Thank you for reading Her Heart Hazel. ?

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Thank you for reading Her Heart Fred. ?

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Thank you for your continued support Avishek..

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Thank you Don your support is invaluable..still puzzling about Switzerland..?

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Thank you for that encouragement, Nicola! - D x

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Many thanks for your comment on my 'language of trees' poem

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Hi Taylor,
Thank you for your kind comment,
Lan ?

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Thank you for reading One Night Jennifer

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Thank you for your feedback on 'The language of Trees' yes indeedy! Trees are wise!

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Thank you so much for positive feedback on 'The language of trees '
Its so encouraging to get feedback on posts (as a newbie on here)

x

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Your second sample is an amazing read with words weighted and tethered by heavy emotion. Very well done.?

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Thank you for your kindness, Taylor.

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Thanks Becky. It is a complex relationship mother and daughter. I have 7 daughters it is hard to get it right. I miss my mum every day even tho at times we could clash strong personalities..xx

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Hey d. Knape, thanks for your lovely comments on The Spaces Between. I wrote it after many days of visiting my Dad in ICU so it is an important part to me. Events like that make one realise we have very little control. I really appreciate your feedback.

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I'm glad you like my collages. I look forward to reading through your other poems. Thanks, Jane?

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I hope those insects aren't too bothersome. M.C. ?

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Thank you Andrew appreciate your comments..it means a lot. ?

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Thank you Big Sal. Such a shame that this continues to go on.

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Thanks for your unending support Hugh, I've come to look for your name and gentle humour.

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Hi Cynthia

Thanks for your recent positive comment on my poem.

In answer to your question - yes the writing course starts in 3 weeks, excited!

Cheers

DJB

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Thank you for your continued support Jon it is very much appreciated..?

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I always say mothers are gods in the eyes of their children, and when the day is done, sometimes our words are the ichor that's left running from a golden leaf onto an imprint of our memory. Hope you don't get tired of me saying so - but your stuff is a helluva read!

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Thank you for commenting on Man is the Beast Peter..appreciated. Looking forward to getting to know your work..?

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Thanks for your comments on Jazz Martin, I'm a huge fan of jazz and used to play in a jazz band through my teens and early twenties. This particular piece was about a performance I saw by a group at our local conservatorium. The group was young but inspired, and the singer captivating. A moment that warranted capturing. ?

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Thank you for commenting M.C. I enjoyed reading your poem...Taylor x

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You have some good pieces added so far. If you're looking for some pointers, the best I can say at this point is to never be afraid to add more adjectives into the mix. Sometimes all it takes is the right one. Welcome to Write Out Loud though and either way, you'll find your footing.

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Yes, well I do love a challenge!!!!?LOL

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Thanks for your comment on Jazz Becky. Look forward to dicovering more of your work.

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I appreciate your comment on "Alive"; please know I did not mean to make you cry!?

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Thank you for commenting on "A Fly". I'm so glad I inspired you to write your own Fly poem!?

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Thank you for commenting on "A Fly" ?

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Thanks Hugh great to get feedback..?

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Thank you Hazel..I think I might just wear a skirt..?

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Thank you for commenting on The Book, Ray.

I had very similar thoughts myself.
The TV screen is a distraction.
It does not draw me in the way a book does. The concentration needed to read, I believe is the secret to its ability to soothe and calm the inner self.
Excuse the rant.

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Hi Hugh, thank you for reading The Book..those pesky words... amazing to be transported by a good book or as you rightly said a good poem.
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Stay strong and feel better.?

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Thanks Don..glad you like The Book ?

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hoof leftovers...you're too funny! ???

Have a Nice Day!

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Thank you Hugh...love your quips..?

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why why do you capitalize Hazel
but not ettridge
is it a secret code
are you ashamed of your last name
IS it your REAL last name
and who is that clown?
is that the real
Hazel Ettridge
holding a banana?


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Thank you for reading An Acorn's Story Avishek. ?

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Thank you for liking An Acorn's Story..much appreciated. ?

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Thank you for reading Nan's Lippy Hazel..?

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Dorinda, that's wonderful! xxx

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Thank you x

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Hi John
Mark Sheeky Poem: think I'm supposed to send it to you:

Mark Sheeky Painting
G473a


She’s cold.
She’s almost drowned out the sun with
her tears; they did not stop for days:
see that sun almost falling from the sky!

The black menace in the corner is
a frightening reminder of her
desperate journey.
The sea was cold.

Yet…

It is still the same sun
and it hasn’t fallen from the sky.

And she sees the flowers
and she loves their vibrancy.

They are from the earth and she
is on that same earth, and
not on the leaky boat now.


She takes the mug of tea
from the kind lady.

She is safe.

Part of her aches for happier
yesterdays.

Her youthful, aged heart sighs and
begins its crippled recovery
towards a slowly blossoming
new hope….


Dorinda x

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Hi Martin, thank you for your lovely comments..?

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thank you for your feedback on "Corner Man".
and hey...it's summertime, you can take off your
jacket.
?

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thanks for your comment on "Corner Man".
i am so glad you are still holding up that blue sign.
you and the corner man have that in common.
i think we are all afraid we will end up on the corner
with no sign and no future.

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