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John Coopey

Fri 3rd Feb 2012 22:10

Wotcha Dave. Glad you liked "Serendipity and Happenstance".

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John Coopey

Thu 26th Jan 2012 22:28

Glad you liked My Least Favourite Things, Dave.

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steve mellor

Thu 26th Jan 2012 17:13

Yes indeed the original is nearly twice as long, but in Hiawatha's day you had to walk everywhere, whereas I was able to utilise the car and the aeroplane.
If I can clear my brain though, I may well try a Part 2 in the future

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 26th Jan 2012 11:47

Hello Dave. Many thanks for reading Ode to Pain.

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Wed 25th Jan 2012 22:21


I am not sure where I am going to go next..as long as it is warm and the light lasts more than four hours lol thanks for commenting Dave

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 23rd Jan 2012 21:19


Dave,
Nice to have spoken to you the other night. Thanks for the comment on Night Battle

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Mike Hilton

Mon 23rd Jan 2012 19:51

Thanks Dave for your comments and encouragement for the Quarry Man.I was a bit worried how it would work. I will certainly put the Golden Vision on cos I like that myself. It brings back happy memories. I've got a few other football/sport related ones to put on when i get round to it.
I really enjoyed The Tudor the other night, great energy and friendly scene. I was telling everyone at the Middleton WOL last night about it.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 16th Jan 2012 03:09

A word of thanks for your comments, past and
current.
I trust you will continue to make the most of
retirement!

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Shirley Smothers

Sat 14th Jan 2012 17:58

Hello Dave. Thank you so much for your kind comments on my poem "Starved to Death, for Jovonie"
The sad truth is this four year old child died of starvation on Christmas day. Even sadder there are probably a million more like this.
Thanks again,

Shirley

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John Coopey

Tue 10th Jan 2012 19:42

Hello Dave. Thanks for your thoughts on 1962 and Walford - a bit differnt from each other in tone. My memory of the Missile Crisis was that the world out there suddenly mattered to me in a life-and-death way. Walford is my usual nonsense!

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Mon 9th Jan 2012 08:38


Yes there is a story behind the write Dave and I have just given it a major edit after waking with inspiration? (hmm) lol Cheers for you comment.

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Lynn Dye

Mon 2nd Jan 2012 13:09

Thank you Dave for your kind comments on my latest. :)

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Harry O'Neill

Thu 29th Dec 2011 00:08


Thanks, Dave, for your comment on `Betty...`

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Rachel Bond

Fri 23rd Dec 2011 01:40

thanks dave, yes fragility and specialness of having hope and happenstance that hasnt happened yet x

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Francine

Tue 13th Dec 2011 06:53

Hi Dave,
Thank you so much for your lovely and interesting critique on
'The Berry Bridge' - I appreciate it : )

p.s. I did look up Curate's Egg - LOL - so now I know!

And... I couldn't find the photos of your trip...?

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Noetic-fret!

Fri 9th Dec 2011 22:33

Hey dave, thank you for commenting on my work. it means a lot as i have been fragile of late.

stay well and keep posting your work.

best wishes

mike

x

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Francine

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 16:40

Hi Dave,
Thank you so much for your comments! I was just telling a friend what I hoped would come through with 'Broken Mirrors'... I wrote it with two completely different ideas in mind - and you picked up on that : )

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Wed 30th Nov 2011 13:04

Thanks Dave for the comment on my latest offering..I will think about performing this sometime..also I have twiddled with it to try to make the write a little more understandable. :o)

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Dave Carr

Tue 29th Nov 2011 21:41

Dave,
Thanks for comment on Man Flu.
Dave

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Martin Peacock

Mon 28th Nov 2011 13:13

Hi Dave
thanks for the great comments. Just read 'Only Fond' etc and it's great; it speaks for me too. Hope to read more soon but for now, back to waiting for Her to write to me again.

