Hi Freda,

Thanks for your comment on my poem, I think your comments on my style were pretty much bang on :)

Wez.

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hello MC,
"Who had a hand in it"... Very good.
I think it's open to a wide interpretation!

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I'm afraid you are a little too delicate, Yvonne, to enter my competition on Gropexxxx Lane!

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Hello Ian,
I think you win this week's quiz on Gropexxxx Lane!

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thanks for your kind comments on 'in the frame' Yvonne, I am, as always, very grateful for you reading and appreciating
cheers
Ian

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thanks for your comments on 'in the frame' john - i've tagged it for the competition, so hopefully it will get picked up
cheers
Ian

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Thanks for the comments on 'in the frame' Isobel - good point about funerals - might change that line to 'Parties'
Cheers
Ian

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Hello Nithin - welcome to WOL - I've enjoyed reading your poetry.

It occurs to me that you may like to put some of your poems into the blog section, rather than in the comment area of your profile page - they are more likely to get read there.

Once people start to leave messages in your profile section your poems will disappear if they are just in comments. If you put them in the blog section they will be filed in date order and more accessible.

'Make Blog Entry' is at the top right hand side of your screen.

Hope you enjoy WOL.

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To Her Beauty

If 'beauty' Be the self satisfied pride she bears,
Each Fly do wing around her cherubic sweet face,
As they; lovers seek what her anonymous covers,
And dream them in a transient trace.
When 'beauty', a self possessed pride, you Worn,
Each fly does wing around your wilt grace,
As what lovers opine, 'how your beauty haste flown;
As falls the man in his transient race'.


Nithin Purple

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On Fair Compassion( XIII )

If ruth,a king like guest in we well move,
In fact do guide we,this green wide globe,
This comrade godly he,and tell him prove
A stranger he,who captures bleak and doom
His arms do comfort depress and regrets
If truth is true,and mercy heart each bloom
Dear soul,you golden leaf from heaven's art,
And pour you bliss to whom who seek full sense
Yet gloom is man,how heavy his mind cart.
How Fair your Shelter, which exclude sorrow,
You sore in pain,and supplies endless spring,
Inspirit's my world with joyous,tender shadow
Compassion you for life,you melt in each dream-
Of trouble and save as my father do.

Nithin Purple

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On Desire


No rules ne'er rest your pinions,but low hope;
To wake my wondrous thought's in many and many
And your wander alters minds madden swipe.
Your cottage fill of dreams, of freshness wing,
Which power brake your noble flow,and how?
O' my sweet, sweetly touch; when ever you sing!
Let me spread your secret cipher,with emotes,
Most colored yours,still man needs you,do you?
So, though he mortal sleep in still your shades,
With somber ideas here, too far wish I glide
From this world -sour with hopeful Ecstasy
Let soul is pure,but Here is mine that fade
Misfortune leads despair with fear desires,
Your beauty utterly falls; nothing wakes?

Nithin Purple

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THANK YOU TINA A KISS

Comment is about BRIAN EVANS (poet profile)

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so lovely

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I was referencing those guilty (convicted or otherwise). Those playing no part in acts of pedophilia are not being referred to.

''extremes are never valid because they lack the potential argument of persuasion.'' I think 'extremity' depends upon your position in any argument. Is it extreme to want that ALL poverty be removed?

I for one subscribe to the values proffered by James Connolly:
''...’Tis passing strange, yet I declare
Such statements give me mirth,
For our demands most moderate are,
We only want the earth.'' Tommy

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Hello Steve .. thanks for your comment on 'PIC-USB-4550-sch.' .. mikhail ....

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Hiya there Steve..Thanks so much for the lovely comment on my poem..Kind of you :)

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Thanks for looking at 'pass the bread' MC
All the best, Steve

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Hi Rach...x..sighs..no not real life..it was s'posed to read as an old car..me being the 'ol'banger!..It was for the comp about inanimate objects..was gonna be a car or a dildo..the car won out!

