Hi Jeff,
I liked your poem 'The Sea'. "Creating lives and taking lives". The power of the ocean is many things to us all and it's simply put in your choice of words.
thanks for sharing.
Ally

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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Hi Estelle

Powerful stuff and well written - I like it.

Seamus

Comment is about Estelle Zaire (poet profile)

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Picking out profiles at random because i'm new to this site. I'm a spiritualist medium and healer first, writer second.
It seems prophetic that yours is the third one in a row i picked out which were all your last entries on my Birthday. Maybe i'll see you in Liverpool soon.
Janet.

Comment is about Keith Lucy (poet profile)

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Hey, where did you go to my lovely?
There's so much truth in these poems.
I'm new to the site and scouring profiles. Incidentally, yours is the second one tonight i've dropped onto which were written on my Birthday.

Comment is about Julie Boyle (poet profile)

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tomas, your poetry is very potent, thanks for sharing i enjoyed reading you...caroline xx

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

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thanks for your comments again jeff, i'm keeping an eye out for new stuff from you. strength was quite a deep one, I must have been very intoxicated when I wrote that one because I didnt remember writing it untill someone was reading it on my laptop! all the best

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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Hello Estelle

Thank you for your lovely words and for taking the time to look at my stuff. Loved your work too - powerful stuff - and your picture is soooo much better and beautiful than mine!

Blessings

Spoz x

Comment is about Estelle Zaire (poet profile)

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Melon ball starter. Hmm!

Wkd blue as an aperitif.
Followed by 2 large scoops honeydew,
served up with lashings of squirty cream,
full length of a large, ripe, peeled banana.

p.s. i'll take a closer look at "Below the belt."

Comment is about Mia Darlone (poet profile)

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Hi Alison,
Oops, I pressed 'add comment' before making one. Thanks for your comments on - The shoe.
I enjoyed reading your blog, so went on to read your poems and loved -
All the lessons we’ve learned between slumber and light are the truths never making the pages of knowing.
I

Comment is about Alison Mary Dunn (poet profile)

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Now, this is proper poetry! I like your "voice".

Thank you again for reintroducing me to this great site.

Comment is about Alison Mary Dunn (poet profile)

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Dear Carol

I am extremely pleased with the latest news about your beautiful Baby Boy. That is a blessing and Gift for you. Big baby boy. I want to party on your behalf...Smiling real big...:)
Thank you for sharing your joy with me. I read this and my happiness and joy was with you.
CONGRATULATIONS AND BEST WISHEST!!

With all my love ...Zuzanna

Comment is about Carol Falaki (poet profile)

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Tomas

Thank you for reading and commenting on my latest poem “The Riders of the Storm”

With sincere appreciation,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

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Hi Mia, I'm new to this site and slowly but surely reading through various profiles. I think your samples are bloody hilarious. p.s. is it allowed to swear on this site?
Thanks for down to earth humour, much needed.
Janet.

Comment is about Mia Darlone (poet profile)

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Hello Mia me old china...gawd bless you for your keeness for Max's existence...may indeed squeeze another volume out of the old bugger yet but ten years as Max is taking its toll.. have rediscovered my first love of music again and can't do both in the limited time i have these days....meant to come and have a chat at the Northern but had to dash off to give people lifts (stair ones)....love your stuff...big thanks to your lovely chum who bought a book...hope to meet up at a future slam..let me know if you're gigging in Manchester....www.myspace.com/thehurtfultaunts if you fancy checking the other side of Max...
take care
Max/Johnny

Comment is about Mia Darlone (poet profile)

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Hi Estelle,
Thanks for your comment
Yours above has a deep and powerful meaning, spoken simply. Thanks

Comment is about Estelle Zaire (poet profile)

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Hi Estelle.

Welcome to WOL. Your comments came as a bit of a surprise. The thread that has developed between 'Tai' and me is unfortunate. He obviously has a passion for his work and considers any objective opinion as a criticism. His behaviour is typical of many artists who attempt to defend every comment that they make, instead of accepting that not everybody will have similar views on structure and content. I am not obsessed with just adjectives, as much as I do enjoy their company, I also enjoy other parts of language(s), including their phonetics.
In all this 'Tai' seems to forget that I actually enjoy his stuff to such an extent that I comment about it.
'Dazzo' is fine. I've been called a lot worse but I don't particular think that I get off on being a critic. Some people actually ask for my advice - so I give it to 'em.

Comment is about Estelle Zaire (poet profile)

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Hey there!

''a poet can write about a pebble and make a page of it''

Amen! Nice line!

Comment is about Graham Eccles (poet profile)

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Disco dad is on the floor!! - Great, lovely and reminds me of someone I know! :) Great stuff!

Comment is about Spoz (poet profile)

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Hello, Tomas

Thank you for your lovely comment! Yes, you had the right feelings within the lines in my poem. Life as it happens. Often takes toll on everyone and then we feel as a bent tree that would fall if not supported by others in this case family member, friends...Etc.

Warm Regards,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

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It is true... war is no-ones friend bar big business.

Comment is about Katie Sheila Haigh (poet profile)

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Going now to check the site...

Comment is about Rachel Fox (poet profile)

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"Daisychain Summer" is a great poem, showing the emotions of loving a free spirit... did I comment on that one before? No? It looks familiar somehow...

Comment is about Louise Fazackerley (poet profile)

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Its sad to hear he passed on...

Comment is about Jon Oxendale RIP (poet profile)

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It ios not too often you get a writer writing from the point of the paper that is being written on. A great read.

