Keith,
Thank you for appreciating my words.
I'm glad that you agree with my thoughts. Its upsetting to see someone in deep trouble and it hurts like hell when you aren't able to help them. Words of condolence and encouragement can't do what kind actions can.
We do care and love irrespective of colour, creed, caste, religion, races and nation. I'm glad this is a sweet alternative to all the plight.
Love n Peace
MG
Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)
Original item by keith jeffries
Graham,
I live not far from Warmington, which is the setting for this poem. I live in a larger town only a few miles away. A delightful county second only to one of its neighbours.
Keith
Comment is about Graham Sherwood (poet profile)
Original item by Graham Sherwood
Sat 27th Nov 2021 02:36
I am selfless
if I say so my Self!
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Sat 27th Nov 2021 02:33
written in fun.
I am humble
if I say so My Self!
Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)
Original item by keith jeffries
Sat 27th Nov 2021 02:31
All in jest Stephen.
By the way,
what is that cloud thing in your photo?
Is that you?
Comment is about Stephen W Atkinson (poet profile)
Original item by Stephen W Atkinson
Hello MC. Loved the ad for an Encyclopaedia! Another, I hope involontary piece of irony is /was in Edinburgh Zoo. A snakepit filled with kraits, vipers, cobras, rattlesnakes etc, donated by .............., 'in memory of his parents'?!!!!!!!.
Jennifer
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
I love your sample work, Prince Ali. I can see you reading this in a traditional poetry slam-and rocking it! Would love to see more of your work here if you are happy to share more.
Best wishes and keep writing.
Kind regards,
Rasa
Comment is about Prince Ali (poet profile)
Original item by Prince Ali
Thu 25th Nov 2021 15:56
Thank you Graham for your Thanksgiving Greeting.
It's not everyday you get a word of encouragement, much less from so far away.
It's a shame you don't have real turkey. It is delicious.
You should get one to raise. They are easy to keep
but quite dumb. I think you could keep one in your spare
bedroom or in the hallway of your "Flat", if that's what you
have. Don't all Englishmen have Flats?
I will think of you as I eat my Turkey today along with dressing
and cranberry sauce. But, I won't think of you too long,
I'm going for seconds and have to be fast! hahaha
Comment is about Graham Sherwood (poet profile)
Original item by Graham Sherwood
Thank you for your graphic description of a doodle bug. I shall try to avoid them. Thanks giving baffles me. What and for whom are you thanking. We save our turkeys until Christmas. These days they cost a fortune.
Happy Thanksgiving. Don't overdo it.
Keith
Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)
Original item by d.knape
Welcome to WOL. I look forward to seeing more of your work
Keith
Comment is about Prince Ali (poet profile)
Original item by Prince Ali
Thu 25th Nov 2021 12:04
Doodle bugs. See this:
https://www.thoughtco.com/what-are-doodlebugs-1968047
(even though you Englishmen do not celebrate the Holiday,
HAPPY THANKSGIVING TO YOU!!
now go out and eat some turkey!
(or do you even have turkeys?)
Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)
Original item by keith jeffries
Wed 24th Nov 2021 11:44
Here I am
stabbing away at the keyboard
but my only thoughts are frivolous
one cannot be serious all the time
life is full of comedy
it lessens the tragedy.
Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)
Original item by keith jeffries
dk.,
Thanks. I associate with both the high and low, whatever that means. Praise where praise is due and similarly so with criticism which needs to be constructive and not negative. Poetry and those who write it are strong individuals with well thought out ideas and the innate ability to describe what we see and our thoughts. We are both no exceptions to this. Write what you feel inspired to write, avoid the frivolous and write with pen and paper. The hand is connected to the arm which is in turn connected to the body which holds the mind. Poetry needs to flow from the mind and does not come well from stabbing away at key boards and peering into screens with bleary eyes.
Keith
Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)
Original item by d.knape
Tue 23rd Nov 2021 00:02
Tanks Keith,
You are always too kind.
If I were you
I would not associate with anyone like myself.
wink. wink.
Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)
Original item by keith jeffries
Mon 22nd Nov 2021 03:08
You blocked me?
what on earth for?
I know my poems are not that great
but still....
that's going a little too far!
?
Comment is about Stephen W Atkinson (poet profile)
Original item by Stephen W Atkinson
Mon 22nd Nov 2021 03:06
As long as you agree with Me,
you'll be fine.
?
Comment is about Jennifer Malden (poet profile)
Original item by Jennifer Malden
Sun 21st Nov 2021 02:59
Now that I think about it
what I thought I thought
is not much of
a thought.
?
Comment is about Stephen W Atkinson (poet profile)
Original item by Stephen W Atkinson
You write with a great passion identifying your soul as your real and true identity. You have or are perhaps passing through the experience of coming to know yourself, the inner self. This is an edifying process as it will be of assistance to you in your life and writing. I have read through a number of your poems which are impressive. You have the spirit of a writer and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Thank you for becoming a member of this site as you will be an inspiration to others.
Keith
Comment is about Zhar2020 (poet profile)
Original item by Zhar2020
I read with growing interest your poem 1990. Somehow it was akin to reading something which resembled a literary frieze which left me wanting to meet and speak with the man with the black beard and Russian hat. He cuts an enigmatic figure. You possess a unique style of writing which is quite fascinating. At times it is disjointed but the reader is spurred on with renewed interest. I have read some of your work so far and look forward to more.
Thank you for this
Keith
Comment is about D.W. Hamilton (poet profile)
Original item by D.W. Hamilton
Really loved the urbane urban fox! Je nifer
Comment is about David Lindsay (poet profile)
Original item by David Lindsay
Thu 18th Nov 2021 23:37
"The Boyfriend" was a classic!
