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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 27th Jan 2020 04:37

Wow SNR, your bio sample is raw, real, reflective, insightful... Welcome to WOL. I'm looking forward to reading your poetry.

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d.knape

Sun 26th Jan 2020 21:31

Impressive resume.
even more mpressive hat.

(you don't look that short!)

wink. ?

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 26th Jan 2020 16:32

Hello Don - am I right in recalling you mentioning Adelaide as your
part of the world? I've just been watching the cycle race Tour Down
Under on Freesport TV here in the UK - featuring the countryside
around Adelaide. A big event in a big country, given big attention.
AND won by a certain big name: Richie Porte. Hurrah!

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Philipos

Sun 26th Jan 2020 09:04

Don Wisps. Thanks for the comments. Blessings. P.

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d.knape

Sun 26th Jan 2020 01:46

yep. I agree.
customer surveys are actually an irritant.
hence the poem
next time they ask, send them this poem! haha

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Tom

Sat 25th Jan 2020 21:55

Hi Hannah, welcome to WoL! Some great works you've shared here. love your use of language and the pursuit of the avoidance of cliché is something I wholeheartedly support! I also like the idea of the of the title being separate to the words themselves; it's not something I always do myself but I really like the idea of using the title as a key to unlock the poem. Really looking forward to more of your work. Tom.

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kimberly

Fri 24th Jan 2020 15:08

Thanks for your comment on my profile. I obtained the 'Poetry in my life' picture from the interweb.

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Philipos

Thu 23rd Jan 2020 17:16

2025 - thanks Tom - glad you liked some turns of phrase. P.

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Philipos

Wed 22nd Jan 2020 21:17

Hi IJMDH - 2025 - thanks for the like. Blessings. P. ?

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Philipos

Wed 22nd Jan 2020 19:37

2025 - thanks for your profound words. Much appreciated. P.?

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d.knape

Wed 22nd Jan 2020 10:18

thank you.

I like your site sign
"I will have poetry in my life"

how did you do that?

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d.knape

Wed 22nd Jan 2020 10:16

Why hide behind
that mysterious book
come out Jordyn
and let us look
the poems you write
will have us hooked
so show us what's
behind the book.

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Philipos

Mon 20th Jan 2020 18:58

Don - Droplets - thanks for the comment. Much obliged. P ?

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d.knape

Sun 19th Jan 2020 21:57

They do.
but a few die-hards like me, still get the morning newspaper.
I would hate to see them go away completely.
Wouldn't we miss the paper
as much as the morning cup of coffee?
I still believe in tradition
long may it live.

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Philipos

Sun 19th Jan 2020 21:40

Vautaw - Moon Talk - thanks for commenting. Appreciated. P. ?

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Philipos

Sun 19th Jan 2020 20:54

Hi and thankee muchly for the like on Moon talk. P. ?

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d.knape

Sun 19th Jan 2020 00:33

If you wish to post
you must log in,
if you are a log
you should not be posting-
log off.

wink.

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Hannnah

Sat 18th Jan 2020 19:00

I have very much enjoyed reading through your work,
Hannah

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 18th Jan 2020 16:57

Beautiful picture above. I'm not sure I appreciate the symbolism. But I really do think it IS symbolism. The dark berries, being eaten or spat out? I'm really interested.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 16th Jan 2020 12:08

Raj,

Are you still on line? I have seen nothing for weeks. I have always enjoyed your imput, so I'm being bold enough to ask if all is well with you. You have been much in my thoughts.

Cynthia

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d.knape

Mon 13th Jan 2020 03:19

who wants to hang around
with old people.
they smell and
don't make any sense.
I know this from what people tell me.
I would never admit to it myself.

wiink.

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d.knape

Mon 13th Jan 2020 03:16

I am entering
my second childhood.
it's more fun
the second time around.

wink.

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raypool

Sun 12th Jan 2020 22:20

Hi Cynthia, it was very nice to read your comment about my profile. I have been off the site lately, but you teased me out again. EFIT is the method of getting likenesses for crime identification shown to witnesses etc. which replaced PHOTOFIT consisting of lots of pieces of a face overlaid based on their description. I think that was an older method pre digital age. In my case I used it as an illustration of conforming to expectations . I hope that is a help!

I hope you're well.

Regards, Ray

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d.knape

Sun 12th Jan 2020 12:10

got ya beat.
I have been a member of WOL
since 1875.
long in tooth
but not of poems.

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d.knape

Sun 12th Jan 2020 11:13

thanks for reading my poem.
it ain't much.
but what do you expect
from an old codger
on his last good leg
my mind is about
the only thing
that still works without hurting.

O.L. Buzzerd

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Andy N

Sat 11th Jan 2020 22:03

Some good ideas in your sample piece you've shared. Perhaps you could shorten it as its maybe a bit long for my own personal tastes, but I did enjoy it. Welcome to Write Out Loud btw. I suspect this would go down well live if you ever chose to perform it. I co run one night in Manchester and I could see it going down well must admit, but anyway.. keep sharing

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 11th Jan 2020 15:05

Happy New Year, John. Your contributions to this site are highly regarded by me, both your personal works and your 'commentaries'. I do admire, and value, scholarship that is shared. Your bio entries are embracing.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 11th Jan 2020 14:24

You are always a delight!

