Thank you so much dear Lynn for commenting on "In a Wood". With love and warmest wishes, Larisa
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Thank you dear Shirley for commenting on "In a Wood". Much appreciated. With warmest wishes, Larisa
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Hi, John! Thank you very much for commenting on "In a Wood". Much appreciated. With warmest wishes, Larisa
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Wed 21st Sep 2011 12:54
go on then! don,t just stand/sit there-
get a poem on!
haha!
cya later Mater.
her'n'him.xx
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Hi Tom, would love that but thats the day my duaghter arrives on half term hols! Doh. H
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Hi Tom, missed meeting up, must get over to Bolton again soon, and yes you have done it again, she was a nurse (You were the only one to tune into that) H
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Thanks Greg for your insightful comment on 'Scholars'. It's hot off the press so I'm still tinkering with it. I had thought of putting an epigraph from Wittgenstein at the top of it: 'Die Welt zerfallt in Tatsachen' - 'The world is divided up into facts' - but thought that might be taking a sledgehammer to crack a nut! I must say the Victorian classroom wasn't much different from mine in the 1950s!
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Wed 21st Sep 2011 08:29
Good morning John,.,,thanks for that reassurance on Day's End! Yaaay!! :)
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Hi Isobel, thank you for kind comments on Crimson Lipstick, much appreciated. xx
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Thanks for comments on Crimson Lipstick, John. Have answered more on the blog itself.
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Hello Shirley
Thanks for commenting on my two poems "Fix" and "I Dreamt You Were Little Again".
There's a saying, "When they're young they break your arms and when they're older they break your heart". Kids!
I've done a few about my kids but be careful if you stumble across some of my more risque stuff.
On the audio front, I'm sure a predominantly British audience would love to hear your Southern tones. I know I would.
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Tue 20th Sep 2011 20:19
Aww Andy thanks so much for liking nothing of much worth lol looks daft when I write it like that..read it in Liverpool Monday night and it got a decent reception so all is well.. :)
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Tue 20th Sep 2011 20:15
Hiya Isobel :)
Nothing of much worth began with the bell jar and Plath, her realtionship with the men in her life etc but then I sorta Stellerised it ha ha ha...so glad you caught the mood though..xx :)
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Tue 20th Sep 2011 19:31
appreciate your reading 'Wild one' Marianne
thank you.
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Hi Andy, thanks for commenting on my "A Silly Poem About Hair". Ann Foxglove's poem "A Silly Housework Poem" inspired me to post my recent poem.
My latest poems have been dark and I needed to lighten the mood.
I do have a lot of nonsense/silly poems. I have to think hard about which ones to post. Some are cute others just plain weird.
Thanks
Shirley
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Hi John. Thanks for commenting on my poem "My Mother's Gentle Hands. I especially liked your poems, "I dreamt You Were Little Again" and "Fix".
I have left comments on these pages.
Thanks,
Shirley
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Hi John Glad you like the Scholars poem. It was inspired by a recent visit to Reading Museum. I had never heard the phrase 'ragged school' before and just wanted to get it into a poem by hook or crook. I must say that I also didn't see much difference between the Victorian classroom and those we had in the 50s in my own school!
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Philipos
Tue 20th Sep 2011 15:05
Hi Dave,(Necropolis)thanks for commenting. Yes the monks are very much still there and many improvements made to the old Anglican church buildings which they took over (perhaps I should write another stanza to include that aspect).
The estate is looking so much better than you will recall from ten years past but there is a long way to go and the actual owner of the site was involved in quite a lot of contoversy which appeared in the papers.
One can't help thinking back to when the site was first opened and how magnificent it might have looked with an abundance of gardeners in attendance etc.
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Many thanks for your comments on Hic Haec Hoc.
Was Latin something that only boys studied? I've never come across any woman who ever did. Where did they take you when we were studying it? Was it to feminist lifeskills class where you learned Manipulation, Emotional Blackmail, Credit Card Skills, Conversational Memory Recall etc. (They didn't do Map Reading, though, did they?).
I suspect I should stop digging!
Seriously, "hic" means "this", as does "haec" and "hoc" etc. HHHHHH are the nominative and accusative cases of the pronoun "this" in their masculine, feminine and neuter genders.
Any wiser?
In the next lesson we will study HHH in its genitive, dative and ablative cases.
When you've got this we will do it all again but in the plural.
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Thanks for your comment Elaine. Yes - it was a different one for me - just a reflection of a mood I was in. I've had a good read of your latest and enjoyed. I'm never good on commenting on nature poems though - they don't quite reach me in the same way.
