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Sun 13th Nov 2011 17:10

Wonderful, I laughed at using 1st line, done it so many times, you took me away to exotica, very nice,Welcome to wol, I just picked you randomly x

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Sun 13th Nov 2011 17:06

Uni-fawn haha you certainly rhymed this, x

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Sun 13th Nov 2011 17:03

I love Requiem for a daisy? and how you didn't rhyme petticoat? very clever, What is smote? x

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Charlotte Henson

Sun 13th Nov 2011 15:51

Hey Andy, thought I'd let you know that the WOL Gig Guide description for the 15th has now removed all mention of me altogether o_e

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 13th Nov 2011 12:53

Nick, I'm lagging way behind my usual activity on this site, especially reading. Thanks for your comment on my profile. I look forward to reading your work, on an afternoon dedicated to catching up a bit. Your profile picture and 'bio' is totally captivating. Welcome to WOL!

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Jonny Rodgers

Sun 13th Nov 2011 12:51

Hey Isobel, it's that Jonny Rodgers indeed. I'll join the group now and swell the numbers. Cheers!

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 13th Nov 2011 06:34

Hi Lynne - thanks for commenting on my Bucket poem. I guess I imagined some gollum-like creature, sort of human - scurrying round the London slums in Victoria's day, if I imagined anything. It's just a load of words really, and YOU try writing a poem about a bucket! :)

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Rachel Bond

Sat 12th Nov 2011 23:56

thanks for comments on 'one night stands' im glad it sparked an idea, thats great x

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Hazel

Sat 12th Nov 2011 14:37

Thank you Larisa for your comment on Just give me a cowboy poet.
Thanks Hazel

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Isobel

Fri 11th Nov 2011 17:10

Yoo hoooooo. Would you be the same Johnny Rodgers who performed at the Tudor last night? Welcome to WOL and to the Tudor. There is a Tudor friends group you can join on here also. I think there are only about 4 peeps in it despite it being one of the best attended venues in the North West :) You will probably find a link to it on John Togher's page. x

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Laura Taylor

Fri 11th Nov 2011 14:21

Hi Darren

Just wondered why you were posting your poems in the discussion forums, rather than as blogs? When you log in, there's a link at the top right hand of the page saying 'make blog entry' :)

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Robert Goodier

Fri 11th Nov 2011 09:47

My GOD!!!! Where the heck did this hideous photo get taken???!!! Jeez, it doesn't flatter me whatosever. Thanks Winston, it will do for now until I can find a more flattering photo - oh, and add a sample of my work too.

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Fri 11th Nov 2011 09:38

Hi there, Welcome to Write Out Loud. Winston

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winston plowes

Thu 10th Nov 2011 17:41

Hi Marianne

Still writing old fasioned sloppy stuff occasionally. Win x

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Nick Coleman

Thu 10th Nov 2011 16:53

Hello Cynthia. Just found your poetry and had an enjoyable and thoughtful time reading it.

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Thu 10th Nov 2011 14:52

haha - it says more about you than me ;)
(kissing gate)

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Laura Taylor

Thu 10th Nov 2011 14:49

Haha Houston - funny description there! Must admit, I had to turn it off myself within about 60 seconds! :D

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winston plowes

Thu 10th Nov 2011 10:57

Hi Tom, Its the Iris for me but I do like lilies too. I had never heard of the NYTC till now that is! just had a quick listen to intercontinental track drift though. I think my cats run them a close second if you threw them into a small room full of musical intruments and scatterd a few flakes of tuna around the place. H

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Poets Corner

Wed 9th Nov 2011 20:09

A Poem entitled 'The Pull' by Graham Robinson (after divorce)

You go into a pub a club or a bar
it doesn't matter where you are-
you are looking good and smelling fine
perhaps you drinking some beer or wine-
you look around for that encouraging smile
then you sit quietly and wait for a while-
suddenly you catch a lady's fleeting glance
Yes! there is eye contact, it's not just chance-
you see her breasts rising both up and down
look she is smiling at you there is no frown-
you walk over slowly, smile and say Hi or hello
she thinks Oh bloody hell here we go-
you think she reminds you of your ex
she thinks you are like most men and just want sex-
you both feel that vital chemistry straight away
and you know that it is only a matter of time before you share that overnight stay!

(From my book 'Observations On Life' - available from Graham or www.countyvise)..this poem was read out by Graham on City talk FM.

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Wed 9th Nov 2011 19:36

Hi Rob,

I have pasted in a temp photo of you for now as you said you were having a few probs. Just replace it and add some samples when you can. Winston

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Philipos

Wed 9th Nov 2011 16:55

Hi Nick, 'Elegy for Youth' many thanks for the kind comments.

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Nick Coleman

Tue 8th Nov 2011 18:45

Thanks for kind comment. You keep on writing - and I do also like the illustrations

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Tue 8th Nov 2011 17:19

hi winston,
thanks for comment it was my first attempt. Thanks too for suggesting the "found" website, along the same lines "Snakeskin" online poetry are canvassing for found poems for their Feb edition.

