In a haze of fear
The end is near
This is my last year
Soon i shall go my dear..
You'll miss me i hope
But i know you will cope
Please do not mope
As i look for the rope..
I could swallow tablets in bed
A bullet to my head
Or leave blood gush from my wrists instead
Don't you worry, i'll do it before we're wed..
A tear just fell from my eye
I just can't live this lie
It's just my time to die
goodbye my prince, goodbye.
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Sun 27th Mar 2011 02:32
In a breath
We were born to die
The initial wonder
And the opening cry
Every foundation
A little white lie
Living too pure
To say goodbye
And as we go on
year after year
Haggling a price
That's still too dear
While every fall
Inflates our fear
Praying for the end
To be finally near
Day follows day
In one languid mope
Peddlers peddle peddling
Infinities of false hope
And love barely fetches
The price of old rope
As minds scar deeply
In an effort to cope
I wake on the morning
That I will be wed
Hot in my arms
My head against her head
A vision of beauty
In a sheet stained bed
We could get up
But sleep on instead
thank you chris xx der was definatly anguish!
a sad rendition but so simply put,I can feel the anguish in this poem,well done xx
ian dts no bother wit using them lyrics lol keep writing them beautiful songs...stefan thank you so much sometimes i might be too honest and thats how i get hurt but ive never changed being honest because of nasty people its therre problem how they use my honest against me not mine xxx
<Deleted User> (6895)
Wed 9th Mar 2011 20:19
hello again Melanie-I love very much the skill you have in using just simple words to make such a beautiful (although sad) poem.Thank you.x do you mind if this old duffer says I have never before seen the honesty I see in your eyes.Definitely the windows to a lovely Soul I bet!x oh to be 75 again-lol!
<Deleted User> (8951)
Wed 9th Mar 2011 16:12
Hi melanie
I like this poem... opening lines, In a haze of fear,The end is near...
Might have to lend them for a song
Peace....
aw lol! thanks hun xx it wasn't light hearted at the time though but a ok now..xx
Perhaps I should have taken a leaf out of this book before I got wed? It might have saved me an agonising slow death.
Only joking of course - I wouldn't be without the ensuing prodigy.
A nice light hearted piece Melanie - I hope!
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melanie coady
Tue 29th Mar 2011 13:16
wow rebel thank you so much xxx u rock huni!