Comment is about Freda Davis (poet profile)

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Exhibition of paintings at the Langham Gallery, Lambs Conduit Street, London WC1 from 15th Feb 2010 from 1700hrs.

Comment is about vincent berquez (poet profile)

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Hello, Shelley

Thank you for the wonderful comment on the newest poem. Have a great week!

PS: Love your voice when you sing the song and recite the poems on you new page. You are very artistic!

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Shelley Ann Dwornik (poet profile)

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Hi Tomas, thanks for comment. I've never heard 2 Unlimiteds 'Faces' so will have to see if I can give it a listen! Spooky, hope you liked it anyway, cheers Jeff

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

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Thank you for your comment. I am all words and no structure! You, on the other hand, have that under serious control. I love Hound for Iraq.

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

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Dear Phil,

Thank you so much for your comment, which is, appreciated a lot!

With my best wishes your friend in Poetry.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Phil Golding (poet profile)

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Hello, Jeff

Thank you so much for your kind comments my friend in poetry. You have traveled to Lithuania. It must be a great memory from there. This part of the world is close to me as I have friends from there…‘Memory of Lithuania'...Smile

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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The wonderful world of performance poetry. It's certainly a different way of writing. I'm quite new to it but recorded some stuff over at myspace (link in the profile). I enjoyed reading through your work and I can certainly see how it would be rewarded when performed live.

Comment is about Daniel Hooks (poet profile)

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HI Paul, glad to have you with us all.
Nice poem!

Comment is about Brink (poet profile)

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As always your poetry is very entertaining

Comment is about Gordon Zola (poet profile)

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HI, Steve

Thank you for the lovely comment!

Appreciated, Zuzanna

Comment is about garside (poet profile)

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Oh steve

You charmer you...thank you for your lovely comments.

Mel
x

Comment is about Steve O'Connor (poet profile)

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Hi Tomas

thank you for your lovely comments. I think your poem 'shall another read my words' is so beautiful.
mel
x

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

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Hi Shelley
Thank you for your lovely comments. Love the poetry that you write.

Mel
x

Comment is about Shelley Ann Dwornik (poet profile)

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for sure, we will be poeting in the Novel Cafe on Lake Road in Ambleside from 730 on Thursday 8th May, everyone is welcome and again we will be in the Queen Cellar Bar on Sunday from 2ish til 5ish - there will be a poetry competition of sorts on the sunday which is open to all. Also, anyone is welcome to attend Poetic Justice at the Novel on the Thursday. Really hope you can make it. CAtch you there.

Comment is about Mark Underwood (poet profile)

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Hiya Mia, Okay, their looking at me funny here because I have a stupid grin on my face and it's your fault. The whimsical nature of your poems sounds more like something a lad would be writting about, perhaps even funnier because your not. Give us more!

Comment is about Mia Darlone (poet profile)

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Exceptional work. Smooth flowing imagery with emotion that doesn't overwhelm, delivered in a controlled manner.

Comment is about Gaia Holmes (poet profile)

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Gemma your an excellent poet. You are one of the greats and I never get tired of reading them so hurry up and get a book published of them so I can read them all the time

Comment is about Gemma Lees (poet profile)

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This poem is lovely it has such feeling well done!

Comment is about Isley (poet profile)

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Dominic who?!

'Bout time you turned up here!

Can you imagine?... There's people here who have never attended FREED UP!

Just thinking about that sort of thing scares me.

My Favourite Meals - Well, you know what I think of this.

Cheery-bye
Steve

Comment is about Dominic Berry (poet profile)

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Great poems why though people haven't commented and said as much I will never know perhaps I will start a trend!

Comment is about Katie Sheila Haigh (poet profile)

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Dear Carol

I am thinking of you and will keep you in my prayers. I am sure all will be fine my friend in poetry. Trust the Lord.

With my best wishes!
Zuzanna

Comment is about Carol Falaki (poet profile)

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Mia Darlone - is this an anagram of your name ? 'A random lie' possibly..?

Comment is about Mia Darlone (poet profile)

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Mirrored ceiling. Glad you enjoyed my latest offerings - I trust I shall see you in the audience of my play 'Below the Belt' in July?! (Will start some major plugging once venue confirmed). See you at FREED UP.

Comment is about Steve O'Connor (poet profile)

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Once again you've made a happy man very old. No - that's not right - you know what I mean don't you?
Mia - your poetry is laugh out loud funny. When are we going to hear it performed at Wigan? Well, anywhere for that matter.
More from Mia. Brilliant.

Comment is about Mia Darlone (poet profile)

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Hiya Mia

In work - skiving - and decided to read your new poems...

So glad I did. You've really cheered me up... You've made an old man very happy... Erm... Can we agree that I like your poems in a manner that doesn't make me sound like a perv?

Great. Porn.

F(ine) art's sub-title (Done as a posh bird) made me laugh out loud. And The liver is evil and must be punished reads well off the page, though it'd be worthwhile thinking about putting some audio samples of your work up here - you perform it well too. Both of your poems cover an important area of poetry rarely addressed. Namely - getting pissed; being sick; bad sex and farting. Well done! I'd like to see Larkin write stuff like that - given that he's dead.

And just WHAT are you looking up at in that new photo of yours?!

No. Wait. Don't answer that.

Steve

Comment is about Mia Darlone (poet profile)

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Hello, Richard

Thank you for the comment you placed on my poem...Appreciated.

Kind Regards,
.Zuzanna

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