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Rachel Bond

Sun 8th Nov 2009 03:25

hey gemma...loved your grandma poem. My grandma drank whisky and guinness then puked in the sink at night before bed...she was not quite so glamorous as yours:)

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Deborah Jordan Bailey

Sat 7th Nov 2009 21:08

thank you Kealan, for your kind comments on Kilim, much appreciated : )) Debz x

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Deborah Jordan Bailey

Sat 7th Nov 2009 21:07

thank you Dave, for your lovely comments on Kilim, Debz x

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steve mellor

Sat 7th Nov 2009 15:28

Hi Cynthia
Thanks for taking the time to comment, which in itself is intriguing.
xx Steve xx

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Bernadette Herbertson

Sat 7th Nov 2009 01:16

Hi Cynthia thank you for your welcome comment on my first blog entry ..Mixed Emotions.. we actually met at sale waterside in september I was with my friend Linda.Missed out on the october event but going to the november one. hope to see you there ...Bernadette

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steve mellor

Fri 6th Nov 2009 16:41

Only joshing John. Hope your travel was ok this time.
Nerves are a bummer, as I know only too well, but I like your 'performance' au natural so to speak. It's got a nice roll to it that may be spoilt by amplification.

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Rachel Bond

Fri 6th Nov 2009 15:03

thanks for your comment kealan.my poems write from a dark place...maybe I should write that comedy idea of the 36 steps for 36 sins although Ive forgotten it now!
maybe see you at hebden this weekend?

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Rachel Bond

Fri 6th Nov 2009 13:15

Thanks for your comments on Crow's nest.
I think every poet's soul drowns somewhat in staring at the sea.
Good you felt the sense of yearning for gentler more expansive shores.
looking forward to see you do your stuff at hebden x

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Rachel Bond

Fri 6th Nov 2009 02:13

thanks for your comment (updated) on crows nest. Im complimented by your interest and i like the fishing reference to expand on your point of view...keep wiggling.

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Fri 6th Nov 2009 01:21

Tommy, if u click on the blue address on my biography it will take u to my gallery but then u must put my name in the search box as there are a lot of artists on that site. Tell me how u get on as I cant access it recently.

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Rachel Bond

Fri 6th Nov 2009 01:10

tommy...what if...what if what? could you make a comment please thats all a bit cryptic.

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Rachel Bond

Fri 6th Nov 2009 01:03

Hi Dick..glad to be able to read some of your poetry (particularly 'young lady' here)...have been reading your words for many a moon now and was growing nicely accustomed to ignoring them...you know when you listen to a song over and over it all gets lost...still love the line, you paint your leather jacket it comes off in the rain, the more you cut your hair the more it grows back again...also you know the more i wash the dishes the higher they manage tostack themselves...Reality IS waiting for a bus. sorry to harp on about things you said ages ago - im happy to read new fresh stuff, Rachelx

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steve mellor

Thu 5th Nov 2009 21:36

Dear Muse
Glad you enjoyed it.
It takes one to know one (that's a complement by the way - just in case)

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Dave Bradley

Thu 5th Nov 2009 21:03

People have done all sorts of things with the Gormley statues, including the famous (and actually quite artistic) nude calendar. Yellow shorts is different, but there's something new every week

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Tommy Carroll

Thu 5th Nov 2009 20:29

the women were congested but all had new batteries!

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Horace Thespider

Thu 5th Nov 2009 19:56

How do David
Appreciate your taking the time to read my poem
so you live in Crosby. Was it you that put yellow trunks on the Gormley figure?
cheers bud

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garside

Thu 5th Nov 2009 19:55

HI Cynthia,

thanks for your comment on 4:21 poem

i realised what you meant after the penny dropped : )

steve x

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Isobel

Thu 5th Nov 2009 18:11

Yes.

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steve mellor

Thu 5th Nov 2009 18:07

Thanks for taking the time Kealan, glad you enjoyed it
I had to sort of sneak Dylan into my son's name, but it had to be done. Unfortunately he dislikes it to the nth degree.

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steve mellor

Thu 5th Nov 2009 18:05

Hi Neil
Thanks for the comment on The Sun Shone. I was just about to email you about your latest offering, when your comment popped up.
When was your mother ever wrong? A real nice read.

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Thu 5th Nov 2009 17:22

Good Evening Cynthia,
Four Ways Five...just my way of saying,

'More than... and every which way' , at the same time.

Consider yourself clued in...


Thank you for your lovely comments.
Augusta x

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Thu 5th Nov 2009 17:21

The double image of love lust and love is a difficulty we all come up agains.

Is pain pleaure or is pleasure pain.??

Thanks again so very much for reading my poem.

Augusta x

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Jon

Wed 4th Nov 2009 10:12

Hi Isobel,Just read 'A Poem Not For Guy'.Enjoyed the message behind this about seizing the moment,Well done!

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garside

Wed 4th Nov 2009 08:05

HI Andy

thanks for taking the time to read and make comment on my work

steve x

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garside

Wed 4th Nov 2009 08:03

Hi Cynthia

thanks as ever for your considered comment on my poem - in the poem i switched the light off to let the room take shape - though the immediate perceptual would tell the read otherwise

curious to know how you would do the equal line thing that you mention in your comment?

steve x

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garside

Wed 4th Nov 2009 08:01

Hi Emma (Mulberry Rose)

thanks as ever for taking the time to read and make comment on my work

steve x

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Wed 4th Nov 2009 06:04

Try copy and paste the link into address bar. It should take you to a youtube clip of Lawrence Ferlinghetti reading "The World is a Beautiful Place" He has a more rambling approach to poetry. He is 90 this year and has certainly loved life.

