thanks for the comment on space ,
solar plexus , i was pleased when i realised i could call the chakra that :)

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la fee verte . thanks for the comments on my poem space ... do you think , do you think , do you think , hop hop hop i might win :)

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Love it. It's Autumn y'know - you might turn orange and gold

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You don't mention snow, but I feel it in the fields. There is warmth here amid the sorrow. The title makes me think of Robert Frost

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Why thank you ;D

It's actually a Lush one - Mask of Magnaminty. Extremely WHOOF! Powerful stuff hehe. A scrub AND a facemask in one *cool*

You listened to Neutral Milk yet then? Would be interested to hear what you make of it :)

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Why thank you both ;D

It's actually a Lush one - Mask of Magnaminty. Extremely WHOOF! Powerful stuff hehe. A scrub AND a facemask in one *cool*

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Jenet... I'm going for Avacado suprise!

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That's a beautiful shade of green on your face here. Is it a jade healing face mask? :-)

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It's lovely, Carole. I like the play on 'solar', very clever thought.

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This is fabulous. The opening question is a real hook that just swallows the readers in, and then your following lines make them lick lips with sheer pleasure. In addition to the fine comments already here, the run-over from stanza to stanza gives the poem forward energy too. IMO, this is top class.

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Thankou for your comment Cate. I knew you would get it and empathise. LOve Yolande.

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oooh dear... are you ok? look a bit green round the gills! Win ;-)

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Thankou for your comment Cate. I knew you would get it and empathise. LOve Yolande.

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Hi, Ann. I truly meant to contact you yesterday, but I got caught up in my oldest grandson's sixteenth birthday preparations - it IS a milestone! I don't know exactly where you live in Cornwall. I was thinking of you especially just in case you were in the flood zone.

How do you get on 'voice' for reading?

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Once again Ray a choice of language that appears deliberate with its smooth sounding phonology and that's before you get to the sentiment and meaning contained within each stanza. Good stuff, indeed.

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Very clever Dave. You`ve missed out a rather notorious "w" which would have gone rather well with your first line. lol
Cate xx

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No, afraid Susan Wicks is no relation even though she has grey hair.

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A very thoughtful piece of writing Yolande. Your`re so right that we all wear masks and sometimes when we think we can see behind someone`s who is close to us, there is another one firmly in place and we are not seeing the truth.
It`s a very special person indeed that we reveal our inner self to!!
Cate xx

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Yes, I see why, and I am officially a complete berk, as I totally missed it first time around! DESPITE having done the same bloody thing with my own pome! Jesus I can be reet thick sometimes :D

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Good morning Elaine-very appreciative of your comments on 'Trials of..'and agree with your views.Sincerly hope you are in better health now than the opposite being mentioned in your earlier biography-thank you-Stefan.

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Blissful...mmm. Another insomniac here...agree with Darren, this could almost be used as a sleep aide!

Lovely :)

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Wow. Hugely evocative - I could almost feel the heat in the air. I found that second verse/stanza/thing really sensual and erotic - as it is supposed to be really. Really like the story-like quality to it. Sad note to end on.

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The more I read this the more I find myself relaxing. It has a 'meditational' feel and quality about it. :^)

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Really enjoyed this poem, Ray, and its Rabelaisian glow. I hope it doesn't mark me down as a dirty old man to say the lines I liked best were "How at night we poured /ourselves into each other / to the rhythm of crickets."

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Hi Anne
Thanks for your comment on my poem. I too am returning to the poetry scene after a period of absence and am catching up again.
Regards Yolande

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Thankyou for your comment Dave. We do all have masked front in place and you have gone straight to the heart of the matter in that only certain people i.e extensions of trust, are allowed behind the mask.
Regards Yolande

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Thankyou for your comment Dave. We do all have masked front in place and you have gone straight to the heart of the matter in that only certain people i.e extensions of trust, are allowed behind the mask.
Regards Yolande

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Beautiful poem.

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Hey! I just spotted this cos I was reading your latest poem, I wasn't on WOL when this one appeared. I think it's utterly fab! And I agree it would be great as a performance piece too. x

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Thanks for commenting on my space poem. Very much appreciated.x

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Thanks Andy for commenting on my space effort. Much appreciated.x

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Thanks for commenting on my space poem. If I added another line it would have to begin with the letter S or D. Otherwise my capital letters at the beginning of each wouldn't spell 'space' :-)
Get it? xx

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Thanks for commenting on my Space poem. Very much appreciated.x

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Thanks for comments everyone :-)

Laura - if I added a sixth line it would have to begin with either the letter S or the letter D to keep within the theme. Can you see why now? :-)

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Lovely, Ann. Like Janet, I too would love to have the words also to savour and enjoy in a different way. x

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No worries Elaine. What I'd have said was you do seem to be good at picking up on obscure things in other people's poems. Thanks again

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I think perhaps "still" at the start of the final line of verse 1, when read out, gives emphasis to the sense of stillness. It is a deeply sad poem but so very, well, yes, as Cynthia says, haunting. I also like the line "the march of long men".

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Dave, sorry for the mistaken "decline" - hope you got the message. Never used it before. Still getting used to the site. The other day I found I had accidentally excluded some people -doh!

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If only - being at times an insomniac, this would indeed be blissful! You conjure this moment up so well.

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I like this a lot Yolande. Masks are intriguing. The idea of progression through the day works well. The repetition of 'trust' in the last 3 verses stands out too. Key isn't it. I guess we'll have WOL masks and open mic masks and goodness knows what

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Thinking about what you might be saying here - is mankind trying to unify through the net but, as in god's response to the Tower of Babel, because it is questionable as to the purpose or wisdom behind it, is doomed to failure? Very loaded title I felt.

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Yes, Dave, you are right it was a long shot but hey why not? It was simply the caverns reference that had me thinking of the Kubla Khan caverns!! Glad you lked the "On the nature of.." Wondered if it was a bit too much on the gloomy side but then I do love a good wallow! Is your similarish poem on your blog? I'll check it out now - I hope it is. Thanks for your support.

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Andy, many thanks for your supportive comments on "Post Past". I must look into the world of publishing and comps...! x

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Many thanks Cynthia re: your encouraging comments on "Post Past". Lovely to hear from you.

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Thanks for your support of mi brackets in Post Past! Glad you enjoyed it. x

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Very atmospheric.

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I think I have already explained. Rzhishevska is my surname . So, I've decided to call my funny short poems not 'limericks' but 'rzhepicks'. Isn't it nice?

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Sorry Dave - with all those W's I just couldn't help it. I'm not the only one drifting off-subject here though, M'Lud...

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win win situation. Win

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Um, actually this wasn't about WOL or WOLites at all but according to reception theory in which I've now been instructed (thank you) it's what people receive that matters.
The fact that it was written about the World Wide Web is neither here nor there.

Banksy's comments are getting more and more enigmatic. How did Michael Palin aka Pilate get in here?

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