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Russell Jacklin

Sun 17th Jul 2022 19:07

Thank you Stephen

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raypool

Sun 17th Jul 2022 17:26

The reservoirs were running dry, but today it's our patience it seems! I was working in a club in Watford , no air con and I remember it being 100 degrees in there. The chicken in a basket didn't help. A nice political twist to it....

Ray

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 17th Jul 2022 17:20

A sensuous poem, Adam. Atmospheric.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 17th Jul 2022 17:17

Thanks for this, Greg. It made me think of the Oval in August, with the outfield burned to a crisp and the West Indies racking up nearly 700.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 17th Jul 2022 17:14

A brave opinion, but a minority one, I suspect, Hugh. (Or tongue-in-cheek?)

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 17th Jul 2022 17:02

Thanks for these observations, MC. Yes, it's true that not all celebrities and politicians disappoint. Many of them behave impeccably in public. Pleased to hear you had all these good experiences.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 17th Jul 2022 16:55

Thank you for kind comment, Adam. I suppose this poem is ironic, in the sense that the invaders claim it is not war but a special military operation (an even fancier name for the same thing).
I have an innate suspicion of all things military, with the uniforms and culture of forced obediance. When combined with cowardly initiatives, such as long-range bombing of schools and shopping centres, it is too much.
The territory of Ukraine has been violated and its people have a right to defend themselves. But I want this war to be over as soon as a just solution is available.

And my thanks as ever to Frederick, Tom, KJ, Holden, Clare, Hugh and K Lynn for liking this.

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Adam Whitworth

Sun 17th Jul 2022 13:05

I've never quite understood the personality cult that surrounds a leader. Surely the KKK or the Hitler Youth just carry on with a changed leader, why should I consider my opinion on the outfit?

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Adam Whitworth

Sun 17th Jul 2022 13:00

Very well done.

It's so hard to take an alternative stance on these issues, even when everyone must sometime.

Negative comments about our boys and 'help for heroes' don't go down well while any kind of jingoism and supposedly patriotic jazz comes in a constant stream.

You've managed to say your piece in a way that I suspect won't upset too many wonderful people. Congrats.

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 17th Jul 2022 10:00

Love this! Where was Greta back then?
I’m waiting for a ‘Minister for the Bleeding Obvious’.
Whatever will the young ‘uns do when us lucky boomers have died out?

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Sun 17th Jul 2022 04:38

Really enjoyed this Tom. I particularly like ~
'While the poplars trees
sway their shadows
on the ceiling above'

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Holden Moncrieff

Sun 17th Jul 2022 00:47

A truly powerful poem, John! "If only I'll sell him the right to the light" is such a brilliant and profound line! 🌷

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Holden Moncrieff

Sun 17th Jul 2022 00:37

Thank you so much, John, your kind comment really means a lot! 😎

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 16th Jul 2022 17:21

A cleverly constructed, entertaining poem, Russell.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 16th Jul 2022 17:18

A beautiful poem, Tom.

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raypool

Sat 16th Jul 2022 16:50

Clever and very thoughtful as always Tom, to have imbued a fly with some dignity in a way and to slightly compromise the human condition into such compartments. Reverse roles.

Ray

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 16th Jul 2022 16:27

My main complaint is the mediocrity that has now become today's excellence. We praise the mundane and the not so good,
as if somehow it makes up for what we know we are failing to
achieve nowadays. But there is hope in the small courtesies
that can be met in our daily lives, even if they do not appear to
be practised or promoted by some - notably the politically
employed - in our public services. It's more of the "me...me"
standards that prevail for too many in those jobs...when they
should be about "you...you".- or at the very least - "us...us".

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Telboy

Sat 16th Jul 2022 16:00

Welcome back Julie to the cost of living crisis.

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Russell Jacklin

Sat 16th Jul 2022 13:39

enjoyed the match for the same reasons

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Russell Jacklin

Sat 16th Jul 2022 13:37

got the image, I will reconsider mine and a fly's life

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Tom Harding

Sat 16th Jul 2022 12:30

Very much enjoyed this Greg

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John Botterill

Sat 16th Jul 2022 08:31

Fascinating, Greg! I suspect Carol Ann is a Scotland fan and I love her referencing the 'wally with the brolly.'
Great stuff! 😀

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John Botterill

Sat 16th Jul 2022 08:21

You are right, Keith. Times have changed and not, necessarily, for the better.

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John Botterill

Sat 16th Jul 2022 08:10

A brilliant synopsis of modern life and its values, Holden. Very cleverly expressed. As ever!. 😎

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John Botterill

Sat 16th Jul 2022 08:04

Gave me pause fot thought, Stephen!

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Greg Freeman

Sat 16th Jul 2022 06:56

Gratitude for your comments, Steve, and thanks for the Likes, Frederick, Stephen, and Holden.

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Holden Moncrieff

Sat 16th Jul 2022 03:30

Thank you so much for your kind comment, Stephen, I'm truly grateful! 😊

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sat 16th Jul 2022 00:43

Hiya Nigel Thanks for sending in the audio of 'who's knocking at the door' I really enjoyed it and it was fab that you read it ☺ I emailed your son about it instead of you by mistake. I was away and needed to reformat your audio file.

