<Deleted User> (7073)
Tue 8th Nov 2011 15:56
You have retrieved me from suspended animation....
tax reasons you see, I have to spend a certain time dead.... now you have awakened the beast you
must suffer the consequences of my poetry ha ha...
now where was I .... Oh yes ,The dank and drear... forsook thine rampasitodius flotulating mmmm...
Hope you are well Lady Lucan ;-) XXXX
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Deborah Jordan Bailey
Tue 8th Nov 2011 13:01
thanks Dave, no, it's the right one.. it's all in the lyrics.. :) thanks again, Debz x
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Sorry Laura I've only just seen your message from Nov 2nd. I'm glad that you're getting the better of things and you're probably right that when I wrote that I was probably in a similar frame of mind. I'll try for the next Tudor.
Cheers.
Neil:)
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Thanks for your comments about "The Man and the Boy". Yes, there's no doubt that between Mackay and Bremner my allegiance is as clear as between the fire and the fire brigade.
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..hello Marianne..many thanks for reading, and your inspiring comment..chris.
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<Deleted User> (7212)
Mon 7th Nov 2011 18:05
thanks anthony - sometimes I reckon it's just good to do "other" things = invigorating. I think this is why a lot of folks like camping - it's getting you "out of the house" for a bit.
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Hello MC. Thanks for your thoughts on "Vertav alle ze vishiz gon?".
This is one the otter/mink didn't get - it died before it got it!
I got given 4 like this about 5 years ago. Only got 1 left now.
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<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 6th Nov 2011 23:19
thank you for the update Lynn.
you had a really nice time from what you say.
and a lovely welcome home from Mr.B!
Thanks Lynn.
Tricia and Stef.xx
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Thanks Peter for your comments Like your poetry very much Just read Wild Cat and the photo well; I can relate with that I carried a poor cat off the main road to a safe place The memory of it is still with me
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Like your sample Jean. I too am drawn to the spiritual element of poetry, but mine aren't as accessable as yours. Well done.
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Terry White
Sun 6th Nov 2011 21:38
Hey Dave, thanks for reading and commenting.
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<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 6th Nov 2011 20:49
Good evening Lynn.
so!
you had a 'smashing' time away-haha!
spooky that you two were on hols
the same time as us.
(great minds and all that!)
am I right in presuming
you were on your canal boat?
I,m sure you once told me you had one-?
want to thank you sincerely
for your comments on-
'Tumbling/Fountainous/All talk'
Patricia says hi,and thanks too.
love to you and Colin.xx
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Liked 'Breakfast Pots'. Humorous topped with a light sprinkling of pathos. But really.. it struck me as sad and doesn't it sum us all up!
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Hi Ann
Thanks for commenting. It says "turning on"! The original was indeed, something along the lines of turn on, tune in, drop out but I couldn't get all that in. But as it is it does make sense, honest. x
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..thanks Laura..most lyrics about my travelling have been songs..bought my first guitar in Lagos..must use more images..cheers.
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.. thanks John ... this bird is from a sanctuary in Chorley ... and not the biggest !
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Philipos
Fri 4th Nov 2011 22:31
Hello John, re; Chattering of Twites, I'm here in the UK (Woking) when soon after hearing their unmistakable sound (which had everybody peering into the tree)I got home and switched on the telly and was astonished to hear the same sound albeit I did not get a good visual because of the dark. I am a member of a wildlife group and will run it by someone if I get the chance. We are getting some unusual birds here though having seen cormorants in canals etc. We also have quite a variety of hawks. Appreciate your comment and sorry to hear about your fish stocks.
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<Deleted User> (9801)
Fri 4th Nov 2011 22:14
Aaaw! loved that, laughed out loud! I think I know someone like that? luv him x
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<Deleted User> (9801)
Fri 4th Nov 2011 21:48
Christmas time! we do reminisce? missed love ones,I'm glad it's not cynical x
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steve mellor
Fri 4th Nov 2011 15:33
Dear Dear Dearest Laura
Your comments are very much appreciated.
I wish I were a seducated as you :-)) I shall now go and look at Blake, and then contemplate my navel
Steve
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Hello Chris,
Been reading your work in admiration - you have an exceptional gift.
