Cheers for your comment Richard.
Haha well the book is a long way off yet, it is one chapter and a notebook full of notes!
But we must perservere I guess.
I love The Poet and his Muse. Please post a clip of you reading it!

Comment is about Richard Brooks (poet profile)

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Hi Graham, thank you for the comment.
I love "A Forgotten Day" - great choice of imagery, and just good fun as a poem! Love it!
Keep on truckin'
Rob

Comment is about Graham Eccles (poet profile)

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The One-Eyed Fool made me giggle, and In An Asylum is fantastic. You manage to reference the occult in a meaningful, non-pop culture format, and it is a real breath of fresh air.

Comment is about Julie Boyle (poet profile)

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Hi, Jeff. Thank you so much for your comment on my poem, Fine Line.

I love your poetry and look forward to reading it. :)

Take care.

Melissa

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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You are very generous indeed with your praise, but all I really achieved was to bring the two sides together and get them to start talking and listening to each other rather than bombing each other, eventually bringing peace and stability to the region; so my role was really quite minor. Nonetheless, it remains a very poignant poem to this day.

Comment is about Dermot Glennon (poet profile)

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In the annals of recorded poetry I can't think of any poet better than you, you are (to quote another great poet) simply the best!

Comment is about Dermot Glennon (poet profile)

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Thanks Paul, and I know what you mean about the imagery - reading that one back I almost get the feeling that I'm actually there and that I can practically taste those chickens!

Comment is about Dermot Glennon (poet profile)

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What an absolutely marvellous poet you are DM! Your imagery is breath-taking, you scan with the best and your rhyme is sublime.
;)

Comment is about Dermot Glennon (poet profile)

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At least you can read your writing. Good range and variety of well written poem.

Comment is about Neil Francis Brooks (poet profile)

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Hi mate, thaniks for your kind comments, glad I brought a smile to your face. Unfortunately I am better at sharing my words than my nubile asians so you'll have to find your own. I really like 'I know You're There' by the way. Cheers, a

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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Its lovely to see someone having so much fun with rhyme. Beautiful stuff. Daisy Chain Summer especially.

Comment is about Louise Fazackerley (poet profile)

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*fun*

Comment is about alex iamb (poet profile)

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i like your intelligent-yet-smutty vibe going on. and all the wordplay is fun to read. yes, wordplay is my idea of un :-)

Comment is about alex iamb (poet profile)

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Alison, when will you put new stuff up? I all love these, but speshly Loss on Paper. I want to read more of your words! :-)

sally

Comment is about Alison Mary Dunn (poet profile)

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ah, wow. i like your work. i'm happy in your cooking story and ashamed of myself with your chicken poem. may have to come along to one of your events :-)

Comment is about Dominic Berry (poet profile)

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Cheers. Viva 2008, hope everyone has a great year!

Comment is about Duffy (poet profile)

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Hi Richard,
Sorry about the misinterpretation of your poem.
I read it 3 times and got the same feeling each time. It was as if he enjoys the silence of being alone but she simply feels lonely.
The bereft feeling i got was whenever he was about to leave.
I've just read it again and felt the same. Perhaps it's the punctuation or the way it's laid out on the page, but i'm certainly not the one to ask how it would read any differently.
Maybe other poets would see what is intended. But that's the beauty of good poetry. Each person who reads it will "see" something different, depending on how it relates to them.
Love Janet.x

Comment is about Richard Brooks (poet profile)

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thanks for the comments Jeff, I guess I had writers block of some kind, need to start writing films again for when I return to uni so been trying to turn to this writing more and been reading and stuff. I'll catch up on your poems soon, what adverts are these? Take care

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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Hi Richard, how's it going? What you been up to, not heard from you for a while?

Did you see my poems for July. The last one, about the man in the moon, was for my daughter, but the other two are very deep, the first one 'When will it pass' is personal.

Appreciate your thoughts if you haven't seen them, cheers Jeff

Comment is about Richard Brooks (poet profile)

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What can i say, you make my words look lame, and my face look ugly. never thought i'd find a more handsome and talented man than myself.

keep up the goodness.

Comment is about Dominic Berry (poet profile)

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Hi there,
I always hated the Beatles as a youngster. Got really pissed off when they were always number 1 in the charts.

" If i was," is brilliant. Love it.
Janet.x

Comment is about Clare Kirwan (poet profile)

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Hi Alison, don't know why but i keep on wondering why we haven't seen anything from you recently.
Hope you haven't give up writing.
And i sincerely hope you are keeping well.
Love Janet.xx

ps. please don't feel pressured, it's just genuine caring for a great poet.

Comment is about Alison Mary Dunn (poet profile)

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Kissing is an interview is wonderful! I am sure I have heard you perform that and I liked it then, but on paper I like it even more

Comment is about Mia Darlone (poet profile)

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Didn't know you were on here Kylyra, but of great to see you here.. I don't think you need to know how good I think your stuff is, but it's excellent of course!

