A song of time

The sky shed tears, on that day

The day the wind took you away

The thunder of time, rumbled on

Playing a melancholic song

The lightning splitting my heart in two

A piece for me, 

                           a piece for you

One day we'll stitch it back together 

And then, my love, 

                                 we have forever 

Lovelosshealing

◄ Painted sky

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Ferris Ty Taylor

Mon 18th Sep 2023 09:03

Beautiful. Inspired use of shape as well. Actually hit me really hard

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 17th Sep 2023 21:21

I had to look that up, J.C. 😀 Gratias tibi ! 😁

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John Coopey

Fri 15th Sep 2023 22:58

Multum in parvo, Stephen.

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 15th Sep 2023 17:58

Thank you Stephen,Manish, & Russell for your lovely comments.

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Russell Jacklin

Wed 13th Sep 2023 15:53

Very moving😪

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Manish Singh Rajput

Wed 13th Sep 2023 14:50

Absolute brilliance, Stephen A. I loved it.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 13th Sep 2023 13:54

Concise and very moving, Stephen.

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