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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Mon 14th Jun 2021 18:55

Don't stay away too long or we will draw a moustache on your profile picture.. There, you'll have to come back now to find out whether we did that, won't you?... Don't think we won't... where there's a Will there's a way, and I'm pretty sure there's at least one Will on WOL, (call me Will if there isn't)

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Laura Taylor

Mon 14th Jun 2021 12:36

Yes, they really do! Cheers Trev ?

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d.knape

Sun 13th Jun 2021 02:35

I am the Poster Child
for Posts!
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Emer Ni Chorra

Sat 12th Jun 2021 21:04

Hi Rasa, thank you for stopping by and taking the time to read my poetry. Lost was written while I was grieving for my Father.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 12th Jun 2021 17:49

It certainly does need nationalising, Laura.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 12th Jun 2021 17:42

Thanks for all the kind comments. I'll do my best to keep things going. Enjoying your writing, as always.

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d.knape

Sat 12th Jun 2021 10:19

thanks for your comments on "Staying Home".

(your photo is a bit blurry, or is it just my eyes.)

Do you have a new cote?

?

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Dawson

Sat 12th Jun 2021 07:02

shrek shräk shrunk shreek
your poetry is quite unique

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Scattered Sun

Sat 12th Jun 2021 03:53

Hi Michelle! Thank you for taking the time to comment on my recent post. I truly appreciate the feedback!

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d.knape

Fri 11th Jun 2021 13:46

you have a very good imagination Stephen
otherwise you could not write poetry.
just keep it up.
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shrek

Thu 10th Jun 2021 12:16

Shreekius shreekus sumus.

- Julius Shraeker

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Laura Taylor

Thu 10th Jun 2021 11:01

Hello lovely man, how are you? I hope you're managing to keep your chin above water after the longest hardest winter I've ever known.

Much love to you, thanks for dropping by and taking the time to read and comment ? x

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Laura Taylor

Thu 10th Jun 2021 11:00

Thanks very much, Stephen, for taking the time to read and comment on Care. Have tinkered with it a bit now. The industry is a real disgrace eh? It needs nationalising, now.

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Laura Taylor

Thu 10th Jun 2021 10:59

Thanks muchly, Stephen, for taking the time to read and comment on Care. Have tinkered with it a bit now. The industry is a real disgrace eh? It needs nationalising, now.

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Rasa Kabaila

Wed 9th Jun 2021 02:08

Your poems are beautiful Emer, thank you. You elicit such rich emotion. I'd love to learn more about the inspiration for your 'Lost' if you are happy to share. ?
Keep writing.

Best wishes,
Rasa

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Ghazala lari

Fri 4th Jun 2021 15:15

Thank you for reading the poem and sharing your sincere feelings?

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Ghazala lari

Fri 4th Jun 2021 15:14

Thank you for reading the poem. I'm glad atleast someone liked a spirituality poem. Thanx?

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Ghazala lari

Fri 4th Jun 2021 15:12

Good evening Nazia?

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Ghazala lari

Fri 4th Jun 2021 15:12

Thank you for reading the poem and leaving the comment. I'm glad you liked it?

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d.knape

Fri 4th Jun 2021 11:45

aw thanks
reader of my poems
I appreciate you
always reading them
no matter how painful
that may be
thanks for the Assist on
Unassisted Living.
?

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Your Royal Poetess

Wed 2nd Jun 2021 18:24

Thank you for your comment on my poem ?

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Wed 2nd Jun 2021 12:39

Thanks for responding. All well here, where I reside. Which moon man are you talking about? A man with tail? Hehehe?

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d.knape

Mon 31st May 2021 21:44

Awwww, thanks Aviva!
You're Sumpin too!

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Tom

Sun 30th May 2021 22:59

Hi Rasa, thanks for reading 'Why Poems?' and for your kind comments about it. It popped straight out after reading this entry by our WoL comrade Vautaw:

https://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=96591

I've enjoyed many of your poems so far, it's great to have you here and I always keep an eye out for your work. ? Tom

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d.knape

Sat 29th May 2021 23:29

kindness
is catching,
to say it
out loud.
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Rasa Kabaila

Sat 29th May 2021 06:24

Hello Tom, I love your prose 'Why poems'. These lines in your poem in particular touch my heart and resonate with me deeply:

'Poems are my expression
the sum of interactions
they show my working out
Poems are the breath
of lost lovers
against my neck'

Beautiful. Thank you.
Best wishes,
Rasa

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d.knape

Sat 29th May 2021 04:33

YOU are well known.
i am known badly.
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Stephen Gospage

Fri 28th May 2021 17:51

Ok, I'll watch my back. To be honest, I didn't know I had one (reputation, that is).?

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Fri 28th May 2021 05:00

Thanks for the praise!!