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Philipos

Sun 27th Nov 2011 14:31

Hi Dave, 'Sidings' haven't quite got round to importing piccys yet - perhaps set myself a new challenge for 2012. Thanks for the comments. Cheers.

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Andy N

Tue 22nd Nov 2011 11:18

Hi Dave - cheers for the comment over Now and then.. It's one of those mood pieces I guess that kinda wrote it.... Hope you r k - speak soon.. A

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Harry O'Neill

Fri 18th Nov 2011 20:31


Thanks for your comment on Bon Voyage, Dave

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Elaine Booth

Thu 17th Nov 2011 23:55

Dave, thanks for the comment - skewiff - love that word but thought it a bit of Wiganese. How wrong am I! XX

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Thu 17th Nov 2011 20:29

Thanks for commenting on In Hope of Wonder.. I was trying to set the scene, the mood with the first half..it is meant to be disjointed and I used the short lines for that purpose..As when you are looking at something..seeing without any real focus and thoughts flit through your mind?..no?..perhaps its just me Ha!!

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Deborah Jordan Bailey

Tue 8th Nov 2011 13:01

thanks Dave, no, it's the right one.. it's all in the lyrics.. :) thanks again, Debz x

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Terry White

Sun 6th Nov 2011 21:38

Hey Dave, thanks for reading and commenting.

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steve mellor

Tue 1st Nov 2011 10:33

Hi Dave - many thanks for the time taken to comment
'A' Factor - You pretty much hit the nail on the head.
I have wondered, for a while, how easy it would be to stray into the mindset that prevailed in Nazi Germany, and how many people at that time seemed to accept what we now see as abhorrent acts being perpetrated.
The fact that Ann was Dutch (with all that the Dutch had to suffer in the war) and that she was wheelchair-bound, would have made her a prime target for the camps (and she couldn't have tap-danced to extend her life) brings the possibilities too close to home.

I've also wondered how much of a detrimental influence The 'X' Factor has. Millions of people slavering over people who really shouldn't be on the stage, never mind a major TV channel. How simple for the audience to encourage the acts to become more and more outlandish.

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John Coopey

Mon 31st Oct 2011 19:36

Hello Dave. Thanks for commenting on "The Ballad of The Boy and The Man". I saw Mackay play a few times when I was a lad - mostly when Spurs visited Forest. He has the reputation now as the Hard Man of that midfield, the foil for Blanchflower. But I think this vastly underestimates his footballing skills. He was much more complete than just a Hard Man.
I only saw the highlights of the Spurs/QPR game and Parker certainly looks a "steal" (along with van der Vaart).

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Sun 23rd Oct 2011 20:36

'Only Fond'! I love it. Thinking Back! especially last verse, funny and enjoyed reading it!xx

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steve mellor

Tue 18th Oct 2011 21:47

Hi Dave
I finally took the plunge back in. The well had been very dry for a good while. When I finally decided to get back on WOL there were a lot of tech problems, now all sorted.
You know how grateful I am for your encouraging 'comment'.
Didn't I read that you're on holiday this week? If so, have a good time.
Where to go (that's good) other than Tudor? It would be nice to meet up
Steve

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Elaine Booth

Wed 12th Oct 2011 23:01

Dave, many thanks for the comment & glad it hit the spot! X

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John Coopey

Fri 23rd Sep 2011 22:00

Dave - I owe you an apology.
I recently posted a blog entitled Poetry Slam which was based on an idea I had in my head. I knew I'd got the idea from somewhere but couldn't remember where - a film, a book?
I've just discovered it was from your discussion thread A Slam with a Difference.
My poem is virtually plagiarism (although I didn't know it) and I apologise.

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Elaine Booth

Thu 22nd Sep 2011 00:00

Dave, thanks for commenting on my latest - glad you liked it. It is indeed praise from one who knows those Torridon peaks! Never doen the horns - too rocky for me! XXX

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Chris Co

Wed 21st Sep 2011 18:09

Thx again for the feedback Dave.

