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Dave Bradley

Mon 31st Jan 2011 11:59

Hi Rachel

Hope all is well - are you taking some time off the site? We could do with some quality.

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Philipos

Mon 31st Jan 2011 11:33

Thanks for your comments on Crows Cate - much appreciated x

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Philipos

Mon 31st Jan 2011 11:29

Hi Melanie - liked your sample poem on bats in the cave great - thanks for your comments on Crows x

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Philipos

Mon 31st Jan 2011 10:23

Hi Ann - glad you were cheered up a little by Love Thy Clergy thanks for comments - was sorry to hear about your cat and hope you perk up soon x

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David Mac

Mon 31st Jan 2011 08:48

hey Melanie, cheers for the comment about my poem. hope it didn't bum you out too much. look forward to reading your words.

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David Cooke

Mon 31st Jan 2011 08:23

HI Andy thanks for the feedback. Yes, I seem to be doing some different things at the moment, about time maybe!

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Fkx

Mon 31st Jan 2011 06:57

Thanks you Elaine for reading and commenting on my poem (Musing on the Death of Poetry). You are much appreciated.

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Dave Bradley

Sun 30th Jan 2011 23:36

Hi Anthony

What's happened to you? You're missed. We could do with a bit of class round here

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Fkx

Sun 30th Jan 2011 23:08

Hello Cynthia, thanks for reading and responding to my poem 'Cravings.' I hope you do reread it and my accompanying "disclaimer" and see if it alters the first impression you had. Cheers. Frederick.

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john woodhouse

Sun 30th Jan 2011 21:47

Thank you for your kind comments Melanie, i appreciate the support greatly, oh and I love your hair !

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Sun 30th Jan 2011 21:17

Thank you for your feedback; it was very kind of you.All my poems are songs now as I felt I was better at writing songs than poetry - only took me three or four years to begin to understand the difference!Thanks again; it means a lot when someone of your experience takes the time to comment.

Thanks again - I put my stuff on http://www.mask-mp3.com/

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Sun 30th Jan 2011 21:14

Hi Kealan, The chat facility usually works if you are very patient. A 'typing' sound effect will occur when you get a reply. The temptation is to think "oh the bloody thing isnt working" and click off or try to reconnect, don't just hang on in there if poss , its not ideal I know. Win (Admin)

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Sun 30th Jan 2011 21:13

Hi Melanie, The chat facility usually works if you are very patient. A 'typing' sound effect will occur when you get a reply. The temptation is to think "oh the bloody thing isnt working" and click off or try to reconnect, don't just hang on in there if poss , its not ideal I know. Win (Admin)

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John Coopey

Sun 30th Jan 2011 20:37

Hello Melanie
Thanks for your kind thoughts on Senior, Haircut and my masterpiece of epic verse, Breakfast of Champions.
You say, up top, that you're not a poet; well - as you can see, neither am I.
So get posting.

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melanie coady

Sun 30th Jan 2011 19:45

i couldnt stop reading hun..lovely

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Sun 30th Jan 2011 19:39

thank you again Melanie(reshape)-very kind-my best regards to you and look forward to reading your fab work.x

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melanie coady

Sun 30th Jan 2011 19:33

brilliance in words hun

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Ashley Fisher

Sun 30th Jan 2011 19:28

Thanks Melanie, welcome to WOL! :)

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Philipos

Sun 30th Jan 2011 19:02

Hi Cynthia - thanks forgetting in touch re; Crows - I always appreciate your comments x

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Philipos

Sun 30th Jan 2011 18:58

Hi Kealan re: Crows - sorry to hear about your sexual disappointment - that can sometimes happen with a small bird - but thanks for getting in touch with your amusing comment

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John Coopey

Sun 30th Jan 2011 18:36

Hello Cate
Thanks for your thoughts on Dead Men's Shoes. I really do have shoes ranging from size 9 to 11 (not quite 8s to 12s).

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melanie coady

Sun 30th Jan 2011 18:26

lol stefan u shud def go red..why the hell not?!!lol thank u sooo much 4 ur kind comment hun

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melanie coady

Sun 30th Jan 2011 18:23

omg i loved it!!!

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melanie coady

Sun 30th Jan 2011 18:20

hun u shud def put up more,i read this one 3 times&still laughed out loud its brilliantly clever!!