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Tue 8th Nov 2011 15:56

You have retrieved me from suspended animation....
tax reasons you see, I have to spend a certain time dead.... now you have awakened the beast you
must suffer the consequences of my poetry ha ha...
now where was I .... Oh yes ,The dank and drear... forsook thine rampasitodius flotulating mmmm...
Hope you are well Lady Lucan ;-) XXXX

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Deborah Jordan Bailey

Tue 8th Nov 2011 13:01

thanks Dave, no, it's the right one.. it's all in the lyrics.. :) thanks again, Debz x

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Neil Fawcett

Tue 8th Nov 2011 12:06

Sorry Laura I've only just seen your message from Nov 2nd. I'm glad that you're getting the better of things and you're probably right that when I wrote that I was probably in a similar frame of mind. I'll try for the next Tudor.

Cheers.

Neil:)

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John Coopey

Tue 8th Nov 2011 09:22

Thanks for your comments about "The Man and the Boy". Yes, there's no doubt that between Mackay and Bremner my allegiance is as clear as between the fire and the fire brigade.

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chris stevenson

Tue 8th Nov 2011 06:35

..hello Marianne..many thanks for reading, and your inspiring comment..chris.

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Mon 7th Nov 2011 18:05

thanks anthony - sometimes I reckon it's just good to do "other" things = invigorating. I think this is why a lot of folks like camping - it's getting you "out of the house" for a bit.

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John Coopey

Mon 7th Nov 2011 09:28

Hello MC. Thanks for your thoughts on "Vertav alle ze vishiz gon?".
This is one the otter/mink didn't get - it died before it got it!
I got given 4 like this about 5 years ago. Only got 1 left now.

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Sun 6th Nov 2011 23:19

thank you for the update Lynn.
you had a really nice time from what you say.

and a lovely welcome home from Mr.B!

Thanks Lynn.

Tricia and Stef.xx

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jean lucy thompson

Sun 6th Nov 2011 22:10

Thanks Peter for your comments Like your poetry very much Just read Wild Cat and the photo well; I can relate with that I carried a poor cat off the main road to a safe place The memory of it is still with me

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Peter Asher

Sun 6th Nov 2011 21:50

Like your sample Jean. I too am drawn to the spiritual element of poetry, but mine aren't as accessable as yours. Well done.

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Terry White

Sun 6th Nov 2011 21:38

Hey Dave, thanks for reading and commenting.

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Sun 6th Nov 2011 20:49

Good evening Lynn.

so!
you had a 'smashing' time away-haha!

spooky that you two were on hols
the same time as us.

(great minds and all that!)

am I right in presuming
you were on your canal boat?
I,m sure you once told me you had one-?

want to thank you sincerely
for your comments on-
'Tumbling/Fountainous/All talk'

Patricia says hi,and thanks too.

love to you and Colin.xx

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Peter Asher

Sun 6th Nov 2011 18:51

Liked 'Breakfast Pots'. Humorous topped with a light sprinkling of pathos. But really.. it struck me as sad and doesn't it sum us all up!

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Dave Bradley

Sun 6th Nov 2011 09:23

Hi Ann

Thanks for commenting. It says "turning on"! The original was indeed, something along the lines of turn on, tune in, drop out but I couldn't get all that in. But as it is it does make sense, honest. x

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chris stevenson

Sun 6th Nov 2011 00:48

..thanks Laura..most lyrics about my travelling have been songs..bought my first guitar in Lagos..must use more images..cheers.



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Mick Waring

Sat 5th Nov 2011 10:51

.. thanks John ... this bird is from a sanctuary in Chorley ... and not the biggest !

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Philipos

Fri 4th Nov 2011 22:31

Hello John, re; Chattering of Twites, I'm here in the UK (Woking) when soon after hearing their unmistakable sound (which had everybody peering into the tree)I got home and switched on the telly and was astonished to hear the same sound albeit I did not get a good visual because of the dark. I am a member of a wildlife group and will run it by someone if I get the chance. We are getting some unusual birds here though having seen cormorants in canals etc. We also have quite a variety of hawks. Appreciate your comment and sorry to hear about your fish stocks.

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Fri 4th Nov 2011 22:14

Aaaw! loved that, laughed out loud! I think I know someone like that? luv him x

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Fri 4th Nov 2011 21:48

Christmas time! we do reminisce? missed love ones,I'm glad it's not cynical x

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steve mellor

Fri 4th Nov 2011 15:33

Dear Dear Dearest Laura
Your comments are very much appreciated.
I wish I were a seducated as you :-)) I shall now go and look at Blake, and then contemplate my navel
Steve

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Fri 4th Nov 2011 14:30

Hello Chris,

Been reading your work in admiration - you have an exceptional gift.

Marianne

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Fri 4th Nov 2011 12:27



Topped....Topped Sugar Topped tumbler LOL xx

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winston plowes

Fri 4th Nov 2011 10:10

Hi Mariane, I just couldn't help joining in. Win x

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Greg Freeman

Fri 4th Nov 2011 00:26

Thanks for your comments on The Clackety-Clack, Gareth. Congratulations again on Weyfarers; I've tried them two or three times without success.

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Gareth Writer-Davies

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 23:14

Thanks for the advice Greg; bit new to this.....

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Thu 3rd Nov 2011 19:33

I'm glad you found me? I'm going to read your poems xx

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Thu 3rd Nov 2011 17:46

... commas, full stops... what's that then?
thanks Coopey (geoff)

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