That's an impressive photo on this blog. I will try to catch up with more of your work. I haven't been much on line this past year. Do you know how to build guitars? I get the feeling that if you don't, you'll learn. It would be quite an achievement.
Comment is about New Shoes (poet profile)
Original item by New Shoes
This is an amazing 'photo' on your site, basically without gender, despite the long lashes and the dress. Is photogtaphy an interest as another form of 'art'?
What's with 'lower case letters'? Am I missing something currently in vogue about poetical 'awareness'
Comment is about sun (poet profile)
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<Deleted User> (18980)
Mon 11th Jan 2021 08:31
Thank you for the poem left on my profile Aviva...but why not post it as a comment on Keith's Predicament, or as a piece in its own right on your blog? Brian xxx
Comment is about Aviva Rifka Bhandari (poet profile)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Sun 10th Jan 2021 23:18
the poem itself
was an exercise
in absurdity.
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Sun 10th Jan 2021 23:16
Good Point but...
I'm partial to women!
?
Comment is about Aviva Rifka Bhandari (poet profile)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Awe, thank you Paul. This poetic adventure is so much more fun with you here. I wish you a healthy, happy, magic carpet ride year!
Comment is about Vautaw (poet profile)
Original item by Vautaw
Sat 9th Jan 2021 00:37
Aviva Derchi!!! ??
Comment is about Aviva Rifka Bhandari (poet profile)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Sat 9th Jan 2021 00:36
Sat 9th Jan 2021 00:35
Thanks for your long and interesting comment
Stephen W. Atkinson.
Next time, be more brief!
hahaha
Comment is about Stephen W Atkinson (poet profile)
Original item by Stephen W Atkinson
Enjoyed your Shetland sample poem, Maxine. It's a place I've always wanted to visit but still haven't, yet. Thanks for sharing your poems and thoughts on Write Out Loud
Comment is about Maxine Rose Munro (poet profile)
Original item by Maxine Rose Munro
Dear Dorinda - noted BUT the qualification is first to EMAIL me at
markone05@live.com gets the book. Hurry up!! You could be first. You should understand that the email contact mentioned
enables the provision of address and other details about posting to be exchanged
MC
Comment is about Dorinda MacDowell (poet profile)
Original item by Dorinda MacDowell
I realise that I just said 'brilliant' again today. But why not?
Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)
Original item by d.knape
Never had tattoos, ear-rings or (heaven forbid!) a pony-tail <never
fancied being considered as a "horse's arse"!> Besides, it didn't go with the uniform I wore when that word had more recognisable
meaning than now. ?
Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)
Original item by d.knape
Wed 6th Jan 2021 12:33
Yes, like tattoos and earrings
and long hair in pony tails.
The young get old yet cling to
their former ways.
the problem is the tattoos sag
the hair thins
and wrinkles replace what was.
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Wed 6th Jan 2021 12:28
I don't know what it is about you
that makes me like you so much.
It could be the fact that
you always think my poems are brilliant!
?
Comment is about Stephen Gospage (poet profile)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Never heard of Miss Mary's walk, although I have walked to Hesleden via the cycle track.
And, like you, when I was a lad, any sign of a derelict building & I was in! At least we lived to tell the tale!
Comment is about Tony Hill (poet profile)
Original item by Tony Hill
<Deleted User> (13740)
Sun 3rd Jan 2021 21:53
What do you mean your head is reeling from ti? Do you mean your head is reeling from it? What is it? Why is your head reeling. Have you been drinking too much wine or looking at naughty magazines again? Be good go to church and stop being silly. ? ?
Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)
Original item by d.knape
great stuff - great to see your work here, Rosie. You may want to consider putting some of your pieces in the blogs too for possible comments / feedback etc
Comment is about Rosie Lawson (poet profile)
Original item by Rosie Lawson
Sun 3rd Jan 2021 18:19
Jeans with holes
leave girls disposed
to show more leg
which men extol
at least that is
what I've been told
the more the leg
the merrier our souls.
?
Comment is about Trevor Alexander (poet profile)
Original item by Trevor Alexander
Sun 3rd Jan 2021 18:02
If you want to show off
and make men want to troll
then wear those hot pants
with the raggedy holes,
the more woman's flesh
the more enticing to see
so show men some leg
and they'll hover like bees!
?
Comment is about Aviva Rifka Bhandari (poet profile)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Philipos
Sat 2nd Jan 2021 20:57
Thoroughly enjoyed some of your reads and especially the panic experienced when walking through darkened woods at night, since I had a repeat experience as a kid and occasionally it still returns to haunt.
P
Comment is about James (poet profile)
Original item by James
I hope you got lots of Christmas cheer
and look forward to reading lots and lots
of your poetry in the new year x
Comment is about Ruth O'Reilly (poet profile)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
Fri 1st Jan 2021 11:00
You are the only one reading poetry this New Years Eve.
