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Melanie Coady

My Flower

Sunday 13th March 2011 12:10 pm (first posted Tuesday 8th March 2011 3:42 pm)

My body is the petals, that eventually fall away,

My life is the long stem, that soaks up everything,

My thoughts are the thorns, heavanly and hellish,

You are my root, that holds me in place.

Comments

Tue 6th Sep 2011 22:44

thank you 4 ur sweet comments frederick xx

Thu 12th May 2011 13:27

Very oriental in its poetic appeal and filled with meaning within each line.

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Mon 14th Mar 2011 21:06

Excellent Beautiful

Wed 9th Mar 2011 12:39

thank ye all for even taking the time to read my poems it's the boost i need to keep scribbling lol

Wed 9th Mar 2011 12:37

simple and elegant, great thought awareness and clear theme.

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Wed 9th Mar 2011 10:02

I wrote My Flower of Hope like this two years ago in Scotland.

Wed 9th Mar 2011 09:23

thanks huni x

Wed 9th Mar 2011 08:13

excellent last line here, Melanie in particular but this is a lovely short piece.. x

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