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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 27th Oct 2018 17:40

Hi Jon, thank you for reading I Protest...?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 27th Oct 2018 17:39

Hi Becky thanks once again for your lovely comment..?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 27th Oct 2018 17:37

Thank you for commenting on I Protest Don..?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 27th Oct 2018 17:35

Thank you for commenting on I Protest M.C. have a nice evening..?

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Jemima Jones

Sat 27th Oct 2018 12:41

Hi Wendy, have put a little poem of dedication and appreciation for your lovely comments on my poem 'Sundown' Thank you. Jemima.

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Sat 27th Oct 2018 00:46

(re Sorry bone) Thanks Martin, High Praise; I blush?
The words were poured out and while upon reflection I thought it a tad confusing, I then recalled that that is the case with most of my verse.
The photo' was taken by myself. It is of the interior of Liverpool's Tate Gallery. The silhouette is of an unknown (to me ) woman.

Cheers

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Taylor Crowshaw

Fri 26th Oct 2018 20:16

Thank you for the information M.C. I will check him out..T.C.?

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 26th Oct 2018 16:53

Hi TC -
the recording/music for my lyric "Where Do You Go?" was
by Bob Evans who has a number of CD albums to his credit.
You can look him up (Bob Evans Music) online. Over to you.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Fri 26th Oct 2018 07:35

Hi M.C. I just clicked on to 'Where Do You Go' Can I ask did you do the instrumentals for that track? I really enjoyed the lyrics and the instrumentals. Thank you. I have two sons who are musicians and play guitar.
I really enjoyed listening it was very soothing...?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Fri 26th Oct 2018 07:30

Thank you for commenting on ' The Death of Love' M.C. It seems everything revolves around words..too many..too few..too soft..too harsh...inappropriate and on and on it goes. Taylor ?

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Caoimhe June Jane Ryan

Thu 25th Oct 2018 12:36

Hi dknape!
I'm from Ireland, my name is an Irish name.
It is pronounce like 'Qweeva'

I definitely get a lot of attraction with my name. It's unique I suppose haha.

June is my middle name Jane is a name I chose for myself when I had my confirmation.

I guess I could have chose an easier name but what fun would that be haha!

Thanks for your comment?

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d.knape

Wed 24th Oct 2018 21:22

a most unusual name, Caoimhe.
i wish i could pronounce it.
what is the deal?
they could not make up their minds
between Carol and Naomi?
do you live in Wyoming?
and then on top of that....June Jane?

did you make this up?

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d.knape

Tue 23rd Oct 2018 23:11

Read your response and honestly
your rhyme was rightly spun,
All I can say is thank you to
you rhyming son of a gun!

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 23rd Oct 2018 18:43

Hi Damon, thank you for taking the time to read and give likes to some of my work. It is really appreciated. Thank you..?

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Ian Whiteley

Tue 23rd Oct 2018 17:10

Thanks for the comments on 'Blood Brothers In Arms' Jennifer. My dad was in Burma in the 2nd WW and fought alongside the Gurkas - he always said they were the most loyal, hard-working and ferocious fighters that you could wish for. He had a saying 'Good Old Johnny Gurka', I still remember that fondly
Glad you liked the poem
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Tue 23rd Oct 2018 16:41

Thanks for your comments on 'Blood Brothers In Arms' Mark - I think we're on the same page on this one :-)
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Tue 23rd Oct 2018 16:40

Thanks for your insightful comments on 'Blood Brothers In Arms' John - glad you liked it. I'm pleased about your churches stance on symbolism - I think too many people get wound up about symbols when it is the act of remembering human suffering that is the crucial point - and by that I mean ALL human suffering of any race, creed or culture
cheers mate
Ian

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 23rd Oct 2018 13:08

Hello Jennifer - I was interested in your comment about
Brexit elsewhere.
Peace in Europe? Don't forget the violence and death in
Serbia etc - sorted out by NATO, the real preservers of
peace in Europe....whilst the EU likes to pose as such.
I voted to leave because over a long lifetime I was aware
early on that a policy of deceit and want of truth was
being pursued after the original Common Market vote,
aided/abetted by those sent to our own Parliament acting
ultra vires and keeping the actual intentions and progress
(check> Common Market/European Economic Community/
European Community/European Union (NOTE the LAST
political identity) from the British people OR their chance
to vote on what had been/was being done in their name.
The understanding of what was done came only when
the loss of border controls offered the reality of just how
much had been handed to foreign influence and control,
with our own government facing defeat after defeat by
a political entity that had become a federal creation of
recent dictatorships and tyrannies busy putting their own
interests first (and no surprise there), while the more
incompetent and fragile economies saw us as a "milch
cow" for very welcome funds, obtained above and below board!
I recall driving around a pre-EU Europe and faced no
difficulties or impediment. Indeed, the enjoyment was
negotiating borders and complying with the variety of
customs and demands met by this traveller. It was an
ADVENTURE, and returning to this self-governing
offshore island nation was its own reward!
Sincerely,
MC

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 23rd Oct 2018 11:01

Hi Jon, thank you for your lovely comment, on The Death of Love..for me it is about expressing emotion but keeping it real without being overly sentimental..but still trying to reveal the true depth of feeling and the fragility of the human condition. I don't know if that makes any sense..Taylor x

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 22nd Oct 2018 20:11

I love 'The Death of Love'. It is wonderful.

