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I am completely new to writing so have no history in this respect. I live in North Manchester and have been to some of the open mic evenings which have inspired me to try and write something myself, so here goes.


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Gus Jonsson

Wed 9th Jan 2013 12:18

Well ...

Thank you ladies for your... advice and attached embrace.... and I appreciate that Francine's is a French kiss, i meant that tongue in cheek.

The implication, from your comments is I believe, of late I'm feeling a little bruised and as a consequence feeling sorry for myself, and should with immediate effect dust myself off and get on with being a happy Gus.

You may be surprised to know that the short stanza posted above was the 1st of many, 1,242 at the last count. An epic so dark and dire in it's content that I may well have been responsible for tens of thousands of lovers the world wide...

... going down.....coming together and ending it all in a blaze of gory glory midst a silver shimmering shower of moons and stars!!

I couldn't live with that...well not just at the moment anyway!

Yes, you are right ladies ... I will endevour to enable you tingle and sizzle in all the right places in all future postings.

Appropriate embraces and titillations.

And by the way, thank you Tony... good to hear from you too!!

Many thanks to all

lots of love

Gus xxx

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Gus Jonsson

Wed 10th Nov 2010 18:41

Thank you so much Ros for your comments particular with regard to the subject matter.

To the many of us who are or who have been pet owners the death of an old family pet is more heartbreaking than we could ever have imagined the loss irreplaceable.

In remembrance special moments are poignant such as a family gathering in the garden late at night the air giddy with sausage and burger and where the moon and stars were just a jump away.

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Fri 13th Aug 2010 15:56

Thank you Rosalind for your very kind thoughts and wonderful comments I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

I am delighted that my poetry gives you goose bumps but I'm sure there are many other pleasures that produce that state of 'Tingle' dare I say even long stiffer goose bumps!!

Once again many thanks

Yours in pleasure.

Augusta xx

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Patricia and Stefan Wilde

Fri 6th Aug 2010 13:59

First time meeting of you by me-I live one and a half miles down your road-lol!lovely sample poem-very clever! thanks very much-Stefan Wilde-ps-love the smile too!

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Tue 3rd Nov 2009 11:20

Good Morning Rosalind.
I am overwhelmed that my poem should have had such impact, what a wonderful comment....Thank you

Augusta x

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Fri 16th Oct 2009 15:48

Hi Ros - I've found 5 mins to update that heart poem on discussion. Would you mind inserting my stanza before yours? I think your stanza kind of finishes it off - perhaps we should get everyone else who adds to insert also.
Hopefully see you soon. Isobel x

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Gus Jonsson

Fri 16th Oct 2009 15:21

Thank You Ros ...What a wonderful thing to say and suffer from.... yes poor boy....phew!!!


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Gus Jonsson

Mon 7th Sep 2009 19:33

Well... Rosso wouldn't ya just like 2 know!
.No bleedin' idea??..


<Deleted User> (5646)

Wed 24th Jun 2009 09:56

Hi Ros,
nice to see you here. I'll Look forward to reading what you write. :-)


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Gus Jonsson

Wed 24th Jun 2009 00:20

Well who's a big girl now then

Good luck! just enjoy the pant's off it...

see ya soon

Gus x

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winston plowes

Wed 24th Jun 2009 00:06

Hi Rosalind, Go for it... we are a friendly group I hope you will find. Winston

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