Gorgeous poem Jeff. The twirling mind intertwined with the expansive New Mexico lands. Wow. (In New Mexico mountains, it feels like you can touch the sky.)

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Thanks for likes: Holden, Red Brick Keshner, Yanma Hidayah, Stephen G & TOM MERTON. 👍

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Thanks kindly, Dana 🙏🏻🕊🌷

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When a catalyst is needed, one often appears. Often that catalyst is a moron.

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Inter-meddling's putting billions of futures at stake and as usual created by and involving only a tiny percentage of dare I say people? or blind fools more like!

Thank you Rolph

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Thankyou Stephen,

It's sometimes interesting to add context to the creation of a piece of writing.

Much appreciated.

David

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RBK. John, Trevor and Stephen - also to Aisha, Holden, Yanma and Naomi, I appreciate your gift of flowers.

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Tom and Rolph, Thank you for your very kind comments.

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Thanks for the Likes, Tom and Aisha. Am I the only one to recognise that this isn’t about securing peace in Ukraine? It’s about US and Russia agreeing areas of unopposed “influence”, Russia in Eastern Europe, US in Greenland, Panama etc. Otherwise what’s in it for US and why else exclude Europe from the talks. The new world order is being formulated.

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Revised and re-edited, I hope for the better!

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Thanks Stephen - my cardiologist has a mantra; "Don't think about what you've lost, think about what you can still do." What a crock of sh1t !

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As ever you have your finger on the pulse - I just hope that Europe stands united and does not start to make fragmented individual 'deals'.
Where does Brexit leave us? we are a tiny island in conflict with itself, we need to pull together and we need friends.
The Second World War would not have been won if we had been so friendless - we must learn that lesson.

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Another fine poem, Rolph. A warning and a wake-up call which should be read by European governments as a matter of urgency.

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Enjoyed this one, Rob. The ecstasy of memories. 'Life's scrapbook', as you say. Great writing.

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Thank you for this fascinating and moving explanation, David. Much appreciated.

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Thank you, Rolph, for your kind words. Trump seems at ease with authoritarian figures, probably because they have so much in common, such as only accepting election results when you win.

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Thank you for your kind words, @RolphDavid. Your thoughtful interpretation means a lot to me. A little about the backstory of the poem: the main concern lies in the line, "Does a queen need to show her skin to win the king?" That was the first line that came to my mind. I came up with it shortly after I saw Kanye West and his wife on the red carpet at the 2025 Grammys. However, that doesn't mean I consider Kanye to be a king. For me, as a woman, witnessing that makes me feel his wife is being demeaned. This statement may be controversial, but I think most would agree that something valuable should be protected. An analogy I can provide is that if we have money, we would certainly keep it safe rather than display it publicly. This doesn't mean women shouldn't appear in public, but it pertains to how they dress. Their bodies are valuable, and it is something that needs to be treasured and kept safe. Even though there is freedom regarding how women dress, I believe there should still be boundaries applied. I think, for women, there is a sense of self-worth that they need to uphold. However, when I see her, I feel that a woman's value is merely an accessory to a man. And that truly breaks my heart. Through that poem, I aim to present a perspective from a girl who is asking her mother what a queen should be. I personally believe that a mother's position holds the title of queen, as she has successfully won the heart of her king, who is her husband.
Regards,
Yanmah

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Hi Aisha

Nice poem. I'd like to see you write something that doesn't rhyme. Just for a change? But whatever, just keep writing.

John S

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On ‘til all my breath is you’ - Thanks Tom! “Rendezvous” is a dear word that’s imprinted in my life-view from when I was 9 or 10 thanks to Richard Harris of “Golden Rendezvous” fame. 🙏🏻🕊🌷(rbk)

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on “‘til all my breath is you” - It’s much like walking a tightrope, both exhilarating at once and absolutely terrifying within the selfsame moment; yes! Thanks Rolph 🙏🏻🕊🌷rbk)

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Thanks Tom! “Rendezvous” is a dear word that’s imprinted in my life-view from when I was 9 or 10 thanks to Richard Harris of “Golden Rendezvous” fame. 🙏🏻🕊🌷

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It’s much like walking a tightrope, both exhilarating at once and absolutely terrifying within the selfsame moment; yes! Thanks Rolph 🙏🏻🕊🌷

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A very moving reflection Hélène. 💕

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A very moving and evocative rendezvous. 👍

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Great powerful work Flyntland. 👍

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Thanks for your thoughts, Rolph. And for the Like, Trevor

Comment is about UKRAINE - I'LL FLUSH YOU DOWN THE DRAIN (blog)

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Haha, poor Banana! Looks like it slipped up in the quest for love. Maybe Banana should’ve peeled back the layers of its dating strategy before settling for the prune! Sometimes, love comes in unexpected packages—but I’m not sure anyone wants a "fruit salad" like this on Valentine’s Day!
Great job!
Regards,
Rolph

