Hey Tia,

I'm a college student (grad student now) in the States too!

Welcome ?

Comment is about Tia Lattanzio (poet profile)

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Great sample...

Comment is about Tia Lattanzio (poet profile)

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There needs to be more bilingual poetry out there such as this.

Comment is about Carla Tombacco (poet profile)

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Welcome to WOL. I like your honesty. You will find many 'sad' poets here to match your current mood. But lots of cheerful and cheering ones too. After a bit, you might actually reconsider only sad poems. Or, at least, not so sad.

Keep writing. Neat little piece under your bio. I had to laugh. You have a good touch with self-humour.

Comment is about Rose Davis (poet profile)

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Tia, welcome to WOL. You sure sound like a kindred soul, age notwithstanding. Writing, travelling, people, music and smiling - in a splendid nutshell. Totally agree.

Cynthia

Comment is about Tia Lattanzio (poet profile)

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Thanks Suki for your encouraging words on "I wish, But."

Happy Reading and Writing,
Ankita ?

Comment is about Suki Spangles (poet profile)

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Keep writing.

Comment is about Trev the Road Poet (poet profile)

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Cool sample.

Comment is about Jenn (poet profile)

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Great sample.

Comment is about William Alderson (poet profile)

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Hi Keith thank you for your complements especially around my dulcet tones, a scouse accent of which i have one, i worry in case it grates, so believe me, im more than flattered around your positive feedback, im glad you have enjoyed, some of my work and i have connected ....phil

Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)

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Hi, Jennifer.

Welcome to WOL. I'm sure you'll enjoy the site. 'Where else can you find ...' is delightful. Made me homesick for Bermuda, the view itself and the creamy texture of your words.

Comment is about Jennifer Malden (poet profile)

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Thanks a ton Cynthia for your kind words on my poetry "I wish.. But". ?

I read your poetry- The parting. It is so beautifully written where all the words are carved in perfect combination of emotions, rhythm.

Happy Writing and Reading,
Ankita

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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Welcome to WOL, Ankita. Poetry, your own and that of others, will be a huge gift inserted into your daily living. You are surely among friends here. We're not famous writers, but, like yourself, most of us are really sincere about the value we place on poetry as a fine means to share 'life'.

Comment is about Ankita Srivastava (poet profile)

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Hello Philip, I have truly enjoyed listening to some of your poems, in particular The Loss & Meet me There. Both your delivery and voice are superb as the reader is so comfortably invited into the scene. Thank you, I look forward to reading or listening to more of your work. Keith

Comment is about Phils Words (poet profile)

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Hi Cynthia,

Yes that's me in the photo. Happy with a G&T and a suntan. I miss the heat already and it's only November! I am off to Santorini in July and already counting the days :) x

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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Hey been awhile since I've posted on here, have not stopped writing tho! Will be uploading new poems very shortly, please stand by.???

Comment is about Myescape (poet profile)

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Widsom!!!!

Comment is about ejbejb (poet profile)

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Hello Jon, thank you for commenting on my latest poem ´Desire´. It is kind of you. Keith

Comment is about Jon Darby (poet profile)

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Hello Wendy, thank you for commenting on my latest poem´Desire´. It is much appreciated. Keith

Comment is about Wendy Higson (poet profile)

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Martin ta... cheers mate x

Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)

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That's so nice that you took the trouble to check my profile, thank you Cynthia. I hope in a small way it fleshes out what i'm generally trying to say on WOL! After a couple of years at this lark I am still surprised by lovely comments and try to offer a spark to other writers. We need to make a daisy chain and dance around poetry after all.

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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No voice is more real than your own, literally or poetically.

(Just did a recheck on your bio. There are so many fine works on WOL, I like to refresh my memory of the actual writers too.)

Comment is about ray pool (poet profile)

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Thank you so much for your comment on my poem The Bound Bird.
I really appreciate what you say.

Hannah

Comment is about mike booth (poet profile)

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Hi Laura, thanks so much for your comment on my poem The Bound Bird.
It was great to hear from you.