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Joshua Van-Cook

Tue 3rd Nov 2009 22:59

Yeah, I saw Control. It's quite hard to believe that someone so talented would be driven to such extremes. Thanks for your comment.

Cheers,

- Josh

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Tue 3rd Nov 2009 19:53

hi there dave,
thanks for reading the poem "always there never to be forgotten". you've intrigued me has what made you think it was a dog the poem was about :)
enjoyed reading your poems :)

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Tue 3rd Nov 2009 19:48

hi there kealan,thanks for your comments on "what is love" and "questions & answers" poems it certainly makes you think about it :)
enjoyed reading your poems :)

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Tue 3rd Nov 2009 19:46

hi there jane,
thanks for you comments on "questions and answers" poem it was certainly confusing writing it ;) enjoyed reading your poems :)

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Dave Bradley

Tue 3rd Nov 2009 19:42

Hi Cynthia

Thanks as ever for your generous comment. Hope we meet one day x

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Dave Bradley

Tue 3rd Nov 2009 19:42

Hi Cynthia

Thanks as ever for your generous comment. Hope we meet one day x

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Alain English

Tue 3rd Nov 2009 16:25

Cheers for your remarks, Isobel. Much obliged. I have been off the site for a while now but am happy to be back. I like the 'Update Gigs' feature that is now up. I will be posting some more poetry over the next few weeks on different themes, so look out for that.

See you soon,

Alain

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Tue 3rd Nov 2009 13:37

And... so, young Jane, are you !

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem, you are very kind.

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Tue 3rd Nov 2009 13:34

Extravagance has been one of my many vices for many a long year David... Have you any vices?
Many thanks for your wonderful comments.
Augusta x

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Tue 3rd Nov 2009 12:15

hi Dave-am here under 'orders' from isobel,glad i came! you have a new fan.loved 'countless' its given me some ideas,one being to hang around as long as poss-to piss all my enemies off.lol!-regards

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Tue 3rd Nov 2009 11:26



Good Morning Isobel

It's so difficult at times to write of 'Love' in a joyous way... usually the venom of love has its way with my pen and restless nights...

Thank you again for such an indepth critique of my poem.

augusta x

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Tue 3rd Nov 2009 11:20

Good Morning Rosalind.
I am overwhelmed that my poem should have had such impact, what a wonderful comment....Thank you

Augusta x

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Tue 3rd Nov 2009 11:17

Hello Owen
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment on my poem i'm pleased that you liked it.
Augusta x

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Ross Kightly

Tue 3rd Nov 2009 09:20

I just loved the gender-longing in 'Gallop' and the edgy senuality of 'Jam' - really envigorating stuff, especially that 'rough chest'... cheers.

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jane wilcock

Tue 3rd Nov 2009 07:36

Hi, Isobel, thanks for commenting on Perfect, and Jenny!! However, this poem is a romance, not about motherhood. Love, with an image of an eclipse of the sun as I know of nothing else which would eclipse it. I love your site as you know and the red shoes. best Janexx

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Mon 2nd Nov 2009 21:31

Thanks for your comment Dave. I agree, the situation's not quite as bad as in some countries. However I am disquieted when we or the Americans use phrases such as '...for god and country...';

I think the relationship between the (Christian) church, the political establishment, and the arms manufacturers and the military is not a healthy one.

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Mon 2nd Nov 2009 18:39

Just got the one about the luggage! HaHa!.The judge thought it was an art work!

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Mon 2nd Nov 2009 18:32

Hi, Tommy. Thanks for your great comment about my poem. Really cheered me up!
I'ts bad u had a brain hemorrhage..sounds ghastly, hope u are making a good recovery.
I like ur poem about the weekends being book-ends. A bit like that for me, the weekdays are better.!

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Mon 2nd Nov 2009 17:35

Hi Cynthia, thank you for your kind words and suggestion on 'You came', I have amended that line and it does flow more smoothly now. i appreciate your guidance.

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nick armbrister

Mon 2nd Nov 2009 16:55

hi Jennie i like your poems. very good work. also im interested in your music. coz i love gohicmusic from anne marie of skeletal family/ghost dance to the heavvy stuff like the gathering.

goth rock i know but goth folk? pls enlighten me on it coz ive not heard of that before unless you include mazzy star? do you have any on cd or myspace music site i can check out? are your songs similar to your poetry? sorry for all the questions lol.

im a regular in the goth clubs/pubs and welcome the chance to listen to new music so yours im very interested in checking out. and do you gig or go on tour?

myself i do poems and fiction stuff. i cant sing or do music tho so i write instead. i always thing a poor 2nd place but i just do my best. one day id like to sing properly but i just dont think itll happen without a good teacher lol. dark regards nick.:)x

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Nichola Burrows

Mon 2nd Nov 2009 15:57

Hi Neil, glad you like that one. Having a re-vamp on profile.x

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Isobel

Mon 2nd Nov 2009 12:37

Thanks for the comment Andy - hope to get over to your neck of the woods soon so you might get to hear it live. Until then, take care.
Isobel x

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Isobel

Sun 1st Nov 2009 21:01

Thanks for your comment Kealan. If you live in Bolton, you should try to make the next poetry night at the Howcroft - there is normally a good gathering of poets there - though most of them are a good bit older than you! Hopefully see you around. Isobel x

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