space
I welcome sleep
slipping away
diminishing
as worlds expand
In this breath
I am connected
By solar plexus
In this blissful moment
I am the universe
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I think this is really lovely, Carole. I have a slight preference for the second version except that I would include the word "blissful" from the first.
This is lovely Carole - it's hard to choose between the two - I do like the blissful moment of the first though - that moment of drifting off to sleep IS blissful. I'm a bit of an insomniac too so can appreciate this. A lovely conclusion - it does make you wonder why we all fear death so - nothing harder than life sometimes.
I like them both equally, have to say. Also have to say that I think you should get up and read one of these at the next wol - do it, do it, do it
Second one - is beautiful
Cx
I agree with Darren... Very mystical... Lovely photo as well.
Carole is on a roll...
Heyho Carole....
Got me with this... wonderful wonderful... kissable piece....as indeed you are .... and what is more it's time for muh big coat to come out....
Well done superb.
Gus xx
It's lovely, Carole. I like the play on 'solar', very clever thought.
Blissful...mmm. Another insomniac here...agree with Darren, this could almost be used as a sleep aide!
Lovely :)
darren thomas
Thu 18th Nov 2010 09:43
The more I read this the more I find myself relaxing. It has a 'meditational' feel and quality about it. :^)
If only - being at times an insomniac, this would indeed be blissful! You conjure this moment up so well.
Oooo - lovely!
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shoeless
Sat 20th Nov 2010 23:22
yes i prefer it with blissful still in , but i like to try folks' ideas out