<Deleted User> (5011)
Sat 19th Jan 2013 18:30
Hi Leon
Welcome to Write Out Loud. It is great that you are in touch all the way from Tirana.
I look forward to hearing more about you and reading some samples of your writing.
faleminderi
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Greetings!
I wish you Happy New Year 2013!
Thanks for my page.All the best!
Leon Qafzezi
Tirane/Albania
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Hi Yvonne Thanks for comment on my postcard poem. My days as a teacher seem a long time ago now. Don't know how I did it for so long!
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I am currently an airline pilot and play bassoon in the Royal Liverpool Philomonic Orchestra and am chef-du-'file at various restaurants and still find time to chuck empty beer cans at gulls that land too close to my caravan.
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HI Tommy,
caravan and sea are so me!
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Hi Steve
thanks for the link to your piccies of Dylan'sbooathouse. I am so jealous that you have been there I love his work too.xx
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Hi Greg THanks for kind words on my David poem. Yes, now you mention it we did have a conversation about 'postcard' poems. KIngsley Amis once famously said that ' no one wants any more poems about foreign cities'. If these little poems come to anything and I manage to publish them I'll use that as an epigraph. I don't agree with him and some of my favourite poets are always writing about foreign places: Jamie McKendrick, Michael Hofman, Bernard Spencer, CHarles Tomlinson. Anyway, these have ben quite fun to do. I'm up to 14 at the moment.
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Thank you for your kind words Yvonne - you know what it's like when you're the writer though - bloody things are never QUITE finished! ;)
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Thank you Ms B. methinks you enjoy a caravan by the sea?
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Hello MC
Glad you liked penis Penis.
It was a rather laboured song just to make the point that Penis and Denis are eye rhymes.
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Hello Dave,
Another one near the knuckle, and with only one poor joke in it - penis and denis are eye rhymes!
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...and what's wrong with calling it Penis Penis? ("So good they named it twice")
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Hey Yvonne, glad you liked 'Mum' and loved your villanelle.Don't get me started on Dylan Thomas, I love his work. Went to see his 'house on stilts' - the boathouse at laugharne some years ago, what a great museum and the staff are so nice. Heres my pic:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/61207511@N03/5737365722/in/set-72157629746360284
best wishes, Steve
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'brasso', yvonne? Very good. Spookily when i was at school a kid had a testicle removed and cruelly got nicknamed 'womble'.
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<Deleted User> (8659)
Wed 16th Jan 2013 19:33
Hi Yvonne,
Thank you for your comments on 'A Tradition Saved'
I am hoping to include this and other excerpts I may post on here in my next novel (which will be a sequel to 'Hunting The Great White Prawn')so all feedback is especially appreciated.
Cheers,
Ledger
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<Deleted User> (6895)
Wed 16th Jan 2013 15:57
We thank you Yvonne for opinions(Down)
and observations.xx
Indeed,mutilating does NOT work-why?
because two old duffers somehow
forget to add the word-itself-
immediately after it-zzzzzzzzzzzz!!
Cheers chuck.xx
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<Deleted User> (6895)
Wed 16th Jan 2013 15:47
Hi Steve.We hope thou art well and that you are maintaining that youthful,roguish smile.
'Tenebrous' has had the you-know-what
well knocked out of it on W.O.L
It is nearly as popular
and as nice as that word.....er
ah!
Higgins!
Cheers matey!xx
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Ditto - I don't get the same problem with other blogs though. I'll drop a line to the techies to ask them what the problem is. x
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Ditto for 40 Rats blank page comes up!
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Thanks Yvonne! I am glad that a connection was made, even without the aid of a cup of tea.
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wow what a lot of rot i write!! haha will catch up. thanks
ive re read your comment. it is very beautiful.
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Thanks for checking out 'the middle of the night' Yvonne. I rarely need the loo in the night but conversely when I'm sleeping in the day after a night shift I always have to go at 11:30!
best wishes, Steve
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Maggie wheelchair will travel
Good to see you
Notice put on lawn
No crumbs for you
New law passed through
States no feeding here!
Thanks for coming Gerald
Welcome to Stockport WOL
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Laura you are now officially my second favourite poem on this site- That is all.
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THIS?
#1 Rachel- ''I have my own genres.'' Tae Kwon Do or butchery may resolve your need for 'poeticide' ;o). I do re-read my own stuff regularly- and sometimes also feel a distance between 'us' both. Maybe that is the sign of nascent maturity?
10/01/12
#2 Rachel- re your post to myself; have you not considered that your poetry may be 'universal' and therefore have value to an unknown reader?
09/01/12
#3 poeticide is a good word. i keep the ones that are important. some get deletisized.the genre thing is really to say i have a distance from a lot of my subjects but make them personal. some turn out to be something i want to keep personal. sometimes i write for me. sometimes for others, but i agree that nascent maturity allows for me to see that sometimes what i write is an elaborate escape and sometimes i like to keep it real.
11/1/12
4# yes tommy i have thought about that and i agree, its really why i continue to post or write at all. however i also believe in the field of dreams...'build and they will come' only in this case instead of building a big baseball park i clear out my old poems to make way for the new. fresh ideas. in art i work sequentially, ideas build change and develop. with writing i like to write as if ive never written anything before. which is why some read like that. i like to write with different 'voices' from different perspectives and let styles work together. i have my own genres.