Good for you and....
good for me!
Have a Happy New Year!
we need one to make up for this year!
Comment is about Tony Hill (poet profile)
Original item by Tony Hill
?Happy New Year? Nigel I Hope you have lots of fun writing chapter 2021!
Comment is about Nigel Astell (poet profile)
Original item by Nigel Astell
Thu 31st Dec 2020 14:25
no offense
no problem
glad you rescued that dog
he's so happy looking
does he speak Spanish?
Comment is about Tony Hill (poet profile)
Original item by Tony Hill
Thu 31st Dec 2020 00:47
cute dog!
I am simple
and thus
the simple poem.
?
Comment is about Tony Hill (poet profile)
Original item by Tony Hill
Wed 30th Dec 2020 02:29
thanks for your comment on the "Stumpy" poem.
It is very kind of you.
?
Comment is about Stephen Gospage (poet profile)
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Philipos
Tue 29th Dec 2020 11:33
Hi Aisha and thanks for commenting on the Rusting Barge.
It gave me an opportunity of visiting your site and I enjoyed the sincerity detailed in your work.
I hope we will be seeing much more from your electronic pen.
Blessings.
P
Comment is about Aisha Suleman (poet profile)
Original item by Aisha Suleman
Trevor,
Thanks for your comments on 28 December. They are always a source of encouragement when it comes from a poet such as yourself.
Happy New Year
Keith
Comment is about trevor homer (poet profile)
Original item by trevor homer
Happy holidays Kimberly! Thanks for stopping by. I wish you a year of abundant energy and prolific writing! ?
Comment is about Vautaw (poet profile)
Original item by Vautaw
Mon 28th Dec 2020 17:36
that's me all right.
signed,
Troublesome Lump
Comment is about Aviva Rifka Bhandari (poet profile)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
<Deleted User> (28781)
Sun 27th Dec 2020 11:47
I like the way you write. A brief documentation of experiences.?
Comment is about Trev the Road Poet (poet profile)
Original item by Trev the Road Poet
Sun 27th Dec 2020 10:52
thank you Graham-
(reduced now to a Roschart Blot.)
Comment is about Graham Sherwood (poet profile)
Original item by Graham Sherwood
? Thankyou so much Mark! I am going to head on over to your page and enjoy your work!
Comment is about Erin Nicole (poet profile)
Original item by Erin Nicole
<Deleted User> (13740)
Sat 26th Dec 2020 07:54
Merry Christmas and thanks for dropping by and the messages your poetry is beautiful, just like you, lovely lady x
Comment is about Aviva Rifka Bhandari (poet profile)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Happy holidays to you, V. Hope you are doing well and staying safe. ?
Comment is about Vautaw (poet profile)
Original item by Vautaw
Thu 24th Dec 2020 12:42
where oh where
has M.C. gone?
Merry Christmas!!
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Tue 22nd Dec 2020 04:16
great response!
?
Comment is about Aviva Rifka Bhandari (poet profile)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
@Suspended.
The suspense is killing me
And it seems to be killing you
Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)
Original item by d.knape
Mon 21st Dec 2020 02:15
Come back often
I "love" your comment.
wink..
Comment is about julie callaghan (poet profile)
Original item by julie callaghan
Mon 21st Dec 2020 02:09
Where there are squirrels
there are nuts & seeds,
Squirrels drive you nuts
most would agree,
They invade your attic
your property
soon squirreled away
they never leave!
?
Comment is about Aviva Rifka Bhandari (poet profile)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Sun 20th Dec 2020 01:14
Viva Aviva!
(also a paper towel)
?
Comment is about Aviva Rifka Bhandari (poet profile)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Sun 20th Dec 2020 01:12
hardly brilliant-
more like
dull.
?
Comment is about Stephen Gospage (poet profile)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Welcome to WOL, where lots word nerds and outcasts huddle to share poetic stories of despair and triumph. Write on! ~ V
Comment is about Salemrising666 (poet profile)
Original item by Salemrising666
Fri 18th Dec 2020 03:28
If calories are your concern
then do not overeat
it's best to have a poem instead
their norishment can't be beat,
and while a steady diet of
may leave you feeling draineed
a daily poem is never a loss
and always yours to gain.
?
Comment is about Aviva Rifka Bhandari (poet profile)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Welcome to WOL Agam from one hopeless romantic to another! I’m looking forward to reading your poetry. You’re off to a great start with Fireflies. Write on!
Comment is about agam rawat (poet profile)
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Cynthia Buell Thomas
Mon 11th Jan 2021 16:41
Is the above 'poetry posture' inspired by Oscar Wilde? It so reminds me of a favourite black and white photo of that man which I found in a magazine when I was a teenager. Same tilt of the head and sling of the hips. I still have it framed on a lounge table, years and years and years later. Just a question; the similar 'attitude' made me smile.
Comment is about Rob Cohen (poet profile)
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