I'm 'not with it'. What does EFIT mean?

If I knew how to do it, I'd post a black and white photo of myself at twenty-five. I know you'd enjoy it, as I do yours: the older person shining through youth.

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d.knape

Sat 11th Jan 2020 13:20

Full frontal nudity
is not only accepted
but is permitted
and encouraged!

wink.

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d.knape

Sat 11th Jan 2020 13:17


These poems are only scavenged
it's all that I can manage,
some of them make you grimace
most hope that they 'are finished!

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Tom

Sat 11th Jan 2020 00:38

Thanks for the comments John; micro-bite truths that we all should heed. I always always appreciate your input. And I hope Friday night is treating you alright.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 10th Jan 2020 13:02

I'm so glad you're cruising some of the 'oldie-goldies'. I have enjoyed this site from Day 1.There weren't that many of us ten years ago, and many of us actually knew each other in person here in the north of England. It was a fine experience! Now, I'm ten years older, and not so social, and not sure if there still is an active poets' performing 'circle' in the Greater Manchester Arena. But I value the 'world venue' highly.

Welcome!

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Roxanne

Thu 9th Jan 2020 22:17

Thank you!!

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Thu 9th Jan 2020 07:23

Welcome to the club Mika!

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d.knape

Tue 7th Jan 2020 12:34

Thanks for reading my Honking poem!
We need more Honking poems.T
there are just not enough Honking poets!

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Jain Gawne

Mon 6th Jan 2020 17:58

Thank you so much Po! What a lovely welcome!

As soon as I've done the tea I'm going to sit down and read everyone else's works, including yours. I never realised before how much I needed poetry in my life!

Jain

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 6th Jan 2020 14:35

Ruth, thank you for the lovely Christmas message. I'm not out much into Manchester, but I do think that I may one day really 'see' you. Assuming you're still in this area, of course.

Your natural warmth of personality is a WOL bonus to us all. Happy New Year!

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DavidAddington

Sun 5th Jan 2020 22:05

Really liking the four line poetry (quatrains)

Great themes and humour and so true to life.

Keep it up

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d.knape

Sat 4th Jan 2020 22:18

In the attic of your mind
in dark corners find
a hidden spot,
but be careful with
what is recalled
there's things up there
just as soon forgot!
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Jasmine

Sat 4th Jan 2020 03:40

Thank you Don. Your rhymes are good. Poems are hilarious still have deep meaning. To know you is difficult through your work. Like an ocean deep, your words have hidden mysteries. Yet, there is a drive to explore and discover those mysterious zones.

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Philipos

Fri 3rd Jan 2020 23:13

Don you might have read your version of it somewhere, but I specifically recall having seen the expression phrased as: A Picture Saves a thousand words. In other words, both of us could be right if there are 2 contexts. But thanx. Will check out the phrase elsewhere and if different to what I have just said will return to the arena. P.

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Don Matthews

Wed 1st Jan 2020 06:22

Jasmine, Po you see's a rhymer
(Ushered in some prose)
Easy, simple stuff to do
All done, there ya goes....

Rhyme on other hand Jasmine, is a very skilled art. Takes years and lotsa practice to reach our skill level (wouldn't you agree Po?) We are highly regarded and sought after on WOL, ....despite never having won poem of the week........such is life

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Ruth O'Reilly

Tue 31st Dec 2019 14:29

As you may pass by my little ol' page
This poetical digital stage
May our New Year bring
Your best role yet
And
Leave behind
All of
Last decade's
Regrets!

Wishing Everyone on WOL a Very Happy New Year! I've really enjoyed taking part on this site that I've just discovered this year. It was a nice alternative to the usual social media platforms!?

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Tue 31st Dec 2019 08:22

? sample

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d.knape

Mon 30th Dec 2019 23:37

Here in the States
there are always news stories about
people finding babies in dumpsters
it is not common but on the other hand
it is not rare.
People are too stupid to use birth control!

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Nigel Astell

Mon 30th Dec 2019 16:08

Thanks Ruth same to you

Christmas time is always fun
lots of beer lots of wine
but then all is gone
with the bottle bank full of empties
and money all spent up
on the positive side
a clear head is good
to write some more poetry
with the new year coming up!

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Mon 30th Dec 2019 10:30

Thanks Adam for your likes for Raiman and Civilian's Perspective.

Hope you're a sensible Aussie...we've already got a silly one!

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Do.RoThy

Mon 30th Dec 2019 06:09

Hope you have a wonderful time here!!

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Don Matthews

Sun 29th Dec 2019 20:43

Argumentative? You'll make a good lawyer. And you wear your heart on your sleeve?. I'll remember to call you when I need a lawyer.....

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Adam

Sun 29th Dec 2019 18:27

Thank you very much, it's very nice to see someone so welcoming to new members. I've only been on here for a short time and already I've read many fantastic and inspiring pieces. Now wishing I'd looked for poetry blogs sooner. Thanks again.

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