Anyway we'll broadcast it this Sunday on Allfm.org after 3pm 🎉

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John Coopey

Fri 15th Jul 2022 19:28

“Trussed up”, Stephen? I think there’s a rather niche website that caters for that sort of stuff.
And thanks for the Likes, Frederick, Stephen A and Holden.

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julie callaghan

Fri 15th Jul 2022 19:18

Thanks for the likes and comments for this silly write. I prescribe a new pair of trainers and increasing your steps per day Stephen A. 😁🌈

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Mike Bartram

Fri 15th Jul 2022 18:03

Thank you for reading and the supportive comments, very much appreciated.

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 15th Jul 2022 17:53

There's far too many cardboard cutouts kicking about, Holden! Wonderful stuff, as usual.

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 15th Jul 2022 17:47

Excellent, Mike. And true! 😭

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 15th Jul 2022 17:39

I've got this, Julie! Is there a cure?
😄

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 15th Jul 2022 17:25

Great finish, Julie! Could be one for 'I'm sorry, I haven't a clue.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 15th Jul 2022 17:22

Grim but ultimately truthful, Stephen. Thanks.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 15th Jul 2022 17:18

One of your best,John. Concisely chilling and heart warming at the same time.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 15th Jul 2022 17:15

I enjoyed reading this again, Greg, and apart from the celebrity angle of CAD, it made me think of Fabio Capello, a fish out of water who almost achieved greatnesss with England. I remember him celebrating the equaliser until he realised it had not been given.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 15th Jul 2022 17:03

I've had some interesting variations in connecting with notable
names over the years and have known colleagues with their
own experiences. I have always been impressed by the percentage of those who "measure up". Bryan Forbes, the celebrated film-director/scriptwriter; Jeremy Irons - another
famous name in that busy industry. Both took the time and
trouble to respond at length to my uninvited correspondence.
Denis Compton, the great sportsman of yesteryear who used a
local pub and responded to my in absentia request (e.g. via
the personable bar manager who ran a great pub) to sign
my second-hand copy of the great man's autobiography..
The almost immediate responses from senior Royalty's
representatives and their gratifying grasp of the rudimentary
rules of polite social etiquette. The failings of the likes of
Lord Brown (arrested for drunk driving by a non-nonsense
colleague) and another Lord (Wilson's security supremo)
after he crossed the path of a night duty patrol car driver who
feared no one and no reputation....and ended up in court as a result...with the magistrate finding against him. Other names
stir through my memory over those busy decades that closed
the 20th century here in London. People can impress and
people can disappoint. The former
are even now recalled with pleasure and respect.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 15th Jul 2022 17:02

All political careers end in failure, John. I know mine did. (Voted down in a bid to become my local party's ward treasurer about a thousand years ago). But to think of being ' trussed' up like that....no, you're quite right.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 15th Jul 2022 16:55

I'm prepared to give it a go, John, at least for 15 minutes.

And thanks to Nigel, Frederick, Keith, Stephen, Rudyard and Holden for the likes.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 15th Jul 2022 16:39

I think the "red tabs" (general staff well behind the lines) were
the real objects of that derision, not the officers in the field who
kept up their men's morale and led them "over the top". to what
they themselves must have known was certain (or as near as dammit!) death.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 15th Jul 2022 16:34

I agree about the human propensity for cruelty but not totally
with Mark Twain. There are many examples of animals
attacking each other without obvious cause - and many
examples of humans stepping in to save animals from themselves or from some helpless situation that, without
human intervention, would otherwise have tragic consequences.

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John Coopey

Fri 15th Jul 2022 16:33

Good point, MC. Even in the First World War, I believe deaths and casualties among officers was higher than the ranks, confounding the seductive myth of “lions led by donkeys”.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 15th Jul 2022 16:24

Better put that thought alongside the one that remembers
how those who sought overwhelming power over others were
not averse to leading their troops into battle themselves - willing
to risk all, including their own lives, for the prize they sought.
Warwick the Kingmaker was one such example.

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Nigel Astell

Fri 15th Jul 2022 13:21

1 9 2 Alien transporter
bus passengers abducted
next stop Mars
Red Planet Cafe
I don't care
says Slack Alice
swollen lips crave
somewhat different diet.

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Greg Freeman

Fri 15th Jul 2022 09:16

I first posted this here many years ago, but I'm re-posting it in response to an idea about 'celebrity' poetry by John Botterill, prompted by a poem by Stephen Gospage. I'm not sure that poets count as 'celebrities', but anyway ... The picture shows my two walking weekend companions getting their books signed by the poet laureate after her festival reading that night. And obligatory plug ... this poem is included in my collection Marples Must Go!, published by Dempsey & Windle last year

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Greg Freeman

Fri 15th Jul 2022 08:39

John, don't get me started! I've certainly got one or two of those. Well, famous poets, anyway ...

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John Botterill

Fri 15th Jul 2022 08:14

Stephen. Do you think we should have a famous people/ celebrity poetry challenge? Whaddya think?😂

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julie callaghan

Fri 15th Jul 2022 07:30

Love this.

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