Thanks for taking the time to read "Undecided." I'm glad you liked it.

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This is lovely, I like how although things seem so dark at times, you still hold onto hope, it takes great courage and bravery ....I know :)

Comment is about kaluw (poet profile)

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Thanks!! Looking forward to sharing with others! Please comment on my posts :)

Comment is about Michael Napoli (poet profile)

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Welcome Michael.Nice to have you on board.Enjoy! x

Comment is about Michael Napoli (poet profile)

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Thank you so much Preeti!

Comment is about Clive (poet profile)

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Thanks Jeremy for commenting on Only (?) Human, glad you enjoyed it. I am really loving your poems, a little bit in awe actually :)

Comment is about jeremy young (poet profile)

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Hi Wendy, thank you very much for your comment on Only(?) Human, I really appreciate it x

Comment is about Wendy Higson (poet profile)

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thank you for reading and your lovely comment ! I have read your work. You have a way with words :) I am happy you are self-critical; it keeps you sharp, edgy and hungry

Comment is about Clive (poet profile)

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Hello M.C. Many thanks for your comment on "Violation". I am sorry it has taken me so long to answer, but I thought it best to answer on the poem itself. Your interest is appreciated.

Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)

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thanks for the comment on @ménage A Trois' John - glad you got to see the eclipse - there was a hazy cloud across it here - which made viewing it a little easier from behind the woollen hat pulled down over my eyes - Yorkshire adaptability you see
cheers
Ian

Comment is about John Coopey (poet profile)

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Glad you liked 'Menage A Trois' Harry - thanks for commenting again - much appreciated
Ian

Comment is about Harry O`N eill (poet profile)

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Yes it was the way your poem Shadow sent me thinking of my little Grandson who would have been five years old on the 11th April and the dark shadow it cast over me.

Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)

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Thank you for your welcome and comment Martin.

Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)

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Hey Harry, many thanks regarding your comment on "I'm Dead Inside". To answer the proposition raised in your comment the beauty of the whole process is ironic. Some can the beauty in the self decay and how complex the whole idea is. For me the beauty is born from the retrospective love and relationships that are born from the idea of self loathe; and how those rally around the individual to help deal with the problem. Hope this sheds some light! x

Comment is about Harry O`N eill (poet profile)

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Hi Nigel
wow that last piece you sent me is amazing, it seems like it has a personal note for you. i don't quite know how to follow that.

Comment is about Nigel Astell (poet profile)

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Thanks John. I hope they still do and you don't have to revert to any other substances!

Comment is about John Coopey (poet profile)

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Thank you Jacqueline ! Jacqueline is a lovely name :)

Comment is about Jacqueline Phillips (poet profile)

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Sorry you found 'I dream About Love' too sad. I suppose it is in a way. Here's something about love thats a bit more upbeat:
http://writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=39005

Thanks for looking in,
best wishes,
Steve

Comment is about Jacqueline Phillips (poet profile)

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Yes just a teaspoon to a pint of vodka

Comment is about John Coopey (poet profile)

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Hi Aly, thanks for taking the time to read and leaving a comment on I was young. I really appreciate it. I'll see what I can do about it.

Comment is about Aly Hatcher (poet profile)

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Aly, welcome to Write Out Loud, and I hope you find something of what you're looking for here. We're a poetry site specifically, although you're very welcome to post prose here as well. While I can't offer to critique your work as a whole, I can maybe pass across some advice. This is what I think is important:

1) Read as many other writers as you can. When you like something they do, reflect on it, and try to work out how they did it.
2) Avoid writing about abstract concepts too much. Concentrate on describing particular objects and incidents, and maybe by doing so, they will reveal greater truths.

But if what is most important to you at this time, is simply to express your feelings, then go on doing that. Don't worry about whether it's great literature. The main question is, do you feel better after writing it? Maybe that's the most important thing for you at this time. Hope this is of some help. Greg

Comment is about Aly Hatcher (poet profile)

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Would you mind giving me some feedback on the writing material I have posted? I am of little experience and I wish to have a professional's opinion.

Comment is about Greg Freeman (poet profile)

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thanks for the kind comments on 'wide is the gate...' Harry - nice that you picked up on that 'damned' landscape - because the soul at the centre of the piece is equally damned - with work! cheers again
Ian

Comment is about Harry O`N eill (poet profile)

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thanks for the kind & supportive comments on 'wide is the gate...' Laura. I wrote it for a com petition on unrhymed couplets, so that suggested the form.
I know what you mean about the supernatural, but the example you quote was meant more as a play on 'inner demons' i.e his shadow had more life and energy than his body. cheers
Ian

Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)

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thanks laura for the praise over ghost story ii - prologue 2, really pleased with this also as you may have guessed.

this will be part of napwrimo so let's see if i do this kind of quality over 30 days! lol

but thanks again - means a lot to me you like this xx

Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)

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thanks for the comment over ghost story ii, zach. glad you liked it. hope i can keep this quality up throughout april. big difference writing one a week than one a day but i have some good ideas in mind for it i hope!

