Feeling inspired by flowers ....
Eager to rise
Searching for sun
Spiriling vines
Quick to hold on
Striking a pose
To soak up the rain
Then onwards
And upwards
She's moving again
Queen of the climbers
Flowers free flowing
Her petals define her
She'll never
Stop growing
Uilleam thanks for reading,really appreciate it. Happy Gardening!
Thank you so much Stephen, It means a lot to me that you understood exactly what I was aim to do with the rhythm expressing the essence of a climb!
Congratulations Ruth; they're pernicketty things, and ours has gone on strike!😕
You use rhythm and rhyme expertly to create the sensation of growth and climbing, Ruth. A fine poem.
Thank you so much John Botterill hope your next volume of poetry is shaping up nicely 🙏
Ha ha Well John 'Mr One track Mind Coopey' you definitely need new reading glasses 😆😆😆
Oooo John you are awful!!!
Personally, I’ve never been able to find it, Ruth!
The clematis sounds just like your good self, Ruth. Beautiful poem! 😊
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John Botterill
Sun 2nd Jul 2023 10:36
Yes, thank you, Ruth. It's coming along nicely I would say. Away with Words! 😂