To Die For
Shaken and stirred
ice cool poetry
stumble you never
instead flowing words
come from your
sweet killer lips.
Comment is about Nicola Hulme (poet profile)
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Nigel, you are too kind as ever.
It's completely the other way around; joining the group has forced me to up my game. I sit amazed at what I hear. Such talent!
I must also say that everyone has been incredibly welcoming and more than patient as I stumble my way through. I'm very grateful to be allowed to join in.
One day I will write something worthy of you (I hope!) - although I'm sure Martin will always blow me out of the water!!!
Comment is about Nicola Hulme (poet profile)
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Thank you for reading and commenting on 'Impulsive'. I'm glad you could connect to it. I look forward to reading your work
Comment is about Amanda Daughtry (poet profile)
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Sun 19th Jun 2016 04:34
Thank you... glad you enjoy it
Comment is about Robert Williams (poet profile)
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John Cancel
Sun 19th Jun 2016 04:32
elPintor
Sun 19th Jun 2016 00:21
Wow, Phil..young or disinterested, or whatever the excuse, I have a hard time believing that such dramatic events are somehow irrelevant after the passage of only a few decades. I mean, it isn't as if the events in Chile after Allende was overthrown occurred in some sort of political vacuum. Central and South America were hot for quite a while. That said, I believe there's much more to it all than the "disinterested" would care to know.
I'm glad to see someone write about these things..there's no good reason for such bloody history to be so soon forgotten.
elP
Comment is about mentalelf. Philk. (poet profile)
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Actually I miss spelled. I really am actually passionate about eating disorders. Theres just something about them. Its like looking at Van Gogh or listening to Mozart at 432hz..
Anyways, oysters are good too. I made the best deep fried oyster sandwich in the whole god damn world tonight. It had artichokes, mayo, Grey pouton or whatever the fuck that shits called and some mexican salsa oil.
Comment is about Austin (poet profile)
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Read it as "really like eating disorders".
Glad you were actually referring to shellfish
Comment is about Austin (poet profile)
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I'm quite uneducated when it comes to poetry but I am glad you gave me some names to look into. I am very impressed with your work. I can imagine it's wonderful to hear live.
All the best
Comment is about Stuart Buck (poet profile)
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thanks for reading and commenting on my work. i am currently enjoying your piece 'on the fly' you have a very easy style, a touch of bukowski but with a modern, weariness a bit like mira gonzales or tao lin. great stuff.
Comment is about Alexandra Lorenz (poet profile)
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thank you for giving me the rent collector!
I think your poetry has inspired me to write more of my own. I love the way you have joined the group and with it brought your own creativity, imagination and charm which I think is brilliant.
Comment is about Nicola Hulme (poet profile)
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Nigel, I adore the last two lines in particular
"while bite marks are still bleeding
a note is signed rent paid"
What fantastic imagery. I kowtow to your genius :)
Comment is about Nicola Hulme (poet profile)
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The Rent Collector
No money yet again to pay
a She wolf in red stilettos
opens door with her own key
naked body waits for collectors demands
under full moon only when satisfied
while bite marks are still bleeding
a note is signed rent paid.
Nicola if you like this poem I will read it out next time!
Comment is about Nicola Hulme (poet profile)
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<Deleted User> (13947)
Thu 16th Jun 2016 12:49
Trevor-thank you for the like on Worship :)
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<Deleted User> (13947)
Thu 16th Jun 2016 12:49
Lynne-thank you for the like on Worship :)
Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)
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<Deleted User> (13947)
Wed 15th Jun 2016 12:11
Thank you Zakiya :) I absolutely love your name on your profile. Abstract Mystery just screams poetry. I'll be checking out your work in the next couple of days.
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<Deleted User> (9882)
Tue 14th Jun 2016 18:28
Hi David.You must think that I'm a real ignoramus in not thanking you for your kind comment on 'myself after his departure'
I sincerely apologise for the oversight.And to go some way in making it up to you,may I say welcome and I hope you enjoy your time on this site.
I look forward to reading your poems later on,but for now,a big thank you for your comments.
Specsavers next stop! ;o)
Rose.x
Comment is about david coulthard (poet profile)
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I'll make an effort to check more of your work. I like your ideas. Besides, my eyes work better now.
I live in Sale. You might like to try the WOL evening at Sale Waterside which meets next Tuesday; it's a widely varied group, and very friendly.
I'm going to be so embarrassed if you've already been out and I've not recognized your name.
Comment is about John E Marks (poet profile)
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Thank you for your comment on Analytical Ambivalence!