P.S. - i will be recording this shortly.

Last year's story (for this this is a sequel can be heard here - https://andyn.bandcamp.com/album/ghost-story-i)

Comment is about Zach Dafoe (poet profile)

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Hi Harry
Glad you enjoyed the 'marathon'. The one thing I hope I can say about it is that it is politically even-handed. They're all a bunch of ********

Comment is about Harry O`N eill (poet profile)

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Thanks Andy for suggestion, I have done it and it works better now! Thank u

Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)

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Oh lord,
you're really too kind. Thank you for reading. :)

I think that being vulnerable is a huge part of all artforms, and most art is humanity clawing its way out. I'm just lucky that words and I have gotten along so far.

writing, like life, can hurt. It can be an uncomfortable admission to yourself and to other people, but usually it's for the better. Steps forward on glass are better than none at all. Or at least that's what I think right now.

Comment is about Jacqueline Phillips (poet profile)

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Hey there Mr Bastard, sorry it has taken me such a while, but I read through you Ray Charles letters and I wanted to mull them over a bit before getting back to you. I think what I love about your poetry is that you truly open yourself up. When I read your poems I feel that it is a little piece of the inside you that you have put on the page which is a brave thing to do. Because of the truth you show I find it easy to empathise and I can relate your words to my own feelings. They work on me in a similar way to the poetry of Allen Ginsberg, which I hope doesn't sound to pretentious, and I very much enjoyed reading them. I hope you will continue to share your work on WOL as I am greatly interested to see how your work develops.

Comment is about Zach Dafoe (poet profile)

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Is the Collage Poem for March in exile? or what!

Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)

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Hello Eleni,
Very impressed with the youtube clip, very original and fine words too.

regards,

Graham

Comment is about Eleni Cay (poet profile)

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Thankyou Brian for your lovely comments Wendy

Comment is about Brian Hodgkinson Jr. (poet profile)

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Thankyou jack lots of memories still to come I hope . My head is full of things I would love to write down ,time will tell Love wendy .

Comment is about Jack purvis (poet profile)

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Why thank you Jack. You're missing nothing, not driving. Bloody M6 - wacky races!

Comment is about Jack purvis (poet profile)

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Ha - cross posting :)

Thanks for y'note on me tree pome :) I was having a bit of a go at Wordsworth's idea that we lose our 'visionary gleam' when we get older. Remember I mentioned it in The Raven that time? Anyway, fuck Wordsworth :D

Comment is about Ian Whiteley (poet profile)

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Good stuff

Comment is about Alaina K (poet profile)

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Thanks for making sure we had a good meeting last night you did a great job and I thought it went very well.

Good luck with the Ghost project loved what you read last night.

Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)

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Thanks for dropping me a comment, Tommy. Had a read through your poems - the cynical tone resonates with me. A nice change of pace from all the usual sorts out there :)

Comment is about Tommy Carroll (poet profile)

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Thanks, I write to emulate a voice for the voiceless as I myself have trouble speaking out.

Comment is about Angelo H. Hudson (poet profile)

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thanks for the comment on 'Dexteram Patris' John - yes I also have that vague feeling of looking at my father in the mirror when I shave - I think it's a universal human gliche

Comment is about John Coopey (poet profile)

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cheers for the kind remarks regarding ' Dexteram Patris' MC - I'm pleased that it resonated with you

Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)

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I like this. I know many people like this. I hope she gets help. You have captured despair so well !
Preeti

Comment is about Angelo H. Hudson (poet profile)

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Many thanks, MC, for your kind thoughts on my Ring of Fire.

Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)

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Thank you so much for reading and your lovely comment!

Comment is about Corr Lens (poet profile)

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Well, I have to say that the 'sitting on it' and the work you've put into it clearly show. It is really well crafted. More of this sort of thing! ;)

Comment is about Ian Whiteley (poet profile)

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Hi Andy, thanks so much for reading and your comment !

Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)

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aye up - thanks for the kind and supportive comments on 'Dexteram Patris' Laura. It's one I've been sitting on and couldn't get the tone quite right - and originally I was concentrating too much on the chair that's set apart - once I got he 'busted' line it clicked into place.
good spot with that full stop - I deliberately spaced those lines like that and then left the chuffing full stop in - aaghhh!
Appreciate your comments as always
Ian

Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)

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thanks so much for your kind comment on 'Dexteram Patris' Jacqueline - much appreciated x

Comment is about Jacqueline Phillips (poet profile)

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thanks very much for the kind comments on 'Dexteram Patris' Gray, pleased that you liked it mate

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