hey you are good. Enjoyed all your poems and you have great musical taste. Tc Tim

Comment is about Richard Brooks (poet profile)

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I'm sure we need to hear and read more of your work. You have a real energy when you perform your pieces. Every feeling conveyed. Till the next time... Daniel.

Comment is about Shelley Ann Dwornik (poet profile)

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Thanks for your comment, I enjoyed your poems - I once rather sadly dated someone with a sierra cosworth but it didn't end up the same way, as he had a thing about going sideways around round-a-bouts....

Comment is about ian leslie (poet profile)

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Thank you for your visit.

Although I am curious as to why you think I should rhyme more.

David

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

Original item by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

I am tempted to just ask why?

Sometimes I use rhyme, sometimes not - it all depends on the Muse.

Comment is about David Agnew (poet profile)

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Hi Alvin
Welcome to Write Out Loud - why not put your event on the gig guide and if you send me some copy and a photo/logo to paul@writeoutloud.net I'll make it a news item

Comment is about Alvin Culzac (poet profile)

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Hello, Tomas

Thank you for the latest comments.
It happened that I was living in both systems. In addition, I see not much difference except maybe the working class divided more in a Capitalism versa Communism. Here we do have the Freedom of speech and have your own things like home., car, place to live but the prices you pay having all those goods are tremendous. It is good for those who have good paying jobs. Those who have less paying jobs, then these people live like in a Communism system. I tell you that Communism had good sites too. Like the Education for all was mandatory. Here it is slightly different. If you have money then you do not need to have University to be in Politics. In Communism system one had to be highly educated to be an Economist- this is just an example...Some people left the country and still do, I mean the Communist. Both sites have good trades and as not so good. I need to close here as my comment can go forever, Will come back to read your latest poem...Thank you.

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

Original item by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

"Instant Soup" is a great little poem.

Comment is about Phil Golding (poet profile)

Original item by Phil Golding

love your poetry Gaia;
there's something magical about it.

alan holdsworth

Comment is about Gaia Holmes (poet profile)

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i really enjoyed 'new location'.

Comment is about Gemma Lees (poet profile)

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Sorry - also wanted to share a 'hurley' poem which no-one over here (in Australia) understands... it's on my site too.

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

Original item by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Thanks for your comments on my site.
I've just posted a reply on there for you...
Frances

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

Original item by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Youve got a good grasp of language... you should try rhyme a bit more...

Comment is about David Agnew (poet profile)

Original item by David Agnew

I love your poetry, but may I suggest varying the rhyming word ending?

Comment is about Dr T. Ashok Chakravarthy, Litt.D (poet profile)

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Daniel

I am very impressed with your poems. All writes are wonderful! Keep penning on your talent shines! I need to tell you that I like the video you have done on your You Tube'

Great Job!
Zuzanna

Comment is about Daniel Hooks (poet profile)

Original item by Daniel Hooks

Hello Daniel,

Thank you my friend in poetry for the great comment on my "Failed Dreams"

Appreciated,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Daniel Hooks (poet profile)

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Dear Alison

Thank you for commenting on my latest write, and the name comment!

I found your writing excellent! All the samples you have are presenting depth of your thinking and show your creative abilities. You are great Poetess. Keep up the great work!

Warm Regards,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Alison Mary Dunn (poet profile)

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"in the dim light of a sleepy sun" I'm traveling with you David, traveling with you.......!
thanks for leaving an comment 2.
Ally

Comment is about David Franks: Walkabouts Verse (poet profile)

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I enjoyed your two poems.I like the line about jumping off the bridges.

Also I really enjoy the sentiment of 'letting go' very clever the way you use the painted nails / paint pots idea to show the progression and ageing and the growing up.

the nails that wave goodbye, with the armour of the red gloss....but would they one day come back with tales to tell...................is there ever a true goodbye.?

great work
Look forward to more.

Comment is about Helen Shay (poet profile)

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Frank your poems are quite out there. I checked out your site. I'm so impressed by your very bold creations. Shadows is powerful. I agree with Darren's comments, the ending is pretty brilliant.
thanks a lot for sharing.

Ally

Comment is about Frank Burton (poet profile)

Original item by Frank Burton

You have the life of the Artic hare well explained here.

Comment is about christine bousfield (poet profile)

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I loved the imagery in the poem of the dead wasps in the windscreen and the pheasents fluttering in the breeze

Comment is about Gaia Holmes (poet profile)

Original item by Gaia Holmes

Hi, thanks for the kind words!

I really like Big Eyes Blinking Blankly, it's incredibly powerful.

Gem :)

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

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hey, clarissa. Sorry I'm so late in replying... I'm getting lost around here! Anyways.. thanks.. it's nice to be different!

Comment is about Dai Miles (poet profile)

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Thanks, Tomas - that introductory poem/experience was really the catalyst for my whole collection; and I've just enjoyed a visit to your profile.

Comment is about David Franks: Walkabouts Verse (poet profile)

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Thanks for your visit, Tomas, and, in turn, I do like your meaningful traditional metre-and-rhyme; also great to see verses in Irish as I love the world being multicultural.