Marianne
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<Deleted User> (6315)
Fri 4th Nov 2011 12:27
Topped....Topped Sugar Topped tumbler LOL xx
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Hi Mariane, I just couldn't help joining in. Win x
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Thanks for your comments on The Clackety-Clack, Gareth. Congratulations again on Weyfarers; I've tried them two or three times without success.
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Thanks for the advice Greg; bit new to this.....
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<Deleted User> (9801)
Thu 3rd Nov 2011 19:33
I'm glad you found me? I'm going to read your poems xx
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<Deleted User> (7212)
Thu 3rd Nov 2011 17:46
... commas, full stops... what's that then?
thanks Coopey (geoff)
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thanks for your comment on 'dont paint..' transceptional! xx
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Unveiling of new statue of Sappho this Saturday at noon. Will be reading a poem along with two colleagues inspired by Sappho.
If you are near Letchworth, come along!
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steve mellor
Thu 3rd Nov 2011 16:27
Good afternoon (again)
your comments, as ever, are much appreciated. the ramblings of one returning to childhood are just that, but it makes one realise the things that one took for granted perhaps
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steve mellor
Thu 3rd Nov 2011 16:12
Hi Ann
Pleased you enjoyed 'Childhood'.
I've found that just about anything and sneezing is painful. I have (on the odd occasion) sneezed whilst breaking ****, and that is unbelievably painful. You don't know which end to concentrate on :-))
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steve mellor
Thu 3rd Nov 2011 14:52
Hi M.C.
Absolutely no apologies necessary. The end result was still the self-interest of the Union man.
Strawbs? - You won't get me I'm part of the Union'
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Hello, Winston! Thank you very much for commenting on "I've learned" . I've made some changes there and would like to know your opinion. When you have time, please read the changes.
With warmest wishes,
Larisa
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Hello, John! Thank you very much for commenting on "I've learned" . I've made some changes there and certainly would like to know your opinion. When you have time, please read the changes.
With warmest wishes,
Larisa
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Hi Emma - lovely to meet you in Wolverhampton. I love your poems! I'm Maturing as a Poet made me laugh like a nutter.
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Check out: http://www.smokestack-books.co.uk
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Philipos
Thu 3rd Nov 2011 10:16
'Undermined', I thought you were referring to the goo ants converted their prey into. Gourmand slobbering jelly eh? OK we'll go with that.
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Hello Greg. Yes, you're right "Now, then" is a Yorkshire greeting similar to "Sithee!" and you're right it is more a tone of challenge than of caution. I could imagine two stags greeting each other that way!
When I first came to Barnsley as a 22 year old I nearly fainted when my landlady called me "cock". A boy can get the wrong signal!
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Hi John. I always thought "now then" was just a kind of Yorkshire greeting, like "hello", but with more of a challenge to it.
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You are a woman of great insight Laura. ;o)
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Philipos
Wed 2nd Nov 2011 20:22
Hello John, 'Undermined' guess the insect world is pretty gory eh? A sort of mass Hoovering device for recycling. Can't help being mesmerised by it though - often think of comparisons with human heirarchies.
Thanks for commenting.
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Philipos
Wed 2nd Nov 2011 20:18
Hello Ann, 'Te Deum' much obliged for the kind words.
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Wed 2nd Nov 2011 18:40
Dear Elaine,
Thanks for the comment on the haikku - absolutely loved the last verse of your poem 'The Old World' (and that's not something I get to say very often...)oh dear that sounds so .. (word beginning with 'p')...parsimonious but it's a beautiful stanza
Steve Smith
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Am liking your biog Tommy :) :)
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Morning Neil
Thanks for your note. I'm getting there, but it's all been very 'on top' for a few weeks, one fucking horrible thing after another, and it all kinda battered my head into submission. But - my chi is rising with each day :) I just saw very familiar thought patterns in your poem :)
Next Tudor?
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Hi Ann
Thank you for commenting. The competitions have only ever been a matter of individual initiative. If you wanted to get the ball rolling on another round, the field is open! Though running the open mic evening may be taking as much time and energy as you have for poetry. Good luck with that.
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the thirst becomes you...
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Education. I work part time as a TA so hopefully they won't bug me too much! I'm not going to lose sleep over it.
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<Deleted User> (9635)
Tue 8th Nov 2011 17:19
hi winston,
thanks for comment it was my first attempt. Thanks too for suggesting the "found" website, along the same lines "Snakeskin" online poetry are canvassing for found poems for their Feb edition.
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