Together we go to the nuclear bunker in York.                                                               

You wear red and black how Goth.                                                                          

You’re my pipistrelle bat.                                                                                 

How special is our day out but we haven’t had it yet.                                                     

You’re my Goth friend.                                                                                                           

I want you by my side.                                                                                                    

I know you’re shy.                                                                                                                        

I mustn’t ruin it.                                                                                                                     

I think of you Karen my lady. 

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nick armbrister

Tue 28th Feb 2012 17:10

hmm well thanx the image of both words sums up a certain lady to me. on my word doc english uk setting it wont recognise the word i had to google the spelling lol.

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Antony Owen

Tue 28th Feb 2012 12:53

I've always liked the word pipistrelle after reading Michael Longley's poem of the same name. This is an unusual piece that doesn't give everything away. I don't think you needbat after pipistrelle though as it reads more confidently without it and only repeats what a pipistrelle is anyway.

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