Thank you Avishek. I appreciated your comments. I am just reading some of your work. ?
Taylor

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thank you for the comments n the courtship poems once again you are the best of all the things in my day..

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and how lucky you are Taylor that Foxy drops by. No doubt you have his meals ready!






Rose ?

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thanks for the kind comments on 'and now the weather' Martin delayed (once again) due to a Wi-Fi free holiday. Glad you liked it :-)
Ian

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Since you asked, in my humble opinion, I think the 3 best poems you have submitted to the site are these ones, in descending order:

1. "The demons that only I knew"

2. "Who are the real Monsters?"

3. "Friends of many faces"



Of course others on here may feel differently, these are the three pieces that I read over the most because of their interest, their powerful words, and their interesting topics. The first one I put I think so because it packs so much in such short lines, and I still think it is one of the best ones I've read in a while. The second poem I put because I've yet to read a poem like it anywhere. The care you put shows. The third poem is on there because the way the repetitive usage of the word 'friend' is applied adds a unique rhythm unlike any other that you've done so far. Hope this advice helps in some way, have a good one Hayley, and keep up the great poems.?

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I need some assistance. I'm considering putting a poem as an entry to a big competition due date in August.

What poem/poems do you think are my strongest or most powerful and are worthy of potentially winning a brilliant prize maybe?

I need help to narrow it down and I'm very overloaded with options?

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BIGGGG welcome guy. Both you and your razor fucking sharp poetry-gadfuckingzooks!



Rose ?

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'To the right of the Hyphen' is straight to the point and leaves the reader with much food for thought. I'm sure that any date that is written for an individual they would hope to leave a lasting legacy.
Thank you for your very kind words on 'The Place where only Dead men sleep' and as you try out poetry I hope you give us all some more. DD

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Hi DK - thanks for the comment on my WOL page.
No, not a dead end street - although in real life, it IS
"one-way" - as is life itself! ?
MC

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Thank you, Nigel; I will be glad to! Christine's daughter has asked me to say a few words & read out one of Christine's poems at the funeral - so I'd appreciate prayer for that please, at 11 am on Tuesday!
ps: I just love our Write Out Loud group!!! Love, Dorinda x

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Nice to meet you Hazel!

Thank you for reading my poems - Birds and Silently Sad.

I look forward to reading my way through your writings.

Jane?

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Thanks for comment on profile. 'Why are you poking that chicken?'
She is a fiesty girl just would not sit for her profile pick.
Have a great day.
?
Taylor

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Thank you for your comments on Ripped Away Martin always appreciated. ?
Taylor

Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)

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The last stanza on your poem 'Self Love' is excellent, whole thing is an enjoyable read.?

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I have had my head examined.
all tests proved positive for wit

it was funny
until i got the bill.

?

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why are you poking that chicken?
she's making breakfast!
?

Comment is about Taylor Crowshaw (poet profile)

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what street do you live on.
i hope it's not a dead end.
?

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Thank you Taylor for the lovely comment on "Silently Sad".

Much appreciated! Jane?

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Thank you for the lovely comment on "Silently Sad".

Jane?

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Thank you for commenting on "Silently Sad".

Jane?

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Thank you Martin for the wonderful comment on "Silently Sad".

Jane?

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Looking forward to it.

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When you go Dorinda please pass on all our respects from our poetry group - - thanks

Mark Sheeky

One of the pictures on display at the Art Gallery
is g922a.jpg

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Thank you Hugh for the generous comment you made on "Silently Sad"

Jane?

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Nice to meet you Fred. Thank for the lovely comment you wrote on "Wedding Bells". It is appreciated.

Your sample poetry is very enticing. I look forward to reading my way through your other poems.

Thank you, Jane?

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Hi Martin, thank you for your comment on "My Strawberry Milkshake" (:

Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)

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Thank you for commenting on my poem Mortality Hugh. Appreciated..?
Taylor

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Hi Martin, thanks for stopping by to read The Fox.......appreciated your comments.
Taylor ?

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Jim Thank you for liking my poem Sunday morning time AmC

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Nice to meet you Avishek. Thank you for reading my poem "Wedding Bells". I'm glad you liked it!

Jane?

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Keith,

Thank you for your sincere comments. They are always encouraging.?

Jane

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Hi Cynthia,
Thank you for your comments..appreciate you stopping by. ?
Taylor

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Nice to meet you Hugh!

Thank you for the lovely comment on "Wedding Bells".

Jane?

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Hi Martin, I know what you mean. I was an avid Dickens fan as a child.....
Thank you for your comment.
Taylot

Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)

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Always good stuff coming from your direction, I've enjoyed every piece you put forth.?

Comment is about Rachel Mhlongo (poet profile)

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Thank you Hayley for all the 'likes'. I'm glad you like my paper collages.?

Comment is about HayzTee (poet profile)

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Nice to meet you Kenny! Thank you for commenting on "What a Shame". Your comment is appreciated.?

It appears that you are a young man full of emotion and artistic flair. Use it! Write, paint, draw and tattoo. By expressing yourself in a variety of ways you will, in time, find your path in life. Life is constantly changing and we must flow with its rhythm!

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Hi Don. Thanks for commenting on "What a Shame". I know it's not FUN BUS material but thanks for reading.

BTW...loved that last FUN BUS post!

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Thank you for commenting on "What a Shame". It's appreciated!?

Comment is about Taylor Crowshaw (poet profile)

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Hey Taylor,

Another good day I hope? To answer your question, I have put poems on this blog that have yet to be published in any book (i.e. Cressida), but I am planning to use them as such. According to the US Copyright Office, my writings are not copyrighted until filed with them. So, when I do put these unpublished poems in a published book, I will acknowledge it probably both in the beginning of the book and the end of it. So yes, I would acknowledge it, and just keep a tab of the ones you have written on here so you know exactly which ones fit the bill.


Hope all is well on your side of the planet! Let me know if you have any other questions or need advice, always happy to oblige.

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Your samples are eclectic and evoke amazing imagery.?

Comment is about jane wilcock (poet profile)

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Hi John
astir in SW Wales
this side of the Atlantic
travels on hold . . .

Comment is about John E Marks (poet profile)

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what is it you took? Umbrage?

Comment is about Mike Took (poet profile)

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are you an Elder? so it seems. In more ways than one.

thanks for visiting my site. it is a site for sore eyes.

my goal is to inflict my poetry on as many people
as possible.

I like your idea about holding a sign up that says "Poet".
otherwise, for me, they would not know.
I will substitute the Poet sign for the one I had been using... "Give me your money...I will spend on drugs and alcohol."

wink!

Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)

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Hi Mayah
Thanks for liking it will be the death of you. love your sample poem. Very clever
Martin

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Much obliged.?

Comment is about Stuart Buck (poet profile)

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I like the poem "Nexus" from your book, it's very good when read aloud. A lot of imagery, and again, the emotion is felt all the way through.


And thanks much for all the kind words.

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Hello! I have the details for Christine Turner's funeral. I know many of you will not know her, or not know her well, but it would be remiss of me not to give you the info if needed! So....let me know, please, if you'd like to attend! Thanks so much - love, Dorinda x

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Don, re 'Adjectives' you have it there sir.
Ambiguity is, as Bart Simpson said "Your dammed if you do and you're dammed if you don't"
Don it's the bend and reach that defines the purpose.
Or is it?
lol
Tommy

Comment is about Don Matthews (poet profile)

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Thanks for the likes Jon, some nice pieces you have yourself collected.?

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