Hi Bad Language. Welcome to WOL. Winston

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Hi Tony, Welcome to Write Out Loud, Winston

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Hi Laura, the folk-club you refer to is called "The red lion." It's in Newburgh just below Parbold. Feel free to drop in any Monday night. (except bank holidays)it starts at 8.30pm. Straight up the stairs. (Room at the top.)

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Hi Melanie - thanks for the comment over 'End of Summer II' I'm glad you like it, - pretty well sums the weather up round at the moment - lol xx

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As I've said to Ann, my first suit for eleven years. Yes we had a lovely day and the weather was stunning too. That's them all gone now, all four!

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My daughter got married last Friday and I had to buy a suit to give her away, my first one for eleven years. Haven't got many decent pictures of myself, usually on holiday and with sunglasses on.

By the way absolutely loved the last poem Ann, the weight of sentiment was bang on the money and the last lines were wonderful. Great work.

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evening Lynn.

re youtube-no not that one you mention
this is one where it really looks
like the dog is talking.

the guys voice is teasing him about food

'dont tease the dog'

logging off now to sort a poem out for later.

cheers

Stef/Trish.xxxx

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Yes! I think you are an altogether bad lad..ha ha ha ha...

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hey-angel eyes!
muchas gracias re-frustration.

have a peaceful night.

Stef&Trish

xx

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Thanks Ann for comment on the Cuddle Chair. xx

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Hi Dave, (John Doe) so many of these characters around and some actually began life with promising upbringings. Who knows where the decline began? Thanks for commenting.

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Ha - do you dare me to post Chlamydia? That should grab attention. I should do it before they kill Gadaffi - if they haven't already done so - I'm a bit behind on the news...

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cheers for the info re Fanbox.
will look in later

ta Dave

P&S.

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Lynn,
try this for a laugh-
on youtube type in these exact words
-don,t tease the dog-

its absolutely hilarious!

(try and get Benji to copy it)

Trish'n'Stef.xx

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Hi Lynn, thank you for your comments, they are much appreciated. It pointed me towards your work too, I like the political awareness in your writing, especially When the World Stood Still. makes you wonder if things run better when there is no government!

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I'm glad you liked John Doe, Ann, thanks for saying so.

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hopefully see you at the Tudor?..x

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thanks Ann!! NOT ironic, just bloody careless!

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andy - many thanks as always for reading and making comment x

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Hi Kealan - ta very for reading and making comment

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I like The Fall very much hence the title

thanks for taking the time to read and make comment on my poem

steve x

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ANY...are fine by us Aunty Lynn!

off for scoff,

later dude.

Buggerlugs and Trish.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Evenin Ma Dye
all ok?

love

Stef&Tricia.xx

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Thanks for the YouTube info on Bert Williams, John -- amazed by the quality of the recording, and how fresh his material still feels today.
I reckon your little recording's up there with it though!

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Hi Ann, 'Reptillian' always a gift to stumble upon a surprise of nature as you did with the black lizard and I the grass snake so close. A real thrill and heart-warming at the same time. Thanks for the comments.

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Thanks for the comments on A Wonderful Opportunity. If you want to check it out Bert Williams is on YouTube with an audio of his (superior) original entiled Somebody Else Not Me.

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Thanks Dave. I suspect the reference to Our Gert in A Wonderful Opportunity gave its authorship away!
The real vintage though is Bert Williams's - worth checking out on You Tube.
Curiously he blacked up as a Minstrel despite the fact that he was, himself, black!

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hi Dave.

Thanks for the comment on my Chanel poem..some days are made for feeling good inside..

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Thanks Ann...it was a good day!..

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I hope you returned home with more than half a car!

Thanks Isobel for finding my Chanel original :)

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Lynn, thanks so much for commenting on my Chanel poem..appreciated :)

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I like the new photo - your last one always looked, at first glance, like a large pair of breasts! (Nothing wrong with that of course!)

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Vienna Review
http://www.katfrancois.com/#/poetry-review/4546395630

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Hi Greg, thanks for your comments there may be more on the way, its quite an enjoyable exercise. Win

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Everyone at my writing group liked your poem very much - and were intrigued to find out what a villanelle was! Most of the group stick to writing prose you see. Thanks a lot for letting me read it to them.

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Hi Ann Thanks for clever comment on Piano which I hadn't thought of myself. In fact she was very quiet and unassuming which is another reason it was all so shocking.

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Hi Elaine; - thanks for the comment on ticket to ride it was wrote on a summers day which i guess sums up the british summertime - lol but thanks for the comment again - hope you are good - speak soon xx

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thanks cynthia for the comment here on the end of summer .. it's one to think bout which i hadn't thought about so all suggestions are welcome.. hope you are well - andy n x

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Hi Ann, so glad you enjoyed 'Reminiscence' and for letting me know.

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You're confusing the issue Cynthia...unless otherwise stated-(as in +1 or -1)1+1 always equals 2, as I qualified in my remark re 'dialectics'. Re 'the egg'. You are confusing a simple statement of fact with the qualifier of morality- I said: 'If I take an egg and crush it in my hand- it is an event- indisputable- and only becomes a matter for 'dispute' when a sentient being 'intervenes''. Murder is also an event and is covered by my initial statement.

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These are very good. You have an excellent eye for imagery and a good ear for sound. I see a lot going on here, and admire it in one so young.

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Hi Cynthia, thanks for the continued comments. Because each word was treated separately (Cut and pasted if you like) I don't think this piece says anything about football. Maybe that Mr McCarra uses a colourful vocabulary to report it but no more. His match reports would not sit comfortably in a red top for these reasons and this is partly why I like them. Win x

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Hi Bernard, Welcome to WOL. Winston

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Ann,
I'd be delighted and honoured for you to read my poem at your meeting.
Best wishes
Dave

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Thanks for commenting on 'Shades', John. Much appreciated. Goldenrods very common in my neck of the woods.

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Thank you, Winston :)

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Hi Jeff;

thanks for the comment over 'My hometown'. Changes noted and made... Have been playing around on keyboard with this also.. Wouldn't mind having a go at recording this for our sessions at Dave's soon (even if it doesn't make the EP)..

see you later

Andy N

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Hi Elaine;

Thanks for the comment over My Hometown.
Oddly enough the last line which seems to be going down so well was the line which was the one I was most worried about, but pleased you liked it.

See you soon (I am almost fighting fit now)

Cheers x

Andy N xx

P.S. - The piece is about my love affair with my hometown (Stretford).

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Hi Antony;

Thanks for the comment over My Hometown. Must admit it's probably my favourite poem out of my recent few, and it's one that has surprised me so many people have liked as I thought it would be too personal, but clearly not - lol.

Hope you are good

Speak Soon

Andy N

P.S. - The piece is about my love affair with my hometown (Stretford).

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Hi Isobel;

Thanks for the comment over 'My hometown'.. Oddly enough the last line was the line I was most worried about, but that's the one everybody is loving so clearly I was my own worse judge there - lol.

Hope you are good

See you soon x

Andy N x


P.S. - The piece is about my love affair with my hometown (Stretford).

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