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“They drive us to the sea. The sea drives us back. We are either slain or drowned.”  The Britons on the invading Anglo-Saxons.

 

It’s a mighty hard road where we carry our load

We’re darker in skin than the Ghost of Tom Joad

We flee from your war zones like rats in this hold

Your winter is hard and your welcome is cold.

 

We come from the Mahgreb, from Syria, Sudan

We bring few possessions - just the family Koran

We flee from the terrors that pervade the Middle East

We flee from destruction and seek only peace.

 

My father’s a tailor with needle and thread

And his was before him though both now are dead

One took a bullet to the back of his head

The other capsized and he drowned in the Med.

 

We died from starvation we died eating grass

We died from beheadings and we died from the gas

The lands that we died in each have their own name

But Europe or Asia we died just the same.

 

Look to my daughter and see how she cries

Then tell me you won’t help as you look in her eyes

We’re brothers and sisters and we bleed just the same

But show us your backs as you live with your shame.

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John Coopey

Mon 14th Mar 2016 08:16

Thanks, Jemima. I think you are right but it was very much a minority view at the time. You will remember that Cameron was defeated in the Commons on his proposal to take military action against Assad. I posted a piece at the time condemning the inactivity called "Not in my Name", which went against the grain of my fellow leftie chums.

Jemima Jones

Mon 14th Mar 2016 07:37

Hi John.Mine might be a simplistic view,but the Syria situation is definitely a case of closing the stable door after the horse has gone.Why oh why didn't the west take Assad and his cronies out as soon as they started showing signs of the evil they were about to inflict on their own people? They gave Saddam Hussein his come uppance,admittedly a little too late also,but at least his atrocious hands were off the controls.Assad should without any doubt whatsoever,be tried for war crimes.And if he is lets hope he gets what he so rightfully deserves.Thank you.Jemima.

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John Coopey

Sun 13th Mar 2016 23:36

Thanks for the comments, guys.
Martin and Tom - this is, in fact, a Woody Guthrie song originally about Dustbowl migrants exploited in California.
MC - there is no doubt that controls on security should not be compromised but it doesn't trump the moral obligation we "haves" have for the "have nots".
Harry - I have no issues at all with immigrants coming to the UK for self-improvement through work. They certainly have more gumption than our numpties.
Lynn - thank you for your thoughts, although, as I explained to Cynthia, my own view is that it lacks a bit in power.

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Lynn Dye

Sun 13th Mar 2016 22:00

Powerful stuff, John. Well written, and I agree with the sentiment.

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Harry O'Neill

Sun 13th Mar 2016 21:42

The last word in your poem John - plus the picture - tells us exactly what we should be feeling about our attitude to the plight of those poor Syrian refugees.

On M.C`S worry about `numbers` a personal (true) story:
Last year I was sitting in the Lady Chapel of Liverpool`s Catholic Cathedral (Part praying and part nodding off and
oblivious of various sounds coming from the open body of the Cathedral behind me) Suddenly there was a loud chant in a foreign tongue and I turned to find that the place was packed with Poles who had come to attend the Polish mass.

The Poles - I understand - are the most numerous of the present immigrants.

Mind, it`s a bit of an ask; expecting the modern Britain (Catholic or C of E) clinging on to his Bible like the Moslem
clings on to his Koran...(If only?).

(Cynthia is spot on about the aptness of the militant beat)

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Tom Harding

Sun 13th Mar 2016 20:21

Great stuff John. Very evocative, like a Woody Guthrie for modern times.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 13th Mar 2016 18:26

An emotive subject that takes the subject of humanity
and the needs of people in desperate circumstances as
a challenge to our own. No easy solution there or here,
The skill in the presentation is to be applauded - keeping
up the standard of blogs from this source. That said...
"Show us the Musselman who'll give up his Koran
When he seeks his refuge with a C of E man;
The rigidity of religion that comes in his wake
Will allow no adapting for his Christian host's sake" -
and therein lie the seeds of suspicion about "numbers".
and their effect on a national identity that has formed over the past 1000 years of recorded often blood-stained history here in this island nation - which saw the last
"mass migration" with Duke William's opportunistic invasion,
until British Empire social changes post-WW2.

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Martin Elder

Sun 13th Mar 2016 18:00

This is a great piece John that has a real lyric flow to it, rather like a traditional folk song.

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John Coopey

Sun 13th Mar 2016 17:54

Thank you Cynthia. My own view is that I didn't get the power in it I wanted. And the Anglo-Saxon reference was, I confess, an afterthought, albeit very apt.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 13th Mar 2016 17:00

Well done. A strong view expressed with impactive imagery, and using a sustained militant beat. I like the apt reference to the Britons and the Anglo-Saxons. History circles, and circles. As do mass migrations.

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