9/1/12
#5 'new me.' sometimes i read back old poems and they have become that. outdated thinking, old thought processes. i like to clear em out and start again with a fresh page hoping for inspiration. thanks for asking x
#6 tommy, its a tough one. i believe that if something is written and posted and it offends which all sorts of material is likely to do on all sorts of grounds..i think the writer should be held accountable to their readers as would be with published work. here a comments system operates.so if i were to offend i would personally feel obliged to defend, explain my writing. sometimes its an agree to differ situation. if someone were to post something inciting hatred be it racial, concerning disability, whatever i still beilieve it should stand and be criticised. As such it offers an exampler of its inadequacy as an idea. if someone were to post sexually inapropriate material i believe there should be a standard of censure based on the accessibility of this site to young people as a moral obligation.
concerning freedom of speech once blogged this goes out to the world potentially. Its a gift but just a medium. free media..is up for exploitation like anything else. I think we can only measure our own writing. I have only ever once been offended by a slight comment on this site and ive been a member for years. I think that a sign of its credibility and the level of responsibility of its writers.
Thanks for posting this.
8/10/11
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hi tommy...now im sorry but you put an interesting comment on my profile and its been so long since i was on here that ive forgotten to which, what, who it refers?? please remind x
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Thanks Yvonne - I guess that the "Creator" must have decided that love per se was not conducive to progress or else humans might be inclined to stay happy in a state of commonly enjoyed conviviality and go nowhere in the greater scheme of things. Would that be so bad, I ask?! Instead, we seem to have been programmed to have the capacity but not the total commitment...a sort of emotional half-way house of "one kiss forward...two kicks back"; and vice-versa.
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I have ambivalent thoughts about the mining industry. I accept its importance as a mainstay of the industrial might that propelled this small country to the fore in other days, yet feel immense sympathy for those men (and boys!) who worked in it, and the animals that had even less of a choice. Who, I have always wondered, would WANT to work as a miner? And with that in mind, I have also wondered why there should be such resistance to seeing the end of such a dangerous and debilitating way of life...especially if it offered the chance of another existence, helped by a financial incentive. There must be plenty of people seeking the opportunity to strike out on their own OR choose a different way of earning a living...even it it means moving elsewhere. But maybe that is the biggest hurdle for so many...moving elsewhere. Is it the fear of leaving what you know - a close-knit community in work however mean and hazardous - for the unknown of a wider world? This may be a "northern" trait as I recall that the tin miners of Cornwall became well known in other lands - seemingly willing to export their particular expertise.
Not a calling for the claustrophobic - and I wonder about life insurance rates!!
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Anne,
Thanks for the re-welcome( as warm as your
well-remembered first one)
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Hi Ludo - a warm welcome to SWOL - hope you enjoy the site.
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Hi - and a very warm welcome to WOL. Hope you enjoy the site :)
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Hi Tom - welcome to WOL. Good luck with thatr hit single! Hope to see (and maybe hear) more of your work on here soon.
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Hi Harry - looking forward to seeing more of your candle boats of poetic endeavor on here soon ;)
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Thank you, kindly. I am most appreciative of your visit & honest response.
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I'm delighted to hear that there is a simple explanation for you disappearing like that :)
Re photo - any will do - how lucky are you not to be visually challenged - like what John Coopey is... ;)
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...that comment about trying to find a photo that does justice...
...best keep looking!
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Isobel,
Your chat request kept coming up and I kept ticking `allow` but nout happened and as a computer thick `ead I didn`t know what to do next.
(I presume it was to do with old stupido deleting himself off the profiles by accident)If it was anything else let`s know.
(I`ll add a photo when I can find one that does Justice, homage, adoration, etc; to my immense good looks)
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Thanks for your comment on my FB poem Cathy. Yes - speaking to the wall is a strange concept - you ARE speaking to yourself - but at the same time everyone you ever knew - from the person you met in a lift a day or so ago to someone you haven't seen since your first job 20 years ago... Facebook is a crazy crazy place!
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Sexy lady
Seductive glasses
Poetry book
Would love
To borrow
Mind you
I might
Just get
Stuck on
Page three.
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Thanks for your comments on "You've Met The Met", Laura.
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Hello Harry,
Thanks for your thoughts on "You've Met The Met". Time was when the NUM were a significant if not enormous power. In their time, leaders like Gormley and Scargill were names everybody had heard of; likewise Vic Feather or Len Murray.
Who knows who the President of the TUC is these days, let alone a piddling little union like the NUM.
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Hello MC,
Thanks for your thoughts on "You've Met The Met". My own role in the strike as a manager was to help staff the pits on a care and maintenance basis, preventing them fopm gassing up or flooding so there'd be something for the miners to come back to!
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Hi Cynthia thanks for your comment on Robert Burns, I like a lot of he's work.
Hazel
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<Deleted User> (6895)
Sat 12th Jan 2013 23:09
Hi again Shirley and thank you so much for the wonderful news regarding little Isabella.
It has no doubt lifted your spirits as well.
An awful thing for the whole family to have to endure.Good luck and good health to you all.
Patricia and Stef.xx..XX for Isabella.
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Hi Lynn,
Thanks as usual for your comments on 'Paxos'
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Hi Cynthia,
Thanks for the comments on Paxos. The 'He' is the stick insect... he was awkward and not at all graceful and therefore seemed naturally a male!
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David Cooke
Sat 19th Jan 2013 19:24
Hi Cynthia Thanks for the comms on the two postcard poems. You were spot on with 'Rouen' That's where the English burned Joan of Arc. I've been getting a bit addicted to these little poems. They usually start of with some little memory that has been at the back of my mind for years, but then open up other themes which link up with others in the series. I've done 15 so far. Not sure where it will end. Maybe 20? Maybe more!
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