I AM outdoors in the picture! ?

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Tom. Unsure about the audio player difficulty you have experienced as I have not messed with it (besides putting a buzzing sound on my front page). Maybe leaving a few seconds of dead space at the end of your original track may help? Good luck!

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I never wear sunglasses except outdoors

Comment is about Mae Foreman (poet profile)

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"Bond, Rachel..."

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Cheers K

Comment is about Kealan Coady (poet profile)

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I like your style Cait. Original writing is hard and poetry almost impossible, at times. Good luck with your writing. You voice is subtle and nuanced. Nobody can teach you that. It's a gift, so work at it.
John

Comment is about Cait Abbott (poet profile)

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hi mae
thanks a lot!
it means the world when people drop by and say such nice things
i dont comment much on here but ido read a lot of the work and i always enjoy your pieces,especially the dark nursery rhymes

Comment is about Mae Foreman (poet profile)

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I DID spell it "Humorous",
see my comment.

Comment is about Don Matthews (poet profile)

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...a year

Comment is about Josie Harris (poet profile)

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Corect Lisa!
Punctuation and Piano I see a con- nection

Comment is about Lisa C Bassignani (poet profile)

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Hi Philip. Just a quick thanks for the like you left on "My World Within A World". I appreciate it. This also led me to checking out your work and I love what I have read (and heard). You are very skilled and inspiring. Looking forward to witnessing more of your creations. Take care.

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Hi Tom. Thanks for the like on "My World Within Another World". I appreciate it. I've been checking out your work and am impressed. I dig the audio, too. Cool to hear a voice with your written work. Looking forward to more. Take care.

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Hey Jason. I appreciate your comment on "My World Within Another World". Also, I have been browsing through your work and really enjoy your skill and style. Looking forward to reading more. Take care.

Comment is about Jason Bayliss (poet profile)

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Thanks afish, for your comment on "Nature's Nurture". I appreciate the input!

Comment is about afishamongmany (poet profile)

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Thank you M.C. for your input on my recent poem "Nature's Nurture". I appreciate it!

Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)

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Hi Stu! My God you're good! Love your work ?
Mae

Comment is about Stuart Buck (poet profile)

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Hi Keith, thanks for your comments on The Artist's Desk. Much appreciated.

I'm with you, I only use my desk (the one pictured) very occasionally. Most of my writing has to be done on-the-go... usually on a train between London and Sheffield. I miss writing with a fountain pen, I find it freeing and inspiring in a different way to writing on a laptop; maybe because simply just 'writing' is so satisfying in itself it motivates you to keep going until you stumble upon the thing you needed to say.

I don't know why I'm so curious about the place people write; I'm not sure how much influence it has on the work produced but it still intrigues me. My previous poem 'Great Destroyers' was "written" by dictating it into Siri on my phone while walking down the street - which worked surprisingly well.

Thanks again, Tom

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Re your liking of my poem ' Crying Globe supporter ' thank you. Jemima

Comment is about Lisa C Bassignani (poet profile)

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Great work ?

Comment is about Cait Abbott (poet profile)

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Susan, though not my role here on WoL, welcome, come on in, put your feet up and write, read, comment, like, whatever. I thought your poem, "Ann Marie", to be very touching, as well as your sample poem. I was raised by my sister, so to speak, so I felt the absence in the piece. Lot's of wonderful folks reside here. So enjoy.

D

Comment is about Susan Maria (poet profile)

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Sophie, really appreciate your kind comments on my profile page. Nice to think that someone else shares the same view and 'slight' struggle to write while lacking full use of the English language. But nevertheless, we are both managing to get our writings kindly approved by the more word familiar so we are doing okay methinks and of course, improving as we go along picking up literary 'tips' and meanings.

I should imagine Sophie that like me there are times you possibly think to yourself ' if only I had had a better education where, in, the poetry world would I have been by now?

All my very best indeed to you.


Rose ?

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Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem.
Always good to hear from the cool Raypool!

Comment is about ray pool (poet profile)

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No, there is no suspense here at all!

A Pumblechookian monster will be shervished by any half-way competent halberd-bearer loyal to the crown!

Surrender not! No, never surrender!

Fear is the ticking of a clock. The dawning of a day. The passage of the sun.
Fear is the growth of hunger, the resurfacing of thirst. Fear is time unplanned for....

Fear fears the planning of a day. Even that. Shervish fear forever!!!

