Spring Tanka

A winter bite that

mocks the spring, pincers its cocoon.

A life supported?

Cease one's internal decay,

Even ice melts. Love's fluidity.

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◄ Roses - NaPoWriMo Day 10

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 20th Apr 2013 15:04

Very good, Indigo. The punctuation is essential to the expansive thought. Perhaps another font would highlight the marks a bit more, so that they have as much prominence as the words themselves.

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