Last couple of days I have been thinking along the same lines...
Lovely imagery in this...
There is an underlying sadness as it can be related to love and loss...

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Both feeling a little reflective at the moment, I see.
Nice work,
Cx

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Hi Cynthia, Thank-you for reading and commenting on Shhh ..... as always, your comments are much appreciated.
Cx

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Very clever with the title Cate ; )
Interesting observing others...

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Thanks Beulah.
Bernie

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Thanks Beulah

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Hi Ian, great work mate, I've been up scout road too! You should publish some more of your work, hope to see you soon Jeff

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Hi Cate

I liked this. An affirmation of life, despite it being all about a coffin, which works as a poem. Your funeral should be fun, let's hope it's not for a while yet though

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hi cynthia,
thanks for your comments on 'carpe diem'. I'm glad you noticed the slight typo-though it's funny to think that it works as well with 'cease'!
Cat x

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Hi again Cynthia, thanks for your two recent comments. The Ibiza one was obviously just a bit of fun about someone I know well (no nods and wink wink but theres a possibility you may know her too!!!!!!} Your second comment on Sunflowers was much appreciated. Luckily I was on line when your first comment went up before you edited it, and feel privileged you shared a bit of your personal life with me, if only for the moment.
Cate xx

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I don't find any terror here, in spite of Nick's personal statement. Children can have an intimacy with stuffed animals that is intense and very real - totally unconditional. If this 'friend' was personified by 'its amber eyes' to encourage adult thoughts, why is that a scary concept? I don't think the 'writer' loses the fact of 'the toy'.
And all this after Nick has made his own comments! The last stanza is very good, a great encapsulation.

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Good one. You're a very clever girl with a real 'poetic touch' which you can manipulate in any direction you want to go.

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Cate, this is really good - a great thought to start with - expressed in tight lines, fine word choice and a compelling progression. Super ending.

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no despair here, perhaps ennui? Like. Made me smile.

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Please continue.

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no and not quite no Janet. thanks for commenting as I appreciate it. And no I don't think it is your ignorance and not quite no as I do not think there a very great deal you are missing.
I did this one as part of a 'repertoire' for the shows I have been doing 'Touching Earth'. The spacing and timing are correct as is the content. Though basic it is basic in intention, and partly to make the audience thnk, but not too deeply (as it is basic) Things we know but are no longer aware of or take ror granted.
The beauty of the earth is complex yet basic. Grass into cow, milk flavored by grass as milk and grass flavour beef; bird feed (still in the trees or store bought) is seed which comes from the earth either way, and so on..and the herbs (grass, herbiage-hedges, condiments for e.g.) provide the garnish, i'e. the finishing touch. Beauty, wholsomeness. No real effort on our part, just a gift there for us to enjoy and to nourish us. The poem is meant to be quirky, to the point and 'light'.
Hope that is enough of a response if not too much. And thanks again for commenting.
P.S. I don't often do 'light' though more often quirky!

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Many thanks for your comment on my poem. I have had a good read through yours - you have a varied style.

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It does indeed Lydia. I love the poem. You express so well the beauty of an older woman, inside and out.

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Sharp comments on our society, crafted impeccably. I like your stuff!

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I don't know the story behind the poem but I can guess the horror. You have served her well by writing this. Reminds me of Rimbaud " le dormeur du val".

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thanks Cynthia
Bernie

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Bums can be very different, plump or skinny by nature. That is a lovely 'cheeky' bum, guaranteed to turn heads of any sexual orientation because it is full, firm and beautiful.

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Oooooo naughty but funny!

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But does her bum look big in this?????

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Very cheeky indeed but fun.

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A sad one Cate - let's not go there. I agree with your choice though - have always hated the powerful stench of lilies and you have to love a flower that opens up so totally and seeks the warmth of the sun.

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You know me well Gus - I'm all for love not war - that shag jag sounds rather good fun...