I left a waffle on the poem- and sent you a rather long facebook message- lol.

My Best

Chris

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Philipos

Tue 20th Sep 2011 15:05

Hi Dave,(Necropolis)thanks for commenting. Yes the monks are very much still there and many improvements made to the old Anglican church buildings which they took over (perhaps I should write another stanza to include that aspect).

The estate is looking so much better than you will recall from ten years past but there is a long way to go and the actual owner of the site was involved in quite a lot of contoversy which appeared in the papers.

One can't help thinking back to when the site was first opened and how magnificent it might have looked with an abundance of gardeners in attendance etc.

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Mick Waring

Sun 18th Sep 2011 09:44

..hello Dave..yes it's a large photo, the queue extends further to the right, not sure what they're waiting for...

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Lynn Dye

Fri 16th Sep 2011 21:00

Hi Dave, thank you for kind comments on Teardrops in my Coffee. Fortunately not autobiographical at all, thanks for asking. x

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Philipos

Tue 6th Sep 2011 20:53

Hi Dave, (John Doe) so many of these characters around and some actually began life with promising upbringings. Who knows where the decline began? Thanks for commenting.

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Isobel

Tue 6th Sep 2011 20:45

Ha - do you dare me to post Chlamydia? That should grab attention. I should do it before they kill Gadaffi - if they haven't already done so - I'm a bit behind on the news...

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John Coopey

Mon 5th Sep 2011 12:07

Thanks Dave. I suspect the reference to Our Gert in A Wonderful Opportunity gave its authorship away!
The real vintage though is Bert Williams's - worth checking out on You Tube.
Curiously he blacked up as a Minstrel despite the fact that he was, himself, black!

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Mon 5th Sep 2011 11:38


hi Dave.

Thanks for the comment on my Chanel poem..some days are made for feeling good inside..

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Lisa Milligan

Mon 29th Aug 2011 22:03

Hi Dave - thanks for reading and commenting on "Fences". I'm so glad you picked up on the awkwardness I was trying to portray with the structure. Much appreciated!

Lisa

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winston plowes

Mon 29th Aug 2011 12:55

Hi Dave, re 'gap effects', you may also ask "Why on earth.....?" but thats just the way it is. Win x

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Mon 29th Aug 2011 00:57

So pleased my write made you feel as if you want to visit Dave..the place was very atmospheric..but I did not enjoy it as much as Lisbon..now there is another place poem I have to write lol..catch you soon Dave.. :)

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Donna Marie Beck

Thu 25th Aug 2011 20:21

Hey Dave,
i like your opinion on Explorer, it helps to know how a poem comes across because sometimes we put parts of ourselves in them that we're not fully aware of, so thankyou.

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John Coopey

Tue 23rd Aug 2011 10:15

Glad you liked New Yorkers, Dave. I get a lot of my knowledge of history from the works of Bernard Cornwell. I'd just finished reading The Fort, about the defence of Majabigwaduce, which prompted me to do the poem.

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Lisa Milligan

Fri 19th Aug 2011 20:59

Thank you Dave, for your comments on "The Patient". Your comments are more than any writer can ask for. It's such an accomplishment when you can strike a chord with someone. I remember last year you left a heartfelt comment on "My Father's Arm". "Quotations" and "Sugar Spice and Everything Nice" are similar in a way. Let me know what you think if you feel like reading them. Please don't feel obligated though.

I, however, will be sure to take a look at your work and return the consideration. Thanks again - it's as if you "felt" what I wrote about vs. just reading it. Very much appreciated.

Lisa

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Elaine Booth

Wed 17th Aug 2011 17:40

Thanks for your comments, Dave on Mem & Reflect. Glad I didn't disappoint after all!!! X

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Tue 16th Aug 2011 21:57

Thanks for commenting on For My Parents, I've made a fuller "reply" on my blog ;) xXx

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