Spring Tanka
A winter bite that
mocks the spring, pincers its cocoon.
A life supported?
Cease one's internal decay,
Even ice melts. Love's fluidity.
Anxiety Care Caring Cocoon Compassion Compassionate Considerate Depression Discover Discovering Discovery Grow Growing Honesty Ice Learn Learning Life Love Loving Melt Mental Health NaPoWriMo Nurture Nurturing Pain Self-belief Self-doubt Self-esteem Spring Suffering Support Supporting Thaw Winter
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Cynthia Buell Thomas
Sat 20th Apr 2013 15:04
Very good, Indigo. The punctuation is essential to the expansive thought. Perhaps another font would highlight the marks a bit more, so that they have as much prominence as the words themselves.