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Martin - thank you, yes it has its point ? but I guess you guessed that!

Tom - and thank you for your point and comment?

Mindy - and thank you too, I did'nt feel thepain till you nudged me. -so to speak.

Ta folks xxx

Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)

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Martin - thank you, yes it has its point ? but I guess you guessed that!

Tom - and thank you for your point and comment? It's most wellcome.

Mindy - and thank you too, I did'nt feel thepain till you nudged me. -so to speak.

Ta folks xxx

Comment is about Tom (poet profile)

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I have been browsing your work, Sophie. I love your style... blunt, direct and powerful verbal punches. Looking forward to reading more! Take care.

Comment is about Sophie (poet profile)

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Thanks for your lovely comments, Mindy. I do try my best to entertain....? x

Comment is about John Andrew Nield (poet profile)

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Hi Valerie
Would be great to see more of your work on here cheers Andy

Comment is about Valerie Judge (poet profile)

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wow Sophie, what a beautiful lady you are

( if you don't mind me saying so?)

Comment is about Sophie (poet profile)

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Hi Tom
I love your sample poems, particularly 'Eccentrics'
Wonderful stuff
I shall look forward to reading more of your work

Martin

Comment is about Tom (poet profile)

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Aww thanks Martin, always good to hear from you. It was Dubrovnik ? Hope you're good.

Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)

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Ah thanks for your comment on Love and Everything Else Jason, really appreciate it and glad to hear the emotion translated. Thanks for the advice too - I plan to follow it as best I can ?

Comment is about Jason Bayliss (poet profile)

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Every child thinks they are the only child ever to have been a child! The chief virtue of youth is its permanence.

You explore these attitudes richly, with smooth, comfortable language. Enjoyable!

Comment is about Eva Elizabeth (poet profile)

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Thanks Lisa for your response to 'Conflation'.
Tommy outside on a sunny Sunday ?

Comment is about Lisa C Bassignani (poet profile)

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Hi Cait, just wanted to say, superb samples. I mean, really superb.

J. x

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Comment is about Joanna Halliday (poet profile)

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I read your [profile. very interesting.i am on face book as hasmukh mehta . i wrote abt 22000 poems on www.poemhunter.com as hasmukh amathalal

Comment is about Sarah Louise mcnee (poet profile)

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Using the same format of the six word lines
I have put together something hotter myself called - - -

The Forbidden Zone

I will bring it with me on our August meet up to show you.

Comment is about BlueGirlPoetry (poet profile)

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Wow! Thanks for that. In reality olive picking is not a nice experience but at least the scenery's okay.

Comment is about john short (poet profile)

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That is brilliant, brilliant, brilliant! "Money-Go-Round," I mean.

Everything about it is delightful. I know it is difficult to write dialect, but yours is smooth and convincing.

Story telling, dialect, rhyme and romping rhythm.

I guess it was OK.

Comment is about John Andrew Nield (poet profile)

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"Sea a thousand edges of light below," pure poetry! (: ))

I am sitting here hungry to share your lunch, the sunshine, and the scratching branches.

Terrific poem.

Comment is about john short (poet profile)

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You handle words very, very well.

Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)

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"Loss Lingers" had that end-punch I so enjoy in poetry.

Enjoyed discovering your poetry!

Comment is about Alan Corkish (poet profile)

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Comment is about Joanna Halliday (poet profile)

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Thanks for your comment about Nine Greek Muses Don. A bit of fun eh??

Comment is about Don Matthews (poet profile)

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"Before the After" is terrific.

Comment is about Tommy Carroll (poet profile)

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Having read mine, you know how delighted I'd be with yours!

I am so new, dare I make a suggestion? Well...You use "progress" as a noun in the second line. That requires stress on the first syllable. If you wrote the line with "progress" as a verb, you'd move the emphasis to the second syllable. Something like this: "Trying to progress,"

If I'm being gauche, I'll grovel.

Comment is about Don Matthews (poet profile)

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Mindy Newton, you are right, but I cheery-picked lovely stuff of NYC

Comment is about Nasir Soomro (poet profile)

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That was lovely. (And NYC can show a lot of the unlovely!)

Comment is about Nasir Soomro (poet profile)

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My utmost respect and admiration! You have raw talent! I can't begin to imagine the magnitude of the effort you put in overcoming your challenges considering that not only you seem yto have overcome them but you become excellent at it! With such determination you can do everything! I absolutely love your work!
Thank you?
Mae

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