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Mon 19th Sep 2011 16:24
Such a nice reply John...(I have just edited it lol) thanks for looking :)
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Thanks E for your comment on Gordon, always much appreciated and yep you're spot on. Bullies are made, not born - we both know that. It was a story that had to be told.
Aye, dunno wtf happened to your other comment!
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Thx for the comments and feedback on my last Tommy- v good of you to take the time.
I have two versions of the poem now :)
I think I'll keep my version for reading and yours for the page when subsequently handed out.
Thx
My Best
Chris
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Thx for the comment/feedback on my last one Ann- appreciated.
P.S
Good luck with the event!
My Best
Chris
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Thx for the comments/feedback on my last Laura. You understood my thinking behind the poem completely. Daft I know but I searched for a couple of hours just to find the right word for the title Haha. To get something that eluded enough without telling, to be understated without being totally obscure.
My Best
Chris
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Hello Shirley
I've just taken the time to read the samples on your Profile page.
I was very impressed, particularly with "My Mother's Gentle Hands". I posted one on a similar theme called "Fix" from the perspective of the parent rather than, as yours does, from the child.
Keep posting.
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Hello John. Thank you for your comments about my "A Silly Poem about Hair". I was inspired to post this after listening to "Silly Housework Poem" by Ann Foxglove.
Thanks
Shirley
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Mon 19th Sep 2011 10:01
Hi There. Welcome to Write Out Loud. Keep posting. Winston
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Hi There thanks for your constructive comments on the 2nd of these McCarra experiments - harm resistance. It is a running debate as to whether an origin statement should be included. I currently think it should but both ways (With or without) have advantages, Win x
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Thanks for your comments on A Breath of Fresh Air, Lynn. It was an old post but it seemed appropriate to run it again.
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Hi Ann. Your audio poem "Silly Housework Poem" inspired me to post my own silly poem "A Silly Poem about Hair."
Thanks for the inspiration.
Shirley
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Philipos
Sun 18th Sep 2011 16:37
Thanks for your comments on 'Townships' much appreciated.
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Hi again, Greg, thank you for lovely comments on Crimson Lipstick, appreciated as always.
Just been appreciating your samples, I especially like Kingfisher and Hollyhocks. x
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..hello Dave..yes it's a large photo, the queue extends further to the right, not sure what they're waiting for...
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Sat 17th Sep 2011 09:25
Hi Greg, thank you for kind comments on Teardrops in my Coffee, much appreciated. x
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Hi Andy, thank you for kind comments on Teardrops in my Coffee. You may be right, it would work without the first verse, considering this, thanks. xx
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Hello Ann, thank you very much for kind comments on my latest, much appreciated. xx
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Hi Dave, thank you for kind comments on Teardrops in my Coffee. Fortunately not autobiographical at all, thanks for asking. x
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Thanks for kind comments on Teardrops in my coffee, John, also your comment on my profile which made me laugh - typical man! Lol. x
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Howdy John
I was made up to find it there, was only looking for The Bidding and must have missed it first time around.
Aye, me other half is a Leonard Cohen nut, and played it to me :) I love that 'we are ugly but we have the music' line - making me fill up just thinking about it!
I shall look up that band you mention :)
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'Ey up, Monkey!
Thanks for reading Janis.
She was a bit special, wasn't she?
We have a kid in our village who reminds me of her. I first saw her about 3 years ago when she was 13 at a school talent competition. So shy she didn't speak or look up. When the music started this huge voice opened up from the bowels of the earth. I shuddered.
She's in a local band now called the Lucettes, which you can find on YouTube.
On another front (and pulling in the thread of sexy songs) did you know that Leonard Cohen's Chelsea Hotel was about his relationship with JJ?
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No, I have no liquidity problems at the moment, Ann! and I think I noted a comment from someone else that you have really been on top form recently. Concise and on the money. Keep it up!
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Hello Ann. Thanks. We've millions of Kizzys addicted to their mobile phones.
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Wow - thanks for recent kind comments on my poems Dave (you're not wanting to borrow a fiver are you?;)
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Hi John - thanks for commenting on 'There be fairies' - I must get you to relate the story you hinted about! :)
Best wishes, Dave
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Thu 15th Sep 2011 20:38
Hi John
hope you are back in poetical flow.
kindly thanks are yours
for your welcome comments
on my poem 'Wife'
both she and I thank you.
Patricia & Stef.
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Thu 15th Sep 2011 20:33
well chuffed Marianne
for your approval of 'Wife'
really appreciated.
Stefan.
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Hazel
Wed 21st Sep 2011 15:29
Hello Lynn thank you for your comments on my poems Raindrops and Through The Eyes of a Child, much appreciated. Thanks Hazel
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