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Sun 30th Jan 2011 18:15

Welcome and thanks Mel re 'me dads'poem..in your bio you say you are not a poet..! you could have fooled me-your sample is brill! very inspiring-as is your brill hair colour-do you think I should try it? lol! ta again Melanie.xx

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clarissa mckone

Sun 30th Jan 2011 17:53

Thanks Melanie

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melanie coady

Sun 30th Jan 2011 17:47

aw wow i really got sucked into ur sample

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melanie coady

Sun 30th Jan 2011 17:41

lol i love it hun

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melanie coady

Sun 30th Jan 2011 17:40

def go to open mic night hun..jesus th 1st poem sent shivers dwn me,really well done hun

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melanie coady

Sun 30th Jan 2011 16:56

aw thank you rachel im nervous about finaly leaving others see my poems never mind critique them lol so thank you

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Rachel Bond

Sun 30th Jan 2011 16:33

hi melanie, thanks for your comments on my poems.
i read eight neglected wonders...the foestus in the plegmatic bucket is a very strong image...turning the stomach. i would say that you are a poet, looking forward to reading more x

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kealan coady

Sun 30th Jan 2011 15:52

thanks c at least u get it

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Cate Greenlees

Sun 30th Jan 2011 12:22

Hi Lynn,thanks for your comment on Under The Stairs. Much appreciated.
Cate xx

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Cate Greenlees

Sun 30th Jan 2011 12:21

Hi Dave,thanks for your comment on Under The Stairs. I see the format has changed for the better on here, so I might come on it a bit more often now!!
Cate xx

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Cate Greenlees

Sun 30th Jan 2011 12:19

Hi John,thanks for your comment on Under The Stairs.
Cate xx

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Cate Greenlees

Sun 30th Jan 2011 12:18

Hi Elaine, thanks for your comment on Under The Stairs.
Cate xx

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David Mac

Sun 30th Jan 2011 11:55

Hi Tom, thanks for the nice comment. Ain't been on here for a while. Will try to fix that.
Mac

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Sun 30th Jan 2011 09:44

Brilliant, I love your early work. I think you can only get better. Subterraneanism makes me think of home and crazy cats.

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Chris Dawson

Sun 30th Jan 2011 00:34

Thanks Tom, for your comments on 'down among the mad' - glad you enjoyed it.
Very much liking your work to date too.
Cx

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Sat 29th Jan 2011 22:25

Hi Melanie, You are up and running, Looking forward to seeing more of your words on WOL. Winston

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Tom Harding

Sat 29th Jan 2011 19:43

I've been reading your poems, great stuff. hard and neat. 'somewhere the sun' rolls out beautifully.

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kealan coady

Sat 29th Jan 2011 17:50

i just wanna say thanks again man ive read your comments a couple of times now and it really means a lot i even touched myself

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 29th Jan 2011 17:37

Steve, sorry I missed Sale Waterside last Tuesday. I was in hospital.

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John Coopey

Sat 29th Jan 2011 17:27

Thanks for your thoughts on Dead Men's Shoes, Dave.
This is one of my earlier ones from a couple of years ago. I'm still just as parsimonious though.

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John Coopey

Sat 29th Jan 2011 17:25

Thanks for your thoughts on Dead Men's Shoes, Tom. This is, indeed, autobiographical. I do have shoes that vary from size 9 to 11.

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melanie coady

Sat 29th Jan 2011 14:21

i love the tea one..however i will not hear of slanderous tea hating comments as my blood has been infested with the little pyramid bags of love lol

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barrie singleton

Sat 29th Jan 2011 13:09

Thanks for comment on my poem. I have to smile - your lovely little sketch is worth 1000 words! Good to see you 'engage' when writing.

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Tom Harding

Sat 29th Jan 2011 12:47

no not too obvious at all. i could only tell -i'm thirty now- because i spent my early twenties incessantly reading his stuff and trying to ape his style. it was worthless though as his voice wasn't mine. his arrogance, sheer force i couldn't muster. he does encourage a freedom though, which you have. i like your writing, keep at it. you have the movement and suprising phrase which, as your style develops, will become your 'voice'

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David Cooke

Sat 29th Jan 2011 12:30

Hi Tom Thanks for the comment and nice to 'meet' you. I'll check out yours when I get a moment to give them some proper atention.

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David Cooke

Sat 29th Jan 2011 12:29

Hi Greg Thanks for the comment. You never know where the next poem is coming from, but Antoinette was a gift from heaven!

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