I truly appreciate your comment, I am very much like you with my rhyming style so I'll enjoy reading your work too
- Jade
Comment is about Matthew McCanless (poet profile)
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Will the glove ever find it's rightful hand? Fantastic poetry Nigel x
Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)
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Oh hey, and thanks for your note on For Mohammad :)
Comment is about Suki Spangles (poet profile)
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You made a superb compere Alex - relaxed, jovial, natural - everything you could ask for - and you seemed to enjoy it as much as we did! Look forward to seeing you do it again! Xxx
Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)
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Hi Michelle, Thank you for commenting on my recent poem. Best wishes, Suki
Comment is about Michelle Cote (poet profile)
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Hi folks just a reprint of a post put in elPintor's page...;~)
elP
you have answered it and all quite wonderfully. And I did not in the least intended it (my original reply to you) to be anything but "school masterly" I keep forgetting to use the smileies ;~) Again I have enjoyed your responses as much as my original writing of the piece. :~) Tommy
Comment is about Harry O`N eill (poet profile)
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Ray - you are more than welcome.
Rob
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Preeti Sinha
Sun 12th Jun 2016 08:31
Gorgeous man. Muaah! Will write soooooooon!
Comment is about Corr Lens (poet profile)
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Hi Phil Glad you liked my 'Cogs'. I see we're both 1953ers!
Comment is about Phil Ireland (poet profile)
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Miss Alexandra Fiona Swarbrick
Sat 11th Jun 2016 16:39
Hello Mrs.
Just to say thank you for your kind words on Thursday.
For all the time you have given me.
Good luck with everything.
I'm still too nervous to put a profile up on here, some sad memories for me.
See you whenever.
love me :) x
Ps forgot my password and had changed email so had to make a new one with the full name !
Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)
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I'm so glad that one of my poems became close to your heart, that's the nicest comment, thankyou!
Take care
- Jade
Comment is about Monami Kundu (poet profile)
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Thankyou so much for your comment on 'a boys pride'
I'm glad you agreed with some of my points and humor is not my forte, so I'm really grateful you thought it worked well.
Take care!
- Jade
Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)
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<Deleted User> (13947)
Sat 11th Jun 2016 11:39
Thank you so much Lynn for your comments on Sinus Rhythm and Taste. As well as on my profile page :) I look forward to going back on your page and reading your posts xx
Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)
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@vickiayers its me! and al of us!
Comment is about Pixievic (poet profile)
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Glad you liked my Mill Girl! David
Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)
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HI Ray glad you liked my 'cogs'. Davidf
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<Deleted User> (9882)
Wed 8th Jun 2016 20:12
with a gorgeous smile like yours Michelle,how could anybody not welcome you,which I do,and hope you have fun reading and posting.
Rose.x
Comment is about Michelle Cote (poet profile)
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<Deleted User> (13947)
Wed 8th Jun 2016 17:32
Hey Michelle, those feelings in Internal Attack depend on the day I guess. Some days are harder than others. Thank you for commenting xx
Comment is about Michelle Cote (poet profile)
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Many thanks for your words on 'Vial' Peter. Much appreciated! I look forward to checking out some of your own work.
Comment is about Peter Knaggs (poet profile)
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<Deleted User> (13947)
Tue 7th Jun 2016 21:57
Hey Laura, thanks for the like on Library :)
Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)
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<Deleted User> (13947)
Tue 7th Jun 2016 21:46
Thank you Mark for your comment on Library :)
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
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<Deleted User> (13947)
Tue 7th Jun 2016 21:44
Thank you Martin for your comment on Library. I think we all spend time sorting words we will never feel are quite the right ones. But the option of just leaving them is too sad.
Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)
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<Deleted User> (13947)
Tue 7th Jun 2016 21:40
Thanks Helen for liking Music & Lyrics :)
Comment is about Helen (poet profile)
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Working on it - - - could call it
Brown Bare Ass with Red Bits in the Middle!
Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)
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Make sure you get my best side Paul
if you can find one that is!
Comment is about Paul Blackburn (poet profile)
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Kamaraj S
Tue 7th Jun 2016 05:26
Michelle - thanks for commenting on 'Pinot Grigio' and welcome to WOL. You will find a broad spectrum of work on here, so don't be afraid to post your own. The audience are usually quite kind and in some cases very very helpful.
Enjoy.
Rob
Comment is about Michelle Cote (poet profile)
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You're very welcome!
Please visit us at The Chocolate Poetry Club some time :)
Comment is about Katy Megan (poet profile)
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Hi Stuart great to find you here. I am just reading a few of your featured poems, nice work. We also followed you on Twitter - @ChocPoetryClub. Thanks
Comment is about Stuart Buck (poet profile)
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Hi Tommy, I enjoyed a read of your poems today. Hope to read more soon. Please do visit The Chocolate Poetry Club one day! Paul
Comment is about Tommy Carroll (poet profile)
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<Deleted User> (13947)
Tue 21st Jun 2016 13:06
Thank you Lynne for your kind comment on Shared Dreams :)
Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)
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