Comment is about Kylyra Ameringer (poet profile)

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Great poem, Derek as I told you on LSPC reviews a bit back! Hope you are well! Andy N

Comment is about Derek Adams (poet profile)

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Thanks David for the comment.
hope you enjoy my myspace site.
i'm still learning all this, so some are better than others. i'll keep practicing!!!!
thanks
woman

Comment is about David Franks: Walkabouts Verse (poet profile)

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Thanks Mark. Finally got round to getting my profile up there. Your humorous stuff (addiction, symptoms of love and the day the world died) had me tittering away. Lovely dry punning.

Comment is about Sean Kavanagh (poet profile)

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Really nice work Sean

Welcome

Mark

Comment is about Sean Kavanagh (poet profile)

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I hope you see the light, Penny and put your musical skills into English folk, rather than American pop...The Beatles even tried talking with American accents - should we admire them?

Comment is about Penny Broadhurst (poet profile)

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Hi Gemma

It's a pleasure, I'm so happy you like the poem, hope Chris liks it too.

I love the way you perform your work. I'm there in the poem, carried along by your words.

Lynda x

Comment is about Gemma Lees (poet profile)

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Thanks very much for your feedback. I think your poem goes very well with mine, it's so busy sounding, it really gives you the image of people bustling about on a city street. See you next month at Middleton.

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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Hi Gemma, great to meet you briefly last night, really liked the 'Bolton' poem. Enjoyed your performance of it too, thats something I'm just learning at the moment!

Enjoyed my first time and appearance at the Old Boars Head and will be there next time.

Enjoyed reading your work on here, love the 'Blackpool Rock' poem brilliant.

The poem I've got on my profile about watching people that I mentioned is in my samples called 'I know you're there'.

If you have a look at that and any others would appreciate your feedback, cheers see ya soon Jeffarama!

Comment is about Gemma Lees (poet profile)

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Thank you, Jeff. :)

It was her wedding day, and I should've been there. But I hope she will forgive me one day.

Take care. :)

-Melissa

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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Hi, Tomas.

Thank you for your comment. Walls can be our allies, keep the cold hands of life out, or it can be our enemy, keeping life away from us. But no matter what wall we stand behind, everything we are will always be known to the ghosts walking through like in your poem, The Unseen Shadow, which I really liked. :)

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

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Hi Louise, great pieces. You have great rhythm.

Comment is about Louise Fazackerley (poet profile)

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Simon, I have seen and heard you perform your poetry. It's about time we were exposed to it on the page. Fantastic stuff.

Comment is about Simon Ellis (poet profile)

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Hi Tomas

Thank you for your lovely comment on my poem dads ladders. I love the detail of everyday life.

Lynda X

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

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Hi Jeff

Thank you for your lovely commet about my poem swim day. I'm the lucky one. Working with special needs children is the most fun I ever had.

Lynda X

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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Hi Jeff,

I think a lot of us have felt this kind of pain and humiliation; it is how we deal with it that matters. Thanks for a great comment.

Sincerely Shirley

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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My, you're a busy man!
Loved the comparison between red and white wine. I reckon there's room for both in my life.

John Peel. What fantastic memories!
This is funny as it is serious. Great poem, just oozing with imagery.

I love York as a place to visit as well!
Thanks for sharing. Janet.x

Comment is about Andy Humphrey (poet profile)

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Hi Mark,

Great to have some humour. Keep up the good work
Best wishes
Mark

Comment is about Mark Niel (poet profile)

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I don't quite get the chickens, but you're obviously a fantastic poet.

Comment is about Dermot Glennon (poet profile)

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To Carol: I just re-tried and it worked okay...but it's also on myspace if you'd like to use the above link.

Comment is about David Franks: Walkabouts Verse (poet profile)

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Hi Tomas, thank you for your kind comment on my Burma poem.
I liked your web-site, your poetry gives an interesting insight

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

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Hi David, thanks for your kind comment. I have tried to open your adio sample above but its not working on my computer.

Comment is about David Franks: Walkabouts Verse (poet profile)

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Thanks for your comment! Air Cav's actually a psychedelic indie band but I do play folk too.

Comment is about David Franks: Walkabouts Verse (poet profile)

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Dermot - I've just got back from the Howcroft. I'd just like to say that I thought your poem about an 'orchestra' was superb. This performance poetry 'thang' is doing your poetry a world of good. Well done.

Comment is about Dermot Glennon (poet profile)

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Hello, Tomas

Thank you for your comment and information in regard of your poetry site. Any of the languages you mentioned I am not fluent. Do know some vocabulary though,
but that is not enough to be a translator. It is good to hear from you. I like the idea that you are going to write about Egypt, would be interested to red the poems. The subject of an Ancient Culture really fascinates.

Have a great weekend!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

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Hi Jeff,

I had tears in my eyes reading your beautiful comment. Thank you so much

Sincerely Shirley

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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Just enjoyed some of your verses, Carol.

Comment is about Carol Falaki (poet profile)

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