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d.knape

Mon 22nd Oct 2018 01:30


thanks for the comment.
now change that photo.
aren't you tired of
holding that sheep?

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d.knape

Sun 21st Oct 2018 18:14

Yes, there are different
degrees of Homelessness.
Some forced into it.
Some choosing it.
For some, Home is a shopping cart.
For others, it's a page and a pen.

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d.knape

Sun 21st Oct 2018 18:10

SO MUCH YOU

You look so happy in this photo
that smile is so much YOU,
We wonder what just happened
that you could be so moved,
Could it be you inherited money
or did the divorce go through?
Whatever the reason, keep smiling
that smile is so much YOU.


wink.

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d.knape

Sun 21st Oct 2018 18:01

profile?
i did not know
i even HAD
a profile.

that silhouette
IS my profile.

wink.

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d.knape

Sun 21st Oct 2018 17:53

Once is enough
it should suffice
but so much like You
to send it twice.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 21st Oct 2018 15:39

Don, I want to thank you for commenting on 'How' it means a lot as I value your opinion immensely. ?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 21st Oct 2018 15:38

Jon, you remain so supportive to all your fellow poets. It is heartening and I thank you sincerely.. Taylor ?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 21st Oct 2018 15:36

Peter, you always manage to put your comments to us fellow poets so eloquently.
I thank you..?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 21st Oct 2018 15:35

Hi Mike, Thank you for reading and commenting on 'How' it means a lot...?

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Tom

Sun 21st Oct 2018 13:46

Thank you so much for your comment on 'For Jordan'. Much appreciated.

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Tom

Sun 21st Oct 2018 13:45

Thank you so much for your comment on 'For Jordan' ?

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jennifer Malden

Sat 20th Oct 2018 16:18

Hello DK! Love your profile!!! Feel like that myself. About your query - they do eat sardines, but being a pastoral people love mutton!!!!!!!
Also loved Breaking the chain. mixed up the torturers a bit though! Gestapo OK, but waterboarding I think is US technology, and as for tarring and feathering!!!!!! Loved it.

You will be glad to hear I am not competing for POTW at the moment, (Why they awarded it to me stll astonishes me) as I have broken my wrist!!!!!

Keep up the go0d work! Surprised Wolfgar Meire didn't get at you for the anachronisms!!!! Jennifer

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 20th Oct 2018 16:05

Thanks for reading my Saturday contribution Don..?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 20th Oct 2018 16:02

Thank you for reading my Rhymers Club contribution, and commenting on same..always appreciated M.C.?

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Big Sal

Sat 20th Oct 2018 13:29

Awesome way to use your proceeds.?

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Don Matthews

Sat 20th Oct 2018 04:21

My retorts are lighthearted, which you will be aware of by now ?

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elPintor

Sat 20th Oct 2018 03:10

Hello, Mae. It seems like you have quite much to say.

I've enjoyed watching, in silence, your participation here on WoL--from what I've seen, I've no doubt that you have much more to offer.

Rachel

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Big Sal

Sat 20th Oct 2018 01:16

I'm glad you like the piece John, not many people did. As for all the great work you've been posting up, I can only hope you preserve them in some additional way as they are something special and deserve recognition.

Keep on writing my friend, and good health and wishes to you and yours. ?

Be well.?

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LaTosha Wall Rotramel

Fri 19th Oct 2018 20:16

Anya thank you and like wise it's always a blessing to meet and converse with like minded people. I can't wait to read your work as well. ???

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Nigel Astell

Fri 19th Oct 2018 15:56

On a day of rain rain rain and howling winds!
Everyone having to keep dry in the Railway pub - - - next year the sun will be out to shine on you when joining the Write Out Loud Jam!

P.S hope you are better

Nigel x

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d.knape

Fri 19th Oct 2018 12:10

haha. good retort!

we'll prop you up in the corner.


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Caoimhe June Jane Ryan

Thu 18th Oct 2018 19:52

Thanks big Sal! Means a lot ?

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 18th Oct 2018 17:12

Welcome to WOL. Interesting BIO. No indication of country - a world citizen, then.

Ah - the cranial thrust of Doctor Seuss and times tables! Totally agree. Are you watching the World of Mathematics currently being aired in the UK?

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Big Sal

Thu 18th Oct 2018 14:32

I love the last stanza of your sample.
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Thu 18th Oct 2018 06:44

Thank You Jon!
I enjoy your reading your poetry as well.? Jane

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Jon Stainsby

Wed 17th Oct 2018 18:41

Taylo, once again, many thanks for your comments and support.

Animals are dear companions to a lot of people so, why write a poem about them? They deserve it.

Jon

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Taylor Crowshaw

Wed 17th Oct 2018 12:17

Thank you Jon, I am not sure many think animals worthy of poems especially the humble donkey..I do..but then I am biased as I have five miniature donkeys. They are extremely gentle intelligent creatures..?

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d.knape

Wed 17th Oct 2018 00:31


lots of protein
in insects.

Snack on! ?





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d.knape

Wed 17th Oct 2018 00:29


do they eat Sardines
in Sardinia?

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Ariana Leon

Tue 16th Oct 2018 20:21

Well I am definitely caught in the web - I really like what you have written!

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