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Hello again there Ian :)

You know something?..I did have trade in there then at the last minute I decided to put in buy..hmmm..a couple of folk have thought this was about real life so to speak..D'ya think it is too ambiguous?..What made you realise it was about a car?..thanks Ian
Stel

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Sorry to hear about you still being in pain. I must have been exceptionally lucky. I stopped taking the painkillers after 2 days. I WAS in pain, but it was such a different pain to the pain prior to the OP that I found it quite bearable and almost cathartic, especially as it got less and less each day, rather than worse and worse like the previous pain.

It's a very subjective thing I found. It hurt differently depending upon how I viewed it. Anyway, I'm still sure that you will eventually end up better off than before. I had a freaky experience after I got mobile again (about a week after the OP) when I became convinced that one leg was shorter than the other, however they measured them and proved that they weren't, it turned out to be my new posture and, having spent much of the previous 5 years limping and standing with all the weight on one leg I had become lopsided. Once I noticed that then I found that swimming, in particular, helped rebalance me, although you should only swim freestyle, not breaststroke because the leg kick is risky. Anyway, keep o keeping on!

Jx

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Hi Lynn - thanks for the good wishes re my hip op xx

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Hi Anthony - thanks for the good wishes re my hip op xx

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Hi Greg - thanks for the good wishes re my hip op xx

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Hi John - thanks for the good wishes re my hip op. Still sore and I can't sleep - can't get comfortable :( xx

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Hi Laura - thanks for the good wishes re my hip op xx

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Hi Isobel - thanks for the good wishes re my hip op xx

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Hi Harry - thanks for the good wishes re my hip op xx

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Thanks for the good wishes re the hip op - as to the photo - no way! ;)

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Shame on you Ian!! tskk...even old bangers have feelings yer know! :) Thanks for the lovely reply to Second-Hand Love x appreciated..

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Bout a car innit?..For the Comp.. Inanimate Object lol..think if I had added furry dice in there it would have been easier to understand?..Pleased you enjoyed nevertheless :) x

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Hi Tracey!! Only just found your page. As Jeff said.........about time!! Will read your work soon. Looking forward to seeing you read at the cadence!! Take care, Tony.

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Harry
I'm grateful, as always, for your kind and supportive comments on 'forget me not' - thanks for taking the time to read it and comment - much appreciated
Ian

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Cathy
so pleased that you liked 'forget me not' - many thanks for your kind and supportive comments
cheers
Ian

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good to hear from you, Joe.. i will keep an eye on your pages for good rants! lol

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Thanks for the welcome Ann, and the advice. Yes, I've just realised that previous entries seem to drop off as a new one is posted. I shall regulate my blogs!

Comment is about Andy Ainsworth (poet profile)

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Hi Andy - welcome to WOL. I like your poems. Maybe space them out a bit timewise when you blog them as only the last poem is obvious to people skimming through the blogs.

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she COMES from there.

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Aye will do mate, if I ever get to finishing it ;)

And yeh, read your epic ;D

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Hi Margaret, thank you for commenting on "Snowy Window", glad you like it.
I really like your "Sense of Love -Hurry Home", excellent rhythm which works really well. x

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Mad March hare indeed....

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Thanks for you comment! I was very excited at the time but then it all turned into a romantic tragedy : ) (sigh!)

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What ho, MC.
Glad you liked Paint it beige.
Yes, I think I got a spelling wrong in'gauge'.

Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)

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Ohh Laura, chuck us a pointer when you've written the poem you mentioned so I can have a gander -

Best

Chris

Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)

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Thx for reading and feedback on my latest Harry - appreciated.

Left a long windy comment on the blog hehe

Best

Chris

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Thx for reading and feedback on my latest - appreciated.

Left a long windy comment on the blog hehe

Best

Chris

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Cheers Win for the support. Keep those blogs coming I always read em !

Comment is about Winston Plowes (poet profile)

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Thanks Harry for your note on Synaesthetic Symphony.

The pointillism is just another technique is all and I kind of liked how it contrasted with cubist.

It's not a painting btw, the pic was done in pastels :)

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Hi Anthony

Hope you are well.

I received Turbulence13 the other day.

lovely to see 2 of your poems in there

always good to see quality writing


Win

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Dear Chris,
thanks for the comment and will see you on Tuesday.Forgot how to use the Facebook to put this poem up.'Spirits New Haven' is a fine poem.
Best Steve

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Thx for the comment on my latest Dave - appreciated.

Best

Chris

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