As any right thinking person should be! Thanks for commenting :)

Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)

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Absolutely! Oh and I see why you are called Big Sal..well.. you're poetry is amazingly big/very dope!

Comment is about AbSo2021 (poet profile)

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Cool, hopeful sample.

Comment is about Grinder Spencer (poet profile)

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Plenty of time to add more poems to the pile. I'll be waiting to hear more. ?

Comment is about AbSo2021 (poet profile)

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so lovely poem sample...I shall not be

Tuesday, April 17, 2018
10:32 AM



It was shocking to learn
When you turned
Your back and left forever
My mind was seized with fear

Nights have turned barren
Hell took over the heaven
My heart was shattered
Even I was little afraid

No, I will blame no one
But try to learn
Why did it happen to me?
Even though I was true

Comment is about Jara Giner (poet profile)

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NICE THOUGHTS, Going to be

Tuesday, April 17, 2018
10:18 AM



Many thoughts may enter
But you have an ability to alter
The wind in your favor
And at the same time earn an honor

IT may certainly prove
And move
Your thoughts in a positive direction
With your firm action

Comment is about yajaira (poet profile)

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Luv the poem! L.A representing. Can't wait to post my poems; )

Comment is about Cassandra Walker (poet profile)

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Hi Ray - thanks for y'note on Charity. Aye, it was the faux jolliness combined with Big Brother - got to me a bit! ? I'm a socialist - that comes out in almost everything I write ? Thanks again!

Comment is about ray pool (poet profile)

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Snap Margret ;
And thanks
Tommy

Comment is about Lilly Love (poet profile)

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where have you gone we have missed your presence here.. thoughts and prayers always to you...

Comment is about Sarah Mae (poet profile)

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you have disappeared again just know that My thoughts and prayers are with you.....,

Comment is about Chiari Warrior Soldier (poet profile)

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Just discovered your work, through 'Move On' in today's poetry blogs. Loved it and the two in your profile - particularly 'Threadbare'. I shall now look up your book and read the other poems you've posted which I must have missed if they are anything like those I've read so far.
Keep up the excellent work - you're now a favourite of mine.

Comment is about Nicola Hulme (poet profile)

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aye up Tommy - thanks for commenting on 'the collector and the collected'. George Orwell was a right boring bastard wasn't he? ?
Ian

Comment is about Tommy Carroll (poet profile)

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thanks for commenting on 'the collector and the collected' Keith - yes, I too am guilty as charged - I save everything (except bodily fluids)
Ian

Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)

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You rock!!! Thanks for sharing!

?Lilly

Comment is about Branden Toledo (poet profile)

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Love ? your work. So beautiful!

Comment is about Tommy Carroll (poet profile)

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your welcome.

Comment is about Wood (poet profile)

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Your poems are absolutely beautiful!

Comment is about Lilly Love (poet profile)

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Keep writing x

Comment is about Rhiana (poet profile)

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Bringing three poems with me tonight for the
New Mills Festival Poetry Trail.

I have also done two poems on spiders with the theme being threads and one called Looking Back.

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

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Hi Ray
Thank you for your comments on my poem 'Moonlight Sonata.'
Always a pleasure to hear from you and your encouraging remarks.

Hannah

Comment is about ray pool (poet profile)

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Hi Andy, thank you so much for your comment on my poem 'Moonlight Sonata'

Hannah

Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)

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I know now that you made me feel alone and that I am not entirely alone like you always said. I know very well that I was slowly becoming you, something I never wanted to be because you are a bitter soul. I realised that when I became the worst version of yourself you panicked because you saw your true self and would not have loved to meet the monster you created, you labelled me to make yourself feel better. More than ever I realise now that this evil in me is your doing but once it got bad you decided as usual to paint yourself as a saint. I wonder how it feels like going to bed knowing that you turned someone into a creature with no soul. How it feels everytime you belittle me and tell me that I am at your mercy and yours alone? How does it feel to crush someone just to feel in control? How it feels to see the same person you claim to 'love' die slowly from the poison you feed them? How does it feel to see me with no soul.....

Comment is about Sione Jean Asani (poet profile)

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Dear MC., I was both sad and disheartened to hear that your poem Double Guff has been withdrawn from the site. The poem merely expressed a view point with no bad language or overt prejudice. I can think of a number of previous poems which should have fallen into this category but not yours. There are none so illiberal as those who proclaim to be liberal. Don´t be disheartened but press on my good friend. People went to firing squads for less.
Keith

Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)

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Hazel - thanks for the comment. You may be interested to know that I received a note from a WOL "moderator" to tell
me my poem had been removed because it did not comply
with WOL Codes of Conduct and furthermore that WOL was
not a platform m= for my political views. I think back on what I've seen on the site and the foul, often vituperative
language used in political attacks and criticisms - and I can
only wonder at the reasoning behind this decision/action.

