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I am a very new writer. I enjoy reading and writing poetry.some of these are just my thoughts and feelings


the way you left me. I met you last summer You looked at me like the others The time we spent was sure no bummer We talked and laughed with one another The day had to come You had to spread your wings and fly My heart was beating like a drum; As I hugged you goodbye You left a hole in my heart We never thought of each other like this before I knew I shouldn’t have trusted you from the start When you carelessly tore my feelings apart Our 2am FaceTime calls; Talking about our life We were separated by all these walls Your cold heart cut me like a knife The way you talked about her killed me inside I sat and listened hoping you’d ask about me My feelings, I always had to hide Looking into your eyes I felt free Then it hit, like hail falling from the sky You used me when you had nobody else I was never first, I promised I wouldn’t cry I’m better than this, I told myself Goodbye I said , as tears streamed down my face The look you gave me is still in my mind I walked away feeling free from the chase Next it was myself I had to find

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Wed 14th Oct 2020 03:10

thanks for your comments on
"when someone dies"
it put a lot into it
it took a lot out of me.

Brooke E Addison

Tue 20th Mar 2018 04:01

lovely poem!

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