Spring Tanka
A winter bite that
mocks the spring, pincers its cocoon.
A life supported?
Cease one's internal decay,
Even ice melts. Love's fluidity.
Winter Ice Spring Thaw Cocoon Melt Life Mental Health Depression Anxiety Self-doubt Love Honesty Self-belief Self-esteem Nurturing Nurture Support Supporting Care Caring Loving Considerate Compassion Compassionate Grow Growing Pain Suffering Learn Learning Discover Discovery Discovering NaPoWriMo
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Cynthia Buell Thomas
Sat 20th Apr 2013 15:04
Very good, Indigo. The punctuation is essential to the expansive thought. Perhaps another font would highlight the marks a bit more, so that they have as much prominence as the words themselves.