Considered opinions
on you were dropped,
everyone had one
they never stopped,
your so-called boyfriend
a Lover was not,
when it came to bed
he was definitely a flop!.
?
Comment is about Jennifer Malden (poet profile)
Original item by Jennifer Malden
I was wondering why I only saw your posts when someone comments on them. And its because I'd blocked you! ? By accident of course! But now I'm, once again, ready to receive your genius ...I'm waiting...?
Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)
Original item by d.knape
Thu 18th Nov 2021 19:14
I can write fairly good poetry
when I put my mind to it-
The problem is
putting my mind to it.
Comment is about Jennifer Malden (poet profile)
Original item by Jennifer Malden
Thu 18th Nov 2021 19:10
the deeper the hole-
the harder to get out of.
?
Comment is about Jennifer Malden (poet profile)
Original item by Jennifer Malden
Agree absolutely with Keith. Was definitely impressed with the butterfly poem, really beautiful. Am getting quite jealous! What has happened to change your contributions so drastically? I enjoywriting 'frivolous' stuff too, they are like word games. Haven't abandoned anyone! Keep up the good work.
Jennifer
Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)
Original item by d.knape
Wed 17th Nov 2021 22:29
now we know.-
you have deserted me
wink. wink.
Comment is about Jennifer Malden (poet profile)
Original item by Jennifer Malden
Wed 17th Nov 2021 22:27
thanks Keith.
I know him personally.
Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)
Original item by keith jeffries
dk.,
When you put your mind to writing good poetry you produce some fine work. Try and avoid the frivolous. You are a good poet.
Keith
Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)
Original item by d.knape
Tue 16th Nov 2021 03:15
I think you have a Monarch in your hands right there.
wink. wink.
Comment is about Chris Bunton (poet profile)
Original item by Chris Bunton
Tue 16th Nov 2021 03:14
Thanks Keith for your comment on "Last To Leave".
I was rather proud of the way the poem turned out.
?
Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)
Original item by keith jeffries
Hello Nigel, thank you for reading the poems and leaving your precious poetic comments. Much appreciated.
Comment is about Nigel Astell (poet profile)
Original item by Nigel Astell
Hi Ray - Not sure about your message of the 1st November just
read. My only recall is of a purchase way back and that seems to
be connected with my message seen in your list of messages dated 7th February last. However, I will go to my Paypal
account, not least to check payments in general - and come
back to you. Cheers, Mark
Comment is about ray pool (poet profile)
Original item by ray pool
Tue 9th Nov 2021 11:51
Thanks Newberry.
I will try to live up to
your expectations.
?
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Holden,
Thank you for your latest comment on my poem, and also for many previous comments. The are a constant source of inspiration and encouragement.
Thank you indeed
Keith
Comment is about Holden Moncrieff (poet profile)
Original item by Holden Moncrieff
Tue 9th Nov 2021 02:25
So many similar stories.
Apparently Parrots swear on a regular basis.
Like children picking up bad habits.
But..you cannot spank a Parrot!
Animal cruelty you know!
?
Comment is about Jennifer Malden (poet profile)
Original item by Jennifer Malden
Mon 8th Nov 2021 10:35
A purse pup
may have a hankering
but it's too used
to pampering,
so to waves and sun
it shies away
prefers the comfort
of the shade.
?
Comment is about Stephen Gospage (poet profile)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Cheers Keith for comment on "Listening then a smile" ?
Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)
Original item by keith jeffries
Sat 6th Nov 2021 02:02
with 3 kids
I imagine
there was no Change left.
?
A new ink blot test?
Comment is about Graham Sherwood (poet profile)
Original item by Graham Sherwood
Very sexy and your erotic tones mimic those of a voyeur. Well done .
Comment is about Louis Audet (poet profile)
Original item by Louis Audet
Thanks for your lovely comment on Under The Old Whale Bones. I hope everything is good with you Jennifer. Cheers, Tom.
Comment is about Jennifer Malden (poet profile)
Original item by Jennifer Malden
Tue 2nd Nov 2021 01:42
Thanks M.C. for commenting on
"The Grass is always Greener".
Tose people in the photo are sitting on green grass
waiting for something...
we know not what.
?
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Hello Keith, fantastic autumn poem on Poetry Plus. Really enjoyed the beautiful language. I started WOL in 2017, and most of us have come on a great deal since then, I think. Found a poem new to me today. Titles, by John Richardson, whom I didn't know.It's not in the least pedantic. even though he was a Victorian poet, andvery amusing. Keep up the good work.
All the best, Jennifer
Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)
Original item by keith jeffries
Sun 31st Oct 2021 11:25
There' a time and place for everything.
For that poem...
maybe not!
?
(what are those people doing? Waiting to eat?)
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Sun 31st Oct 2021 11:23
you're also good at
Responses!
?
Comment is about John Coopey (poet profile)
Original item by John Coopey
Fri 29th Oct 2021 12:27
"made me smile"
That's the whole idea!
?
Comment is about Candice Reineke (poet profile)
Original item by Candice Reineke
Thu 28th Oct 2021 23:28
Who are those people?
The Bilderbergs?
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Thu 28th Oct 2021 11:37
Good advice Master of Ceremonies.
I hate it when the comment on my poem
is better than the poem itself.
wink!
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
d.knape
Mon 29th Nov 2021 02:51
Thanks for reading "Cows".
Had no idea you were such a prolific writer.
Read your Bio.
Am impressed.
but...
forget about climate change
it's been changing for eons.
Comment is about Stephen Gospage (poet profile)
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