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

Original item by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Loved your "Bobbing and Peering" poem, a great commentary on the scene is given. My poem "For Sale: A Soul and a Body, Whole" is on a similar vein.

Comment is about Malpoet (poet profile)

Original item by Malpoet

Checking out your site to read more of your work, love your imagery... you should try rhyme a little, no?

Comment is about Jude Fowler (poet profile)

Original item by Jude Fowler

Poems to motivate cats? Should make interesting reading...

Comment is about Rachel Pantechnicon (poet profile)

Original item by Rachel Pantechnicon

I dont know how I came across your work before, but I did, and on finding you a second time, your work is all the more refreshing!!!

Comment is about Elvis McGonagall (poet profile)

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Eerie poem, reminds me of a holocaust poem where a man reached into a pot of boining meat and grabbed some to eat it only to find out it was human flesh being boiled down after e in thpost mortems at one of the camps.... scary stuff.

I loved the message in the poem, no matter what anyone does to you, they cannot keep you silent. Should be a motto for all of us.

Comment is about Monica S. Kuebler (poet profile)

Original item by Monica S. Kuebler

I loved the Pen poem!!! Fantastic!!!

Comment is about David Franks: Walkabouts Verse (poet profile)

Original item by David Franks: Walkabouts Verse

Wow, the "Hearts Triumphant Cry" shows how divorce -(or wodowhood???) made you one happy lady!!!

Comment is about Valerie Cook (poet profile)

Original item by Valerie Cook

I loved the Grandma poem.

Comment is about Gemma Lees (poet profile)

Original item by Gemma Lees

So, do you love her or hate her in "Robots Built the Moon"? Its a complex piece displayed as being lighthearted: I really enjoyed it reguardless!!!

Comment is about Steve O'Connor (poet profile)

Original item by Steve O'Connor

hya tomas,
your stuff aint old fashioned its cool....diverse too.
the island is lovely..where did you stay?
shelley d

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

Original item by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Hi Mia

Here is that email as promised. Let me know how you get on.

Lainey McLean <journeyto2@googlemail.com


Phil

Comment is about Mia Darlone (poet profile)

Original item by Mia Darlone

Hi Phil your poems are interesting and varied, Thank you

Comment is about Phil Golding (poet profile)

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Hey honey,
Thanks for your reply - you are very welcome you have a truly beautiful way with words and such a light touch and intense flourish, keep at it sweet.
lots of love.
xxxx

Comment is about Richard Brooks (poet profile)

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Dave

Cheers for the comment. It's been a while since I've had absinthe, but next time the opportunity arises I'll give you a shout if you're up for it!

Steve

Comment is about London Writers Cafe (group profile)

Original item by London Writers Cafe

I loved Working Class Blues

there is so much talent in the north west.
we need to bring it all together one day for a big northern poetry extravaganza.

Comment is about Richard Brooks (poet profile)

Original item by Richard Brooks

Hi Mark,

I really liked ' I wish I was a fat man dancing', very fast and enjoyable to read. It sort of works it's way up to a frenzy towards the middle. Made me smile

thanks

Ally

Comment is about Mark Underwood (poet profile)

Original item by Mark Underwood

Hi Tomas,
thank you for your comment on my poem.

Your poem 'Big Eye Blinking Blankly' is very powerful and exposes us here in our luxurious existence.

I like the way you switched it around at the end where the table are turned and how we might feel in the face of starvation.

Extremely sad to read but so true

thanks for sharing

Ally

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

Original item by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

I think that hunting is a bad sport too,,, only the ladies look devine in those jodphurs. "So you like to kill foxes?" I ask one. She says yes... and Im not going to let a chicken killer stop me ketting into the scratcher with this fime mare!!!

Comment is about Seamus Kelly (poet profile)

Original item by Seamus Kelly

why like?!!! Love the poem. Was in the Isle of Man in 1999 and 2000 on holiers, lovely place, terrible rain, lovely sun, but the place ws expensive!!!

Comment is about Shelley Ann Dwornik (poet profile)

Original item by Shelley Ann Dwornik

"Making Hot Chololate" is a great peom: it tells a story and it rhymes. The only place it falls is where is uses the same words to make the rhymes each time, but is forgivable due to the beauty of the poem and the poems message of how you'll encourage your grandchildren to create as in write, and create as in dont be afraid to show emotion.

Thumbs up all round.

Comment is about Helen Shay (poet profile)

Original item by Helen Shay

I too am on Poem Hunter as is Anthony Sullivan a friend and fellow writer of mine. I loved your Ode to the Poet.. the words flo. very well though you dont use rhyme. I look forward to reading more of you in the coming months/

Comment is about Alison Mary Dunn (poet profile)

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HI, Richard

Thank you so much for the comment on my latest poem. I am looking forward to read more of your poetry. Like I said before you have a wonderful talent with words!!

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Richard Brooks (poet profile)

Original item by Richard Brooks

Thanks for reading & commenting on my poem
Paul

Comment is about Valerie Cook (poet profile)

Original item by Valerie Cook

Hi Dai, welcome to the poetry site. I enjoyed reading your poems, they are different.

Comment is about Dai Miles (poet profile)

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