Hannah

Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)

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Thank you Ray so much for your comment on my poem The Bound Bird. Really appreciated.

Hannah

Comment is about ray pool (poet profile)

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Many thanks Cynthia, yes I have liked some and sent comments too to other poets. I realise how important it is to get encouragement from others. Thank you for such a nice welcome. Appreciated

Comment is about Rick Varden (poet profile)

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Welcome to WOL, Mr. Varden.

May! and you've written 70 poems already! Good grief. Your brain must be grateful for the release of so many ideas smouldering for so long.

'Truth and Lies' is powerful, like an erratic torpedo. You have a sense of the dramatic.

Please add your own comments on the work of other poets, however short. We all thrive on them. Even the 'LIKE' flower is appreciated.

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talk to me

Comment is about Afrahh (poet profile)

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thanks for commenting on 'Safety Off' Harry - you got it
Ian

Comment is about Harry O`N eill (poet profile)

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That is one lovely photo on your bio. I'm hoping it's you. Re: your bio - like it too. I'm actually both, or was. No! Still am.

Comment is about Helen (poet profile)

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Hi Philip

Thank you for your recent remarks on my page. Weirdly enough, I did a poem in January 2012 with the same title. I'm not gonna blog it but here it is:

WALK TO THE SHOPS

Slip into the sprinkle of a drizzle-filled day
Plastic bag crisp in hand, aiming for the shops
Feet to floor
Pavement pound
Carry on
Past the step
yellow tread
bearing Bulmers: lippy-stained
halfway drained
Pavement decorated in
a strange shade of sick

J’arrive at ‘The Parade’!
The Mean Street of Thatto Heath
Stench of piss and pizza
wraps itself around my mouth
as I kick along the papers
that cradled last night’s chips
Pit-shaved grinning princess,
billboarded, looks down
From within her perma-tan, she oozes
anonymity
Blinding me with bleachy teeth and peachy poreless face

I hope to fuck my DNA does not contain that kind of clean

Feet to floor
Pavement pound
Past the bus stop;
betting shop;
fag shop; tat shop;
takeaway; SALON;
takeaway; TANNING;
takeaway, takeaway;
CHIPPY.
Luckily:
‘health advice for minor conditions’ -
free inside the pharmacy

There’s no water in the fridges of the takeaway shops
And I didn’t want pop. They looked at me weird.
Social pariah, for wanting water.

Feet to floor
Pavement pound
Homeward bound
Past the salon
Chip fat alley
Tan tat fag bet bus
Ministering pharmacist
Past the step
yellow tread
Bulmers gone
Small red shoe there now instead
… wonder who..?
Tiny tatty lone red shoe
Torn too. Wonder if she’s..?
Nearly home
Nearly there
Rid my mouth of piss and murk
Home from hell on earth
a walk to the shops
and a musing or four
And then I recall
I forgot
what?
I went for

Comment is about Phils Words (poet profile)

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Hi Frances,

I'm home in WA at the moment, after seven months (whew!) away but I will be back in the UK early-ish in the New Year. The fact is that I have always hankered after a visit to Ireland, but never quite made it. This gives the perfect final "push" to do just that!

Many thanks,

Chris

Comment is about Chris Hubbard (poet profile)

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Just read walk to the shops on David r mellor
Blog street scene... you got that recorded.. you would drliver it with real verve

Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)

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Hi Chris,
I don't know if you're at home in WA at the moment or visiting UK as you've said you will be doing both regularly.
So I wondered if you find yourself in Ireland or the Cliffs of Moher may I recommend you pop into a lovely little bookshop near there: https://www.facebook.com/TheSalmonBookshopLiteraryCentre/
If you have time and she's in - introduce yourself to Jessie Lendennie who also runs Salmon Poetry: http://www.salmonpoetry.com/about-salmon.php
She's mentioned she'd love to meet more WA poets and please give her my best regards. ?