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All I can say is Excellent, Bravo to you for going against the PC B-----tds
Bernie

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That is a big theme Nicky and one that never fails to capture my imagination - that will be the first and last time I ever mention something as insignificant as an apostrophe - I do 'love lost' a lot less subtly.

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janet, thank you. It is a simple poem, grounded in the idea of unconditional love, and how the loss of that is dealt with.

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LOL means 'laugh out loud' - I got it off others - lightens things up a bit cos I like to laugh a lot. I make lots of mistakes, usually with spellings - usually ignore others unless I think they are strong enough to take it and they are minor. So you are possessed by something or someone - let's hope it is a benevolent force.

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The bane of my life, 'the apostrophe! ' I teach it, yet I always get it wrong when I am writing. ( if my teaching tutor had read it, I would be the one being shot - she said that my composition and ideas were excellent, which boosted my ego a little! haha, but the 'English stuff' needed a little work, which deflated it again within seconds ) If the apostrophe only hit me once in that poem, I'm ok. I can deal with that. - may sound stupid but what does 'lol' really mean ?

Possession, an interesting one. ( especially where the apostrophe is concerned). Seriously, I like that, and it does fit in Isobel, metaphysically.

As Marianne said, there is also a melancholic terror underlying, of the unknown. but I'm not going to explain it. If i did it would take away the subjectivity of the poem.

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Hi Cynthia

thank you again for taking the time to read and make comment

steve

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Hi Rodney

thanks for taking the time to read and make comment

spent many an hour on hospital hill

i know the town well

steve

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This is good, basically sharp and punchy. I think you lost a 'pow factor' by dragging out 'devils and demons'. Pick one and drop the other - maybe 'devils' to fully capitalize on the assonance of the 'e' sound as in 'restless, regretful' and 'endless'. But 'demons' picks up 'beery' from line 3, which is a connective device for cohesion. Just a thought.

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At last a poem. Thank you

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Thanks Val.
Bernie

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Hi Nicky,
thanks for your fulsome comment on my poem 'Kinsella.' I was thrilled with it.

Janet.x

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Nice one Belinda.

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A good use of pace throughout. I thought the ending was well done, leaving us to imagine the ending..

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You capture the scene so well,I enjoyed reading this poem,very good.

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Yep - a super poem - I would suggest Rapunzel Anthony - cos of the inclusion of rampion - which is what the father stole from the witch - nice to know that all those bed time stories I've read come in for some literarty use! The atmosphere created by the imagery is great - loved the blood red juices running down her cheeks - the atosphere is set.

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Yes - I understand where you are coming from with this Janet - well expressed.

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A remarkable piece, Janet - so unusual - emotionally detached and yet not. You tell a series of events in a matter of fact way - like a legend and so subtle. I love the way she peeled the sticky letters from her tongue and pasted them on a note - great imagery.

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I take it this isn't a teddy bear we're talking about. An interesting one. 'Faith that's lost its way' does lead to sleepless nights. (no apostrophe on the its cos it's possession - though I'll probably get shot for pointing that out LOL)

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Steve - I would like to get in touch with you but my mail bounces back. Please drop me an email. x

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Hello Val, thank you for your kind comments about Rod Break.

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I sincerely hope this message is seen by Steven before it disappears as he has.

Thanks for your comment on my profile page Steven. I can understand your feelings very well because i have felt much the same several times. I don't feel as though i'm ''precious'' either whatever that over-used term on this site actually means.
I do feel it's very sad when someone is so hurt by the comments received that they feel they can no longer participate.
Many of the people on here do what they do in good faith to assist another writer. Unfortunately it can seem harsh when the writer might not want to 'hear' what someone else has to say about their work.
I think i'm correct in saying however that any one of them would be horrified to discover they have upset someone to the point of leaving the website.
I will be sorry to see you go because anything we ever write is of some value to someone else, regardless of the quality and quantity.

Best wishes to you and hope you change your mind.
Janet.x

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Thanks Marianne, glad you liked it.
Bernie

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Thanks Janet.
Bernie

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