Keep writing Adalyn,we will become addicted to your honesty and openness .Well done.
Comment is about Adalyn Winn (poet profile)
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Tue 29th Oct 2019 21:19
"may cause Drowsiness" was just a fun poem.
no inner deep meaning. Just a poke at "non-drowsy meds
and ...Myself.
Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)
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Welcome Adalyn! I’m so glad you found writing as an outlet at such a young age. It will help see you through the tough times and bring an enhanced awareness of the good times. Your poetry has a raw rhythm that will develop the more you write. Write on!
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Philipos
Tue 29th Oct 2019 10:42
Totally agree with you on Canned Flesh comments - so tragic all round - thanks for responding. P.
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
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Jon,
Thank you for your three recent comments on my poems. They are, as always, much appreciated.
Keith
Comment is about Jon Darby (poet profile)
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Writing will empower you Masen. It will open your heart and mind to the beauty in life and help you make sense of the tragedies. Write on young poet. Your future is bright!
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Philipos
Fri 25th Oct 2019 18:46
Thought fairies - so unpredictable - here one minute and scarpered the next. What's so irritating is when they don't come back at all having allowed something to chase them off. P. ?
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Philipos
Fri 25th Oct 2019 11:57
Re; Brewing up - couldn't agree more M.C. There must a word out there that perfectly describes this mind boggling scenario - (something like conundrum). Will it ever come to a satisfactory conclusion for everyone. I think Writeoutloud helps us get it off our chest. I wonder if that word I might be thinking of could be 'Wrexit' or could even be 'Vexed it' Am sure someone will coin a suitable phrase one day. ?
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Philipos
Fri 25th Oct 2019 09:23
Hi Don - Brewing Up. Certainly is politics and driving us absolutely potty with the different takes of MP input and delay. Politicians all seemed to have reached a new level of public disapproval - and it will take them a very long time to regain their street cred if they ever will. But I for sure, am not the lone voice in the wilderness. P ?
Comment is about Don Matthews (poet profile)
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Thanks for your comment on my profile re my comment on your 'Love Me'. I'm always looking for a chance to bring humour out (Thalia and I have bonded quite nicely - my Muse of Mirth). You need to get to know me though to know how to take me. Thalia wrings her hair out at times......
?
Comment is about Hazel Connelly (poet profile)
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Thanks for the comment Don (Love Me) It was written lying in hospital bed after a hip operation
Comment is about Don Matthews (poet profile)
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Thanks for the comment John on Love Me, wrote while in hospital after a hip operation
Comment is about John Coopey (poet profile)
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Thanks for the comment on Love Me it was I wrote it after a hip operation
Comment is about ray pool (poet profile)
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Thu 24th Oct 2019 11:30
Philipos
Thu 24th Oct 2019 09:16
Lisa, Mist - thanks for ticking the Like box. P.
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Philipos
Thu 24th Oct 2019 09:14
Don - Mist - thanks muchly for the kind remarks - funny isn't it how sometimes poems just write themselves from stored memory. Obliged. P. ?
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Philipos
Wed 23rd Oct 2019 23:33
Hi Ruth and since you ask Reiki was certainly one of these and various other forms of meditation following my NDE some years ago, the latter I think might have been a spur although matters of the subconscious have often helped me formulate my poetic style both on line as well as hard copy. ?
Comment is about Ruth O'Reilly (poet profile)
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Vautaw, I thank you for responding to my 'the Visitor'.
Comment is about Vautaw (poet profile)
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Tue 22nd Oct 2019 23:15
have you ever seen a Tasmanian Tiger?
there are rumors they are still around.
and that YOU have one.
Comment is about Don Matthews (poet profile)
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Tue 22nd Oct 2019 23:08
Tue 22nd Oct 2019 23:07
good point about maps confusing women.
if only WOMEN came with instructions!
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
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That's what you call real spooky Ruth - - -
Comment is about Nigel Astell (poet profile)
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You had some good special effects going on there with the Halloween party. I went to read it and it said ' entry not found' and THEN wait for it......It actually Disappeared. Now. Isn't that the stuff that a proper ghostly Halloween party is made of! ?
Comment is about Nigel Astell (poet profile)
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Thanks for the comment on The Way I Write, Ruth. ? I do find it so interesting and would love others to let me in on their secret methods ? Maybe there are techniques we could all share and learn from...
Comment is about Ruth O'Reilly (poet profile)
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Mon 21st Oct 2019 13:32
Cynthia, I remember that one! Portrait of the Moon. Beautiful piece.
Comment is about Emilia Callahan (poet profile)
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Re. my recent 'Moon Poem'. I hope you're going 'to play with the image'. I'd love to see the result. ( I honestly can't think of the precise title - Good Grief!)
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Re" how to shop for shoes“... Absolutely Isobel. ????
Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)
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Many thanks Fred, I appreciate you listening to 'Blank Canvas'! and I'm glad it's inspired you to record a piece yourself. I'll look forward to hearing it. Your office room sounds great by the way, good vibes.
Comment is about Fred Nicholson (poet profile)
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Hi Ruth,
I liked the read of 'Blank Canvas' lots.