Comment is about Chris Hubbard (poet profile)

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Hi Philip thanks for taking the time to comment on the Smegroyds. You really wouldn't want them moving in near you.
Cheers Kevin

Comment is about Phils Words (poet profile)

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Cheers Steve for your warning re Wittgenstein
?

Comment is about steve pottinger (poet profile)

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thanks very much for commenting on 'Bait' Karen - glad you liked it - I'm hopeless at visiting WOL site at the moment - so only get to see comments when I come back to post something new - so sincere apologies for delay in responding - I really must make more of an effort to visit and contribute

Comment is about Karen Ankers (poet profile)

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thanks very much for commenting on 'Bait' Martin - glad you liked it - I'm hopeless at visiting WOL site at the moment - so only get to see comments when I come back to post something new - so sincere apologies for delay in responding - I really must make more of an effort to visit and contribute

Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)

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thanks very much for commenting on 'Bait' Ray - glad you liked it - I'm hopeless at visiting WOL site at the moment - so only get to see comments when I come back to post something new - so sincere apologies for delay in responding - I really must make more of an effort to visit and contribute

Comment is about ray pool (poet profile)

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thanks very much for commenting on 'Bait' Desmond - glad you liked it - I'm hopeless at visiting WOL site at the moment - so only get to see comments when I come back to post something new - so sincere apologies for delay in responding - I really must make more of an effort to visit and contribute

Comment is about DESMOND CHILDS (poet profile)

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Hi Cynthia,

I want to thank you again for your positive response to my poems. Your comments on my recent one really made my day, especially the fact that you came back for a second read. I really do appreciate the time you take to offer encouragement on WOL. When I receive a comment from you, I am sure that I have got it right :)

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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These WOL-ers really are a great bunch, very eclectic in interests, background, and ages. I'm really glad you've decided to join. There will always be someone to surprise and stimulate you.

IMO, joining in with comments is hugely rewarding. Or even using the 'Flower Button'.

Comment is about Phils Words (poet profile)

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I appreciate your interest and your comments. I always consider very carefully suggestions from fellow writers. And I have benefitted hugely.

But, in the case of 'The Dreamfooter', I would not now make alterations. It has been twice published and three times presented in spoken poetry 'programmes'.

I often make changes years after first 'writing'. Just not this time.

Thanks much. And, please, never hesitate to challenge anything I write. That is real 'sharing'.

Comment is about John E Marks (poet profile)

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RAj thankyou for your comments I don't think It will happen in my lifetime but let's hope Wendy x

Comment is about Chakraj (poet profile)

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Hello Cynthia. I've read a lot of your poetry tonight. Decided to. I like 'Hurricane' and 'The parting' a lot, pithy, focused, precise - though I'm not a descriptivist myself - but i think 'Dream footer' would benefit from being must less first person. I think it could be a great poem - reworked.



John

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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Hi Steve. Thanks for taking the time to comment on "The Smegroyd's moonlight Flit". It pleased me that you compared it to a music hall ditty, because that's the feeling that I'm aiming for.
Cheers Kevin

Comment is about steve pottinger (poet profile)

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Welcome to Wol, Jana. This site is very generous in outlook.

I really like the sample you have shown on this page. For me, it shows a breadth of understanding and great sincerity. Not everybody can bring deep feelings into words.

Keep writing.

I'm thinking: what does she mean 'pin and pad'? And then it hit me. I'm guessing you mean 'pen and pad'. If I'm right, you might take a moment to fix it. If I'm wrong, I'd love to know what you do mean.

If that is you in the photo, you look quite young. But photos can fool 'big time'.

Comment is about Jana Aston (poet profile)

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Hi Steve Glad you liked my poem 'Cities'.

Comment is about steve pottinger (poet profile)

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Hi Nigel
Thank you for the like on my blog
Andy C

Comment is about Nigel Astell (poet profile)

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Jon, Your poems are rich in nostagia and carefully and thoughtfully crafted. They immediately take me back years to a world long since forgotten. Thank you indeed. Keith

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