave. I agree, the situation's not quite as bad as in some countries. However I am disquieted when we or the Americans use phrases such as '...for god and country...';

I think the relationship between the (Christian) church, the political establishment, and the arms manufacturers and the military is not a healthy one.

Comment is about Dave Bradley (poet profile)

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Just got the one about the luggage! HaHa!.The judge thought it was an art work!

Comment is about Tommy Carroll (poet profile)

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Hi, Tommy. Thanks for your great comment about my poem. Really cheered me up!
I'ts bad u had a brain hemorrhage..sounds ghastly, hope u are making a good recovery.
I like ur poem about the weekends being book-ends. A bit like that for me, the weekdays are better.!

Comment is about Tommy Carroll (poet profile)

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Hi Cynthia, thank you for your kind words and suggestion on 'You came', I have amended that line and it does flow more smoothly now. i appreciate your guidance.

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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hi Jennie i like your poems. very good work. also im interested in your music. coz i love gohicmusic from anne marie of skeletal family/ghost dance to the heavvy stuff like the gathering.

goth rock i know but goth folk? pls enlighten me on it coz ive not heard of that before unless you include mazzy star? do you have any on cd or myspace music site i can check out? are your songs similar to your poetry? sorry for all the questions lol.

im a regular in the goth clubs/pubs and welcome the chance to listen to new music so yours im very interested in checking out. and do you gig or go on tour?

myself i do poems and fiction stuff. i cant sing or do music tho so i write instead. i always thing a poor 2nd place but i just do my best. one day id like to sing properly but i just dont think itll happen without a good teacher lol. dark regards nick.:)x

Comment is about Jennie B (poet profile)

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Hi Neil, glad you like that one. Having a re-vamp on profile.x

Comment is about Neil West (poet profile)

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Thanks for the comment Andy - hope to get over to your neck of the woods soon so you might get to hear it live. Until then, take care.
Isobel x

Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)

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Thanks for your comment Kealan. If you live in Bolton, you should try to make the next poetry night at the Howcroft - there is normally a good gathering of poets there - though most of them are a good bit older than you! Hopefully see you around. Isobel x

Comment is about Kealan Coady (poet profile)

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Yep - I certainly do have a lust for life - that lust seems to get more acute, the further I get through it...Thanks for your comment Gus.

Comment is about Gus Jonsson (poet profile)

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Hi Cynthia. Sorry I am late replying to you, I have limited internet access. Thank you for you feed back on Victim Empathy. The Bullying experience is true, However Although I wonder how it would be for me to confront the people involved-I havent actually done so. As the poem says, I feel it would fall on deaf ears if I did so. They would not accept that it had been that bad.
I dont live within the experience, but it does have knock on effects sometimes. It was good to get it all out in writing. Glad you like it.
Look forward to reading your work on here.
Take care em.

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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Hi Matt

Thanks for the comment which is appreciated - will come back on the blog when I've had a think about it. St. George is terrific. There are a few typo's but who cares, it's wonderful

Comment is about Matt Panesh, Monkey Poet (poet profile)

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Hi Dave
Just a line to say thanks for taking the time to comment. Hope you had a good hol.

Comment is about Dave Bradley (poet profile)

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Thanks Carol! Me and S/M enjoyed your company too! x

Comment is about Clare Kirwan (poet profile)

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thank you neil thats very sweet of you :)

Comment is about layla turner (poet profile)

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Hi Nina, welcome to WOL. I enjoyed 'Jam', good story well told:)

Comment is about Nina Boyd (poet profile)

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Hi layla, welcome to WOL. Your sample is a powerful piece of writing and blurs the divisions between poetry and prose. I look forward to sharing more of your work:)

Comment is about layla turner (poet profile)

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Hi Nikki, welcome to WOL. I enjoyed visiting your site. I enjoyed Material Comfort the most from your samples, very sensuous, I thought your use of language very effective. looking forward to reading more of your work:)

Comment is about Nikki Bennett (poet profile)

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Hi Nicky, I've just read Crisis in the Skies and I think it's fab. It's right up my street, I like the humour, the story, the structure - very good. Quite Blakeish but with a cheerful ending! Why the minimalist profile? I know you do much much more than just write.

Comment is about Nicky Burrows (poet profile)

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Hi Neil, thanks for your comments on Cemetery Gates, the reference to the dead lying in line is more a reflection of her not being able to move in in that even they aren't bothered that she goes back mourning day after day, all a bit morbid I know! cheers Jeff

Comment is about Neil West (poet profile)

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Hi Clare, love your poems. Thanks for a great day on Sunday and congratulations again on winning the Big Issue competition.
Here is a small ode to your kind friend

Thank you for the journey
Your pleasant company
Although your name is Sheila
You’re Muriel to me:)

Comment is about Clare Kirwan (poet profile)

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Looking forward to seeing some poems...
Winston

Comment is about Nikki Bennett (poet profile)

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Hi Isobel,
Thanks for reading.Comments left on Ronaldo blog. Win

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