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Shehariah

Fri 28th May 2021 04:27

Vautaw, thank you, friend. It's comforting to know there are those who understand.

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Shehariah

Fri 28th May 2021 04:26

Flavia, thank you for tour kind words. I am going to read the two poems you mentioned. I trust that all I have endured will be used for good to reach those who have known suffering and turmoil. If my words can help bring hope and healing to others then it was worth it. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading my work. ☺️

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d.knape

Thu 27th May 2021 13:16

If you keep reading my poems
it will ruin your reputation!
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Ghazala lari

Wed 26th May 2021 09:14

Thank you Keith. Little people should be added in the poem as well. I'll do that ?

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d.knape

Wed 26th May 2021 00:43

"dawn's early light"!
words from our anthem
the Star Spangled Banner,
(don't you just love that phrase,
The "Star Spangled Banner"
great words for what WAS
a great country.

Thanks for reading my poem.
No charge for you.
I am an amateur also.
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Stephen Gospage

Sun 23rd May 2021 21:49

Hi Greg

I didn't want to air the Brexit debate on the poetry blog, but I do agree that Brexit has lost the UK some friends in Europe. The recent treatment of some EU nationals at the UK border (detention centres etc) has been shameful and things like this, almost imperceptibly, have an impact.

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Sun 23rd May 2021 17:15

I wish nicola had a nickelodeon,
Wish you were here to chat too , mind you you never are quiet , only when asleep I bet x

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John Coopey

Sun 23rd May 2021 00:29

Thankyou for your kind thoughts on my Profile page poem, "Ikea", Rasa. You'll no doubt realise it is straight copy of Dusty Springfield's. I don't think the Profile page has audio but if you would really like to hear how appalling my voice is:-
https://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=29018

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 22nd May 2021 17:32

Dear Rasa

Thanks for your kind comments about my poems. Yes, I suppose "Memory Tax" is a little dark. It's a subject which interests me. In spite of the digitalisation of archives and data bases, I sometimes feel that there is a collective or institutional memory (perhaps just in the form of story-telling) which needs to be nurtured and which is in danger of being lost.

It was a pleasure to discover your fascinating profile. You seem to pack a lot into your life! I always look forward to seeing a new poem of yours on the blog. I don't necessarily check in every day but I will keep an eye out.

All the best

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 22nd May 2021 17:19

Thank you for your message, Begum. You are welcome. I am enjoying your poetry.

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d.knape

Sat 22nd May 2021 13:07

Excuse me pleasel, you were deceived
do Not make Sandwiches in trees,
for you may fall 'tween limbs and leaves
your memory forever grieved!
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Rasa Kabaila

Sat 22nd May 2021 06:18

John! Your poem 'Ikea' made me laugh our loud and I'm still smiling after reading it! Gosh we can all relate to that poem in our domestic lives. Thank you for this. ?

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Rasa Kabaila

Sat 22nd May 2021 06:15

I love your poem M.C Newberry 'Thoughts at Christmas' —so earnest and sincere. Thank you.

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Rasa Kabaila

Sat 22nd May 2021 06:09

Beautiful poems Stephen. I particularly enjoy 'Memory Tax' —it is honest and witty but also a little dark— a bit 'Dark Mirror' esque. Well done on all your publications. ?

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Your Royal Poetess

Fri 21st May 2021 23:23

In response to your comment, this quote has been one that really resonated with me:

“We are not minorities, we have been minoritized. We are not underrepresented, we have been historically excluded. “ - Janel Cubbage

I would never consider you a minority! I believe that many have been marginalised due to prejudices but that word doesn’t sit right with me at all, it makes me think something is less than... keep fighting against the inequalities and spreading awareness through your poetry ☺️

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keith jeffries

Fri 21st May 2021 19:51

Thank you for commenting on my poem Another Condition. It is only when one belongs to a minority that one really and truly experiences the full brunt of prejudice. I am Gay but stand along side others who are oppressed and discriminated against because of colour, religion, ethnicity of nationality. Free Palestine!
Thank you again

Keith

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Begum BURAK

Fri 21st May 2021 19:02

thanks?

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Begum BURAK

Fri 21st May 2021 19:01

thanks ?

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Your Royal Poetess

Fri 21st May 2021 14:37

Thank you for your kind comment on my recent poem. It was also lovely to read through your poems!

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d.knape

Thu 20th May 2021 15:43

like your response to Condensed Poem.
makes good rhyme
and sense!

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Ghazala lari

Wed 19th May 2021 13:46

I see no end to unbreakable cyclic routes that's been tread upon. A 360 degree run from the spot we begun. A loop without any loophole. Only an entrance without exit to a better land. Feel heaven in hell else it will be an intolerable stay. No way out. Stuck at dead ends.
Thanks for reading the poem.

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