Comment is about Hazel ettridge (poet profile)

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Keith - I've been informed by "Alex W" (a "moderator" at WOL) that my poem DOUBLE GUFF has been removed
because it does not comply with WOL Codes of Conduct and
furthermore that WOL is not a platform for my political
views (sic). How odd, considering what has gone before on
the site, not least involving often foul abusivel ;anguage.
We may draw our own conclusions about the reasoning
behind this decision/action.
MC

Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)

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nice dreams...I have a personal dream
And fully intended to achieve them
Even though I have high ideals
I believe them to be real

I am a simple caring person
In practice and in behavior real human
I love frankly speaking people
Who really seek through struggle

Comment is about Bindu Trigunayak (poet profile)

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Nice sample submission poem Cassandra. Welcome to Write Out Loud. I hope you enjoy your time here.

Comment is about Cassandra Walker (poet profile)

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thanks for your kind comments on 'back to the park' Mark - pleased you liked it - not sure how pleased I am at making you 'moist' but that's another story.
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment mate
Ian

Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)

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thanks for your kind and thoughtful comments on 'back to the park Hazel - I'l chuffed that you liked it
Ian

Comment is about Hazel ettridge (poet profile)

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thanks for your kind comments on 'back to the park' Trevor - I'm pleased that you liked it - thanks for taking the time to comment
Ian

Comment is about Trevor Alexander (poet profile)

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thanks for your kind comments on 'back to the park' Keith - a sad but true tale of loss

Ian

Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)

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thanks for reading my poems. happy to know you like them..?

Comment is about Bindu Trigunayak (poet profile)

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Hey Andrea! Hope you are loving WOL! You are a good poet, hope you like my poetry aswell if you have to look at it I'd appreciate it! Thanks

Comment is about Andrea Place (poet profile)

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Thanks Cynthia for sparing your time to stop by my profile.
Your kind suggestion is very much appreciated!

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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thanks for your kind comments on 'memory of rhinoceroses' Dave - I'm please you liked it
Ian

Comment is about Dave Morgan (poet profile)

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thank you for your comment!!

Comment is about Bindu Trigunayak (poet profile)

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thanks for your kind comments on Eostre Hazel - I'm really pleased you liked it
Ian

Comment is about Hazel ettridge (poet profile)

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thanks for commenting on Eostre Keith - I appreciate your thoughts
Ian

Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)

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thanks once again for your kind comments on Eostre Martin - yes - you've nailed it (pun intended) with the giant rabbit - commercialism + Religion = a right pain in the arse
Ian

Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)

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Morning Martin!

Hope you had a lovely weekend ?

Thanks so much for your note on my latest.Well, the middle verse does contain a folk song that was sung especially for me at a festival last year and is one that I love, so the poem does actually have a folk feel to it ? It's all taken from festivals I've been to and about how much I love them. Cannot WAIT for summer to start proper!

Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)

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will go back and listen a few more times.
you are very welcome.

Comment is about Wood (poet profile)

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Hello Mal,
This is the first time I have come across your poetry and profile. I enjoyed A Summer of Adolescence and more so Preconception. Please let me know when your new book is published. Thank you.
Keith

Comment is about Mal Foster (poet profile)

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Hi Wood.

Thanks for your kind remarks. Glad you liked it.

KED

Comment is about Wood (poet profile)

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https://youtu.be/pJSZcxXe7IQ

Comment is about Tommy Carroll (poet profile)

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Martin I am proving to be your biggest fan...
Autographs are free to registered poets I assume?

Ta re "Plans..."
;- )
Tommy
x

Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)

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Hi Hazel, thanks for your comments re "Plans on hold".
l use "thoughts" to act as a pivotal and personal expression of what would otherwise be a too factual, impersonal account of events.
I appreciate and welcome any and all such advice.

Tommy
x

Comment is about Hazel ettridge (poet profile)

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Cheers Cynthia. Thanks for your comments re "Plans on hold".
I use the capitalisation of the third person singular as not to weigh down the line with a period.
Try it.
;- )
Tommy
x

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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'oooh's' and 'aaahhhs', grunts and groans, whistles and chirps are language in common to us all. No need of complex voice patterns or organised grammar whatsoever for basic communication.

'conference a ready man' is a very apt expression, meaning, I take it, one who is 'working with other people to discuss and carry out a particular plan' of any kind.

Happy Easter, Tommy, to you and yours. I always enjoy your input.

Comment is about Tommy Carroll (poet profile)

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Just rechecked your 'bio'. I've been enjoying your recent participation in 'Comments' on many poems. I'm not sure what you 'might call home'. Your own inimitable self?

(Have I spelled that right - too rushed to check my dic. Definitely slipping!)

Comment is about Hazel ettridge (poet profile)

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