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Hello Stephen,

Thank you for sharing The Sunshine Boys. The way you capture the hypocrisy and complicity of political figures, all while highlighting the devastating reality of conflict, is powerful. The contrast between the public narrative of peace and the destruction caused behind the scenes is striking. Your words offer a sharp critique of the greed and denial that so often fuel modern wars, and it left me reflecting deeply on the true cost of these actions. Great poem!
Regards,
Rolph

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Hello Hélène,
A powerful, reflective narrative unfolds in Meeting Each Other, where shared history and quiet connections become a testament to the resilience of human spirit. The vivid contrast between the two men, shaped by their individual traumas yet brought together in peaceful proximity, speaks to the healing that can emerge over time. The bond they share through simple daily rituals—coffee, conversation, and community—becomes a subtle but profound metaphor for life’s cycles of suffering and recovery. The quiet dignity with which you explore trauma and healing, as well as the notion of "meeting" each other both in life and beyond, is deeply moving. What stands out is the beautiful ordinariness of the men’s companionship, which highlights the power of shared moments to bridge even the deepest divides.
Regards,
Rolph

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Dear Aisha,
Your "Love Is Love" radiates positivity and inclusivity. The way you celebrate love in all its forms—unaffected by judgment or societal constraints—is refreshing and uplifting. I admire how you emphasise the beauty and authenticity in human connection, whether it’s tender or fiery. Your message of love transcending all boundaries is both heartfelt and empowering.
Great poem.
Regards,
Rolph

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Dear Yanma,

For me, your "The Flame" beautifully explores themes of self-worth, submission, and identity with poignant imagery. The candlelight and flame metaphors create a vivid contrast between external allure and internal conflict. I appreciate the depth in the questioning voice, as it subtly reflects on the complexities women face in trying to balance strength and vulnerability.
Regards,
Rolph

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Hello John,

Your poem UKRAINE - I'LL FLUSH YOU DOWN THE DRAIN is a striking and unapologetic commentary on the political landscape. The repeated refrain and stark imagery, combined with the rhythm of the "Cocaine Blues" tune, create a bold, impactful piece that demands attention. Your use of irony and sharp criticism highlights the gravity of the issues at hand while pushing the boundaries of conventional political discourse.
Just great!
Take care,
Rolph

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Hi Red Brick Keshner,

Your poem ‘til all my breath is you left me in awe. The intensity with which you describe the effect of someone's presence is powerful and evocative. The metaphor of ink spreading through the bloodstream, "tainting alveolar sac transactions," is so vivid, capturing the overwhelming and all-consuming nature of the connection. It’s rare to see such a delicate balance between the destructive and captivating power of love or obsession. Your imagery is striking, and I deeply appreciate the emotional depth woven throughout this piece.
Great job!
Take care,
regards,
Rolph

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Dear Flyntland,

I just wanted to take a moment to express how deeply moved I was by your poem For Annie. The way you captured the purity and joy of laughter is so beautiful. It’s rare to see something so genuine and unrestrained, and your words truly bring Annie’s infectious spirit to life. I was especially struck by the way you highlighted the contrast between uninhibited joy and the constraints of adulthood. Your writing reminds us of the power of shared laughter and its ability to shield us from the world’s challenges. Thank you for such a delightful and thoughtful piece!
Regards,
Rolph

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And thank you for your "like": Tom, Flyntland, Stephen and Red Brick Keshner! I really appreciate it.

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Thank you Flyntland for your nice words and compliment.

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Thank you Tom for your nice comment!

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Hello Stephen - once again you can see how birds of a feather flock together! One criminal flirts with the other and sees how he can take advantage of the other to emerge victorious in the end. Both are degenerate subjects (I wouldn't call them human!) who seek each other out until they sense their chance. It was the same with Stalin and Hitler. Everything comes back, unfortunately!

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Thank you all for your ‘Like’: Brick Keshner, Hugh, Stephen Gospage, Aisha Suleman, Holden Moncrieff, Hélène, Naomi
and TOM MERTON.
I'm really pleased with your feedback. 😊

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Thanks for your thoughts, Stephen.

Comment is about UKRAINE - I'LL FLUSH YOU DOWN THE DRAIN (blog)

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Thank you, Jonathan. Some might call this a master class in getting through the day! A very fine poem.

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Beauifully written in perfect rhyming couplets, Rolph. The quality of the verse makes the content more shocking. It's awful to think that Trump is having jolly chats with the man responsible for this brave man's demise.

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Brilliant, John. A fantastic piece. The scariest thing is that one can plausibly imagine Donald Trump singing along with this himself!

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Thank you so much for your comments and support, Graham and Flyntland. In some ways, I am reluctant to try to satirise this situation, because humour can seem a poor response to the chilling reality.

And my sincere thanks to everyone who liked this poem.

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Thanks for the Like, Red Brick.

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Each well-thought-out line speaks volumes, put together as you have, leaves nothing else to say.

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It will, Tom, given time, as sure as eggs is eggs (and very dear bought they be).

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Such a great heartwarming story Helene. Lets hope we all meet up in that other world! Thank you.

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Your brilliance never fades John. Thank you for this great poem,

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Well written piece Rolph.
Heroes never die! Thank you.

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