Yours has encouraged me to put my voice out there.
Comment is about Ruth O'Reilly (poet profile)
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Hi Don,
In your biography you note 4 people that influence you.
Comparable messengers have influenced me also.
I listen, hear and act upon the wisdom,
of those in the know.
f
Comment is about Don Matthews (poet profile)
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Fri 18th Oct 2019 13:42
Don, yes! I'm a basket case, hahaha.
Comment is about Emilia Callahan (poet profile)
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"Undress me with your words, and nothing else"
Clever Dana......
Comment is about Dana Lee (poet profile)
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Oh! I see my mistake now John. I thought they were your views and not those of another poet posted last February that you have dragged back for some god knows why reason.
Then I noticed that you have recently turned your profile into a David Moore tribute page. Now it all makes sense.
So let me tell you where I am. I’ll not create another battlefield here on WOL with you.
My advice, not that I suspect you’ll take it is, please take care and keep your comments to other’s work. You might also feel like apologising to the person whose comments you’ve plagiarised too.
As for me.....none taken!
Comment is about John E Marks (poet profile)
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Thu 17th Oct 2019 12:38
Grand-kids are our reward
for suffering through kids.
Comment is about Tom (poet profile)
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Re how to shop for shoes. Enter any shoe shop at any time, spend as long as you like deliberating and buy as many pairs as you can afford and find cupboard space for, sometimes breaking all of those rules with your own 4 inch stiletto heels.
Comment is about Tommy Carroll (poet profile)
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Welcome back Graham. Without even posting anything you have increased Wol's quality. jeez
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Thanks for your comment Isobel, that's very kind of you. ? I'm loving reading the little insights people are adding to Graham's discussion topic. The way/how people create definitely does pique my curiosity (nosiness?).
As for your poem yesterday, I absolutely agree and had been thinking about a similar one expressing my wondering of all the poets on WoL whose work remains but they themselves have moved on. When I get time I love to jump back in time on this site and discover poems from those who aren't posting daily. I often discover fantastic pieces of writing. I might comment on them or like them never sure whether the author will ever see it or if they're even still alive. How to sum all this up in a poem, well, I'll have to wait for inspiration to strike... ? Tom.
Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)
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Golly gosh! Amelia Call
Poet/job in real estate?
Volatile? Yes I do like
Real estate? you say love/hate?
Golly gosh! Amelia Call
You indeed are a mixture gal...?
Comment is about Emilia Callahan (poet profile)
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It's funny but before I'd even read Graham's comment I thought how lovely and refreshing your profile writeup was. A poet who's actually interested in how other people think and create. Not everyone is and you meet many on the poetry scene who aren't there to listen at all.
Thanks for commenting on my poem Tom. I very much enjoyed your Cooling Towers poem - a relationship poem with some depth and originality.
Comment is about Tom (poet profile)
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Listening to the profile tune and got a bit lost. Enjoyed the melody, tempo and your voice. Are you also the instrumentalist? If so, great delivery. If no, still good. Some things don't come immediately. Would you agree Michael?
Creasote is the word I hear you say. It's used to preserve wood utility poles. I believe it is deemed poisonous here in Western WA. I just now see there is a medicinal creasote bush that provides a resin for the wood preservative. Wow, I am still learning stuff. Never heard of a creasote bush before a few minutes ago.
Kinda feel it is a love song, but haven't figured out how. I got stuck on preserved poles and medicinal bushes. Maybe, just a little more time. ?
Comment is about Michael Triandam (poet profile)
Original item by Michael Triandam
Wed 16th Oct 2019 00:29
They say Greeting Cards are out of date
obsolete in this fast-paced world
but homemade cards are still special
when made by children
in some of their first Acts of Creation.
Comment is about Ruth O'Reilly (poet profile)
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Wed 16th Oct 2019 00:24
There is poetry
in children's art
and those who receive
always support
No mystery
right from the start
their creating comes
straight from their heart.
?
Comment is about Don Matthews (poet profile)
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Wed 16th Oct 2019 00:18
Master of Ceremonies---
you got it right.
the poem is about the innocence of children
and how they express themselves.
thank you.
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
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Philipos
Tue 15th Oct 2019 23:44
Thank you Ray - Nut Hatch - appreciative of your kind comments. P. ?
Comment is about ray pool (poet profile)
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YES Don, It doesn't take much to impress me. I was im?pressed.
Comment is about Fred Nicholson (poet profile)
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Hello Don. Thank you for commenting on my poem.
I think we're all developing all the time as poets. I cringe at my early stuff but it was all part of a process or an ascent, to use your analogy - though I'm not sure I'll ever make it to where I'd like to be.
I used to live in Ausyralia. It's a beautiful country. You'll have to open an open mic night there! If you don't already go to one!
Comment is about Don Matthews (poet profile)
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Sorry to hear you have been poorly loved your poem about those wiggly worms Monday night!
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Fred Nicholson
Wed 30th Oct 2019 15:37
Lisa, thank you for responding to my 'Imagine